Write a story beginning with:

"I saw a ray 光線 of light in my room. It came from the window and looked like an arrow. I was curious 好奇…"

Life of a Football - amended

Hi, my name is Kiki. I am a football. I always run in the football field during the sunny days. I live in a storeroom for about one month. My best friend Horry, a cup, said yesterday morning, “I am very cold!” I asked, “Why?” He said, “I was put in the refrigerator, so that my owner could drink fruit juice coldly from my body! I feel very cold now!” Kenny was a red handkerchief. He said proudly to Horry,“I am the best on Earth! I can help you dry up, but you need to give me some money!” Horry was angry, and they disliked each other. Baby was a beautiful green handkerchief. She was very generous, she helped Horry to dry up.

In the afternoon, everyone needed to work except me and other sports equipments. It was sunny and hot today, and I needed to exercise. I went to the football field with my owner happily. I thought I could make many friends. I made a good friend today. He was a red and write football. He was called John. His owner was my owner’s friend. After the football match, some football players were angry, some were crying, some were happy. My owner had won the match, so he was happier than before.

When I came back home with my owner, everyone wanted to know who won the match,. After my owner gave me a bath, I dried myself. I went to the storeroom and told everything to my best friends. I had become a football commentator. They felt excited and entertained. Finally, I said, “Our owner used his feet to kick me to the gantry. Although I was very tried, I was happy. Our owner has won the match and at the end, it was a 1:0!”

Everyone had slept, but Horry did not sleep. He said, “My owner said I was very old and want to throw me away.” I said, “You don’t need to worry, our owner does not have too much money, if things could be used, he will not throw them away.”

Ten years later, I was very old and could not run with my owner, so he put me into the storeroom and I could not play with him anymore. But I could remember the happy times. I needed to sleep for a long time.

Football live

Hi, my name is Kiki. I am a football. I always run in the football field in the sunny day. Yesterday day morning, my best friend Horry, he was a cup. He said, “I am very cold!” I asked, “Why?” He said, “I gave put in the refrigerator, so owner could drink the fruit juice coldly into my body! Now, I feel very cold!” Kenny was a red handkerchief. He said proudly,“I am the best things on the world! I can help you to clear the water, but you need to give me some money!” Horry was angry, so they disliked each other. Baby was a beautiful green handkerchief. She was very generous, she helped cup to clear up his water.

Afternoon was come, everyone needed to work among me and some things which was about sport. Today was sunny and hot, I needed to have a sport. I went to the football field with my owner happily. I could have many friends. Today, I made a good friends, he was a red and write football. He called John. His owner was my owner friends. I could listen someone was angry, someone cry, someone was happy. Today, my owner wins the football match, so he was happy more than before.

When I came back home with my owner, very one wanted to know the match, who win. After my owner gave me a bath, I gave clear my water on my body. I went to the bedroom and told all the things to my best friends. Now I became a football speak aside. I said sincerity, they felt excited and did not felt bored. Finally I said, “Owner used his lag to play me to the gantry. Although I was very tried, but I was happy. So owner won the football match and the end, it became 1:0!”

Everyone was sleep, but Horry (cup) did not sleep. He said, “My owner said a was old and want to throw me away.” I said, “You no need to worry, our owner was not have to much money, if the things could use, he will not throw it.”

Ten years, I was very old and I could not run with owner, so owner put me to the storeroom and I could not play with owner, but I could remember. I needed to sleep to a long time.

Write a story using personification 擬人化. Think of yourself as an object 物體 or animal.

(450 words)

Alex Was Famous - amended by Phyllis

BBQ newspaper 7th June, 2009 Sunday
A child called Law Chun Yin (Alex) solved a criminal case in Brazil. Alex was only twelve years old, but he had learnt a lot after this. This story is about a case of Amazon Rainforest airplane disappearance. Alex was so famous around the world. This story became a story book and a movie. He could be a leading role in the movie with a famous movie star called Jacky. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~!
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This was very amazing, I was very happy, too. It was because I could be a famous child in the film industry. And when I went to school by bus, many people said I was very clever and wanted to have my autograph. I was very happy. When I went to school, too many reporters took many photos of me. My principal Mr. Lee called me to his offices and said I would get a“Clever Child”award on Monday. When I went into my classroom, my best friend Johnny asked, “How much money did you get to be the leading role of the movie?’ I answered, “I got $193,000” Other children said I should buy them books, food, game points, cars, NDS, PSP, and many other things. I thought, “Fame is not a good thing!”

After school, some children in another class who did not like me sat by me on the bus and said, “Alex , you are my best friend, can you buy a game card for me?” I was very angry and thought, “He has a lot of money in his wallet. When I was not famous, he always said I was stupid and told me not to play online games.”

I never said anything and they only sat in another bench. When I went back home, some reporters took some photos of me. I was very annoyed. Then I ran back home.

I ate a lot for dinner. My mummy and my daddy did not need to work. But we could eat a lot of good food. When I was eating, my mother shouted, “Quick, get up! No time for you to waste!” I woke up and thought that everything was a dream. And I later read the newspaper about the Amazon Rainforest airplane disappearance, I thought, “Oh, it was true…”

Alex Was Famous

BBQ newspaper 7-4-2009 Sunday

A child called Law Chun Yin (Alex) clear up a criminal case in Brazil. Alex was only twelve years old, but he could learn much common sense. This story is about a case of Amazon Rainforest airplane disappearance. Alex this child was so famous on the world. This story be came a story book and a movie. He could be a leading role in the movie with famous man called Lai Ur. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~!

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This was very amazing, I was very happy too. It was because I could be a famous child in the filmdom. And when I went to school by bus, many people said I was very clever and wanted to have my signature. I was very happy. When I went to school, to many reporter take many photo of me. My principle Mr. Lee called me to principle room and said you with got a “The clever child”aware in Monday (Day C). When I went to my classroom, my friends- Johnny question, “How many money did you have when you be the leading role in the movie?’ I said, “I could got $193,000” Another children said he or she wanted me to buy book, food, dim, car, Nds, Psp, and too many things. I think “Famous was not a good thinks” After school, the children who was not like my in another classroom sat with me by bus and said, “Alex , you are my best friend, can you buy a game card for me” I was very angry and think, “He had many money when I was not famous and he always said I was no clever don’t play CS onlion game( A game of firearm) and don’t play Tales Runner onlion (a game of running)

I never said anything and the only sat in another chair. When I went back home, I needed to walk on the less than honorable or just path. Some reporter take some photo of me too. A was very impatient. After I walk on the less than honorable or just path, I went back home.

At home, I ate the dinner of many food. My mummy and my daddy no need to work. But we could ate many good food. When I ate it …

My mother said, “Quick get up! Not time could you butter one's bread on both sides.” I know it was a drum. And I watch the newspaper about Amazon Rainforest airplane disappearance, Law Chun Yin I think, “Oh- it was…”

The Mystery of Amazon - amended by Phyllis

Today, I went to my father’s friend’s house with my father. It was in Brazil and we planned to watch a football match. Football was my favorite sport. I thought it was the most exiting match, because Brazil was good at playing football. We went there by aeroplane. We could see the Amazon Rainforest.

When we went to the plane, a boy yelled, “This airplane has make too many people die, do you want to drive it?” I was very scared. The plane got off, and I saw the boy looked like very frightened too.

After a few hours, we went to the Amazon Rainforest, the boy cried, “We will die on this airplane!” The flight attendant said, “He always goes to Brazil and Hong Kong by this airplane, but everyone on the plane has disappeared, except he and the people who worked on this airplane!” Suddenly, the airplane flew down quickly, the boy said, “The demon is killing us!” Everyone was afraid and did not know what they could do. The pilot shouted, “We will land on the Amazon Rainforest! All passengers should get off the plane!”

The other passengers did not take anything, but I took all my belongings. After a few minutes, the airplane disappeared. Only a flight attendant got off the airplane. She said, “When I went to get some water, I saw that the airplane caught a fire. It was a very old plane, and it was not the one we was on.

I looked around and found that the passengers had already left. I could only find one exit. I said to myself, ‘Oh no, I should use the boat or ship to get out!” When I sat under a tree, I heard someone singing. When I went near that person, I saw a house and twelve people, some were Hong Kong people and some were Brazilians. I asked them, “I am a victim. Why are you here?” A child said, “I am a victim too! My family’s things got lost on the airplane, so we went out of the plane. Then the airplane caught a fire.”

I knew what happened. I made a boat and went to Brazil. I told them everything about the airplane: first, the pilots deliberately landed the plane quickly. Then, when we got off the plane, the airhostess deliberately took us to the older plane. After that, the pilots went back to Brazil and said that the airplane disappeared, when the airplane was in fact in the Amazon Rainforest. We could not see it because there was an airport. The evidence was that the river was not on the map.

At the end, the criminals were arrested and I watched the football match with father happily.

Happy Father's Day - amended by Phyllis

22ndJune, 2009 Monday rainy and cold

Yesterday is Father’s Day. For Mother’s Day we ate European cuisine. Yesterday we had Japanese food.

I went to the swimming pool to swim yesterday morning with my father. We swam there happily. After we swam, we played underwater.

Afterwards, we went to a Chinese restaurant and ate some dim sum. We ate it happily because it was Father’s Day.

Then, we went back home. When it was two o’clock, I went to Jusco with my sister and Phyllis to buy some materials for cooking. We bought some seaweeds, soy sauce, rice, noodles, wasabi, corn, vegetables, ice-cream, strawberries and sweets.

After we bought the food, we went to grandmother’s house. I worked with my sister and Phyllis although I did not do too much.

We had to make sushi. First, we needed to cook rice. We used seaweed to wrap the rice. After that, we put the corn in the middle. Finally, we ate it with some wasabi.

We also made Japanese noodles. We needed to use water to cook the noodles. Then, we put it in the bowl. We put a bowl of noodles into the refrigerator. Finally, we took it out and put some seaweeds on top before we ate it.

We made parfait for dessert. We put some cornflakes in the bottom of a glass. We put some marshmallows and red bean ice-cream on top of the cornflakes. Finally, we put four pieces of strawberries on top.

Dinner time had come, we had the Japanese noodles first. Phyllis took some photos for us. Sister ate the noodles happily in the first photo. My aunt gave two kimonos to my sister and Phyllis. They looked like Japanese girls. If I did not know the photo was taken in Hong Kong, I would think it was taken in Japan.

My father and I were very happy at the dinner. After the dinner, we listened to the music and drank Japanese tea. We read a book together, too. We then ate parfait happily. It was cold and sweet.

Finally, we had some fruits and went back come. Before I slept, I thought this Father’s Day was a happy one. When I grow up, I will be a father! Then, I fell asleep… Good night!

Happy Father's Day

22ndJune, 2009 Monday ring and cold

Yesterday is father’s day. Mother’s day we ate a European cuisine. Yesterday, we ate the Japanese food.

Yesterday, morning I went to swimming pool and swim with my father. We swam there happily. After we swam, we play under the water.

After we swam in the swimming pool, we went to Chinese restaurant and ate some pastry and we ate it happily because it was father’s day.

Then, we went back home. When it was two o’clock was come, I went to Jusco with sister and Phyllis bought some materials which we needed to eat. We bought some seaweed, some soy source, some rice, noodles, wasabi, corn, vegetable, a box of ice-cream and some sweet.

After we bought the food’s seaweed, we went to grandmother’s house. And I worked with them although I did not do to many things.

Make sushi

First, we needed to cook rice. Then, we needed to use the seaweed to make with the rice. After that, we should use the corn to put it in the amidst. Finally, we could ate it with some mustard.

Make Japanese noodles

First, we needed to use the water to cook the noodles. Then, we put it in the blow. After that, we needed to put a blow of noodles in to the refrigerator. Finally, we put it out and put some seaweed, then, we could eat it.

Make Japanese ice-cream

First, we needed to put some cornflakes in the lowly of a cup. Then, we needed to put some sweet top of the cornflakes. After that, we needed to put some ice-cream. Finally, we needed to put four banana on the top.

Dinner time was come, we ate the Japanese noodles first. Phyllis took some photo for us. Sister was eating the noodles happily. On the first photo. My grandmother gave a coat of Japan for sister and Phyllis. They looked like a Japanese people. If I did not know it took in Hong Kong, I would thing it took the photo in the Japan.

In the dinner, my father was very happy and me too.

After the dinner, we drank the Japanese diners—tea. We listen to the music and drank the tea. We read the book together too. Eat Japanese’s ice-cream time was come, we ate the ice-cream happily, it was cold and sweet.

Finally, we ate the fruit and we went back come. When I sleep, I thought the father’s day was a happy day. When I grow up, I will be a father! Then, I sleep.......... Good night!

We will setup a waterland. So the visitor will play in the water and swim there. There is a scubadiving pool and you will see many fish, starfish, sea horses and too many sea creatures. There will be no sharks and whales. They are more dangerous sea animals.

I want to build an old ship, and we will put some pirate in it and some treasures to make a pirate ship. It will be the most special ship and attract more people to go to Ocean Park. We should build the pirate ship in the sea. We can make up a name for this theme it could be-“Special Room”.

We can build a big pond and put some boats there. It will be more romantic.

As for children, we can have racing cars for children over six years and they could drive happily. They will be very exciting. They are famous in China. I think Ocean Park could had more visitor than Disneyland. It was because Disneyland was very boring and did not have exciting games.

Make Ocean Park

Class has been suspended for 2 weeks in Hong Kong’s kindergartens and primary schools. Ocean Park did not have enough visitor, so I wanted to made some special things in it.

So I wanted to have some discount. Then, we could attract many people to Ocean Park. We could not look like Disneyland made the discount for the school which was not open for the student.

We should open a hotel for about ocean. We could build it in the sea, it will be a ocean hotel. It will be most interesting. We could made a marry party in it, so the bridegroom and the bride could have a happy trip and could have a beautiful recollection.

We could open a park in a big swimming pool. So the visitor could play water and swim there. There had a diving pool and you could see many fish, sea star, sea horse and too many sea things. There did not have shark and whale. It was more not safe sea animals.

I wanted to built a old ship, and we put some pirate in it and some special and beautiful things to make a pirate ship. It will be most special and will be have more people went to Ocean Park. We should built the pirate ship in the sea. We could make a name of this all things, it could be...... Yes, it could call Special Room.

We could hold a big pond and hold some boat there. It will be more dissolute.

About children, we could open a baby car and they could drive a car happily. Baby car need enough six years. Baby car was very excited, you could play it to collide with another car. You need to made another car gave could not be ok. The game was call Collide Collide Car. It was be popular among in China. I thing Ocean Park could had more visitor than Disneyland. It was because Disneyland was very bored and did not have exciting games.

Quick, quick, come to Ocean Park!

Your own theme park

Class has been suspended for 2 weeks in Hong Kong’s kindergartens and primary schools. You are the boss of Ocean Park. Think of a special programme to attract these children (and their parents) at this time.

Think about:
1. the theme
2. the games

Write: at least 430 words

OCEAN PARK WEBSITE

Indirect questions

1. Jenny asked Henry, “How old are you?”
Jenny asked Henry how old he was.
2. “Can you help me?” Fred asked Peter.
Fred asked Peter if he could help him.
3. “What is this?” asked Ben.
Ben asked what this was.

Detective Alex Law1

Today, I went to my father’s friend house with my father. It was in Brazil and we will watch football match. Football was my favorite sport. I thing it was the most exited match, because Brazil was a country where was good at playing football. We went there by the airplane. We could watch the Amazon Rainforest.

Amazon Rainforest had the region is home to about 2.5 million insect species, tens of thousands of plants, and some 2,000 birds and mammals. To date, at least 40,000 plant species, 3,000 fish, 1,294 birds, 427 mammals, 428 amphibians, and 378 reptiles have been scientifically classified in the region.

When we went to the airplane, a man said, “This airplane make too many people die, did you want to drive this airplane?” Then, I went to the airplane. Airplane was start flying, and I saw the man was in the airplane, looked like so scare.

After a few hour, we went to the Amazon Rainforest, a man said, “We will die in this airplane!” The airhostess said, “He always went to Brazil and Hong Kong by this airplane, but everyone was die, except he and the people who was work at this airplane!” Suddenly, the airplane flew drawn quickly, the man said, “The demon is killing us everyone was scared and did not know what can they do. The airplane driver said, “We should crash-land in the Amazon Rainforest”

The people did not take any things, but I took all the things. After few minute, the airplane got lose. Only a airhostess went out the airplane. She said, “When I went to got some water back, I saw the airplane got fire broke scorch. I went to the airplane and saw it was very old airplane, it this not the airplane which was us went to Brazil’s airplane.

When I went back the place where people stayed there, I lost them. I only could found a place to leave out. When I walked to the road, I said,‘Oh-on, I should use the boat or ship to got out!”So I only could not went out. When I sat in under the tree, I listened someone was singing, when I went near the person, I saw a house and twelve people, some a Hong Kong people and some a Brazil people. I asked them, “I am a victim. Why did you here?” A child said, “I am a victim too! My family’s things got lose in the airplane, so we went out the plane. Finally, the airplane broke a fire.”

I knew what happen it was and I made a boat and went to Brazil. I took all the things of the airplane.

First, the airplane drivers deliberately gave the plane flew drawn quickly. Then, when we went out the plane, the airhostess deliberately took us to the older plane. After that, the driver went back Brazil and said the airplane gave lose, but the airplane was in the Amazon Rainforest. We could not saw it because there was a airdrome. The .evidence was the big river was not have in the map.

Deserted Island

Tropical rainforest

1. why did you end up on the island? – shipwreck? Plane crash?
2. what did you find there? Any people/ animals?
3. how do you survive? – fishing? Find fruits?
4. how do you kill time?
5. how did you feel? Lonely? Scared?
6. did you escape? How?


I am a child who loves the sea, so I went to the sea with my

Too Much Money Is Not Happiness

I think if they have taken NZ$10 million (US$6.1million), they will go to Hong Kong for shopping. It is because Hong Kong is a paradise for shoppers. There are many beautiful things to buy as souvenirs. I think they will buy some T-shirts printed with their names. They will go to Hong Kong Disneyland to take photos. And one important place that they will go is Ocean Park. Because it is Hong Kong’s symbol, and there are so many beautiful and special animals, including white dolphins, pandas and sea lions.

I think they will live in Grand Hyatt Hotel, because they have so much money, they must live in the best and the most beautiful hotel to enjoy their lives, I mean a short and perfect life. And they will go to Stanley to enjoy the sunlight and the beach. There are many souvenirs of different cultures in Stanley.

After going to Stanley, I think they will go to Causeway Bay to shop. They will have ice-cream and buy some clothes, because that is Causeway Bay’s culture. When they have bought enough things, they will go to Macau to take photo stickers. After taking photos, I think they will go to the New Territories. It is because they will not just shop in Hong Kong. They might go to Yuen Long to enjoy the nature and take many photos.

But I don’t think they will be extremely happy in this trip because they know that money doesn’t belong to them. They have not reported it to the police and have hidden the truth -- this behaviour is dishonesty. Although they have done some dishonest behaviour, I think they will enjoy their trip in Hong Kong very much because Hong Kong is a good place to travel. It has many beautiful things that Hong Kong people don’t pay attention to. But I hope they can use the money they earn themselves. They will be happier that way. Hope they can enjoy this time, and don’t do it again. Whoever telling a lie should tell the bank the truth. Don’t tell lies anymore!

I think after the trip, they might got caught by the New Zealand police.

NT$1000000

I think if they take NZ$ 10millions (US$6.1million), and they will go to Hong Kong to buy many thing. Because Hong Kong is a paradise of shopper and there have many beautiful things to buy for memory. I think they will buy some T-shirt that print their name and they will go to Hong Kong Disneyland to take photo. And one important place that they will go is Ocean Park. Because Ocean Park is Hong Kong’s symbol, and there are so many beautiful and special animals. Include white dolphin, panda, sea lion…And I think they will live in Grand Hyatt Hotel, because they have so many money, they must live in the best and the most beautiful hotel to enjoy their life, I mean a short and perfect life. And they will go to Stanley to enjoy sunlight and beach. Stanley has many different culture’s commodities, can buy something commodities t have memorial.

After go to Stanley, I think they will go to Causeway Bay to have shopping. They will go to eat ice-cream and buy some clothes, because that is Causeway Bay’s culture. When they buy enough things and they will go to MongKok to take photo-ticket machine to take photo to have memorial.

After they take photo, I think they will go to New Territories. Because I think they must not just shop in Hong Kong, they might go to Yuen Long to enjoy natural’s life. They might go to there and take many photos. But I don’t think they will extreme happy in this trip because they know those money isn’t belong them. And they don’t tell the police, hide the truth, this behave is not honesty. Although they do some not honest behave, I think they will very enjoy their trip in Hong Kong because Hong Kong is a good place to travel. And Hong Kong has many beautiful things that Hong Kong people won’t look out. And I think they can find it and enjoy it. But I hope they can use their money which was they gained, they must be happier to use bank’s money to travel here. Hope them can enjoy this time, and don’t do it again. Because to tell lie, whatever anyone, hope they will tell the bank the truth. Don’t tell lies anymore!

I think after they enjoy their trip, they might got catch by the police who was in the New Zealand.

Global manhunt for accidental millionaires focuses on Hong Kong

read the news report here

Tell the story of the couple

Trip to Japan - amended

Today was the first day of the summer holidays. My mother gave me some money to go to Japan. She wanted me to learn how live in another countries which was not like Hong Kong. My mother took me to a Japanese school. I learned some Japanese.

The day of going to Japan had come, I went to the airport and said, “See you mum, bye bye!”Then, I went to Japan by aeroplane.

After a few hours, I arrived at Japan. I went there with an interpreter, his Japanese was very good! So he could help me with many things in Japan and mother was very relieved.

My mother wanted me to do a few things. Firstly, take some photos in the entire place we went to. Secondly, not to have a hot spring for a long time because it was not good for health. Thirdly, eat Japanese sushi. Fourthly, don’t get lost. Finally, buy some souvenirs for her.

On the first day, I went to the jinja and learned some Japanese traditions. The jinja was a place for praying. It was not like Hong Kong, but it was the scariest. I had watched a Japanese TV drama which looked like this. Then, I took some photos of the jinja.

We then went to take a hot spring happily. Suddenly, I could not see where the interpreter was. I was very scared. I went to the dressing room and wore my coat. I ran out of the shop quickly. I saw him sitting in the chair because he was hurt. He went back to Hong Kong first.

Afterwards, I went to the Sushi Shop and ate the sushi happily, too. It was more delicious than the sushi made in Hong Kong. After the yummy dinner, I went back to the hotel. I was very full, so I could not run or walk quickly. Suddenly, a man stole my money. Although he was not running fastly, I could not chase him. Then I went to the hotel unhappily.

The next day was the last day in Japan, I used other money to buy some interesting models and food from Japan.

I had bought a lot, but I got lost. Luckily, there were so many taxis. I went to the airport and went back to Hong Kong happily.

Japanese tour guide

Today was the first day of Sunny Holiday. My mother gave me some money to Japan and wanted me learn how could I do in another countries is not like Hong Kong. My mother took me to the Japanese school. I leaned some Japanese.

The day of went to Japan was come, I went to the airdrome and said, “See you mum, bye, bye!”Then, I went to Japan by aeroplane.

After a few hours, I arrived Japan. I went there with an interpreter to Japan, his Japanese was very good! So he could help me many things in Japan and mother was very set one's mind at ease.

First, me mother wanted me to take some photo in the entire place we went to. Next, she told me do not had a hot spring a long time; it was no good for body. Then, you needed to eat the Japanese sushi (a kind of Japanese food). After that, don’t lose your road. Finally, bought some your favourite things and some give for us!

First, I went to the jinja and learned some Japanese things; jinja was a pray place to talked will the people who was die. It not liked Hong Kong, but it was most scared. I watch the whodunit looked like this. And I took some photo too.

Next, we went to the Hot Spring Shop and took a hot spring happily. Suddenly, a could not see where the interpreter in. I was very scared and went to the dressing room and wore my coat and ran out the shop quickly. Suddenly, I saw he was sitting in the chair because he hurt. Then, he went back Hong Kong first.

After I went to the Hot Spring Shop, I went to Sushi Shop and ate the sushi happily too, because it was most yummy than the sushi which was made by Hong Kong. After I ate the yummy dinner, then I went back the hotel. I was very full, so I could not run or walk quickly. Suddenly, a man stole my money. Although it was not run fast, I could not run after him too. Then I went to the hotel unhappy.

Next day was the last day in Hong Kong, I used another money to bought my favourite and bought some interesting things and some food about Japan.

I bought so many things, but I lose. Lucky, a Taxi was so many and I went to the airdrome and went back Hong Kong happily.

A story that happens in a foreign country/city:

1. Find a place that is not like Hong Kong.
2. You can do some research on the culture and language.
3. Tell us about your adventures in that place, for example:

- are you lost?
- can you understand their language?
- do you understand what the people are doing?
- how did you communicate with the people?

WORDS YOU MIGHT USE:
- interpreter
- tour guide
- special agent
-

Happy Mither's Day

10thMay, 2009 Sunday Sunny and warm

It is Mother’s Day today. I had a good one. My father, sister, Phyllis, Aunt Carmen and I designed a party at my grandmother’s home. Grandmother’s home is near my home. So we can go there more quickly. Last Sunday, we designed a Western-style food party. We followed a recipe to cook the food.

When I went to my grandmother’s house, I made the fruit salad. It had apples, eggs, bananas and salad dressing. I put it into the fridge. It was very yummy. I made it for about one hour. Then, I went to Jusco and bought some colour papers and a carnation.

Aunt Carmen provided the beverages. There were different kinds of English tea.

Afterwards, I used the colour papers to make a Mother’s Day card. After I went back home, I saw my sister working very hard on the mashed potato. I thought, “My sister wanted to make the best food for Mother! I was very happy!” And I saw my father made the spaghetti happily too.

Dinner time has come! Everyone went to the dining room and ate the fruit salad I made as the appetizer. Then, I ate the Spaghetti Bolognese made by my father and mashed potato made by my sister. For the main course, we had pork and beef. After then, we had banana pancakes with ice-cream happily. Finally, we drank different kinds of English tea provided by Aunt Carmen.

After we had dinner, we went back home quickly and gave the Mother’s Day card and carnation to my mother. She was very happy. We had a very happy Mother’s Day!

I didn’t want to sleep, although it was very late. But soon I fell asleep. Although I was asleep, this day is always in my dreams.

Happy Mother's Day

10^thMay, 2009 Sunday Sunny and warm

Hi! My name is Alex! Today is mother’s day. I have a good mother’s day today. What is your mother’s today about? Do you want to learn my Mother’s day, Yes or No? Yes! Ok, I took you about this.

My father, sister, sister Yan (Phyllis), Sister Carmen and I design a Party in my grandmother’s home. Grandmother’s home is near my home. So we go there can be more quickly. Last Sunday, we design a Western-style food party. We have a menu to cook the food. I make the fruit salad of the antipasto in the menu. My sister made the potato pie for the first main dish. The next main dish is the minced pork with spaghetti (Spaghetti Bolognese) or the comp, tomato and mushroom with spaghetti. We could choose more than one. We can have pork and beef to eat with the spaghetti. Sister Carmen provides beverages. The beverages were the tea by English, France, United States of America, Portugal and many countries. Finally, the sweetmeat is the ice cake with banana. My happy mother day is this…

When I went to my grandmother house, and I made the fruit salad. It had too many apples, fewer eggs, some bananas and some salad sauce and put it in to the. It is very mummy. I made it about one hour. Then I went to Jusco and bought some color paper and a flower of carnation.

After I bought the carnation and color paper, I use the color paper to made a mother’s card. After I went back home, I saw my sister made the photo par very hard. I thought, “My sister wanted to make the most good food to mother! I was very happy!” And I saw my father made the spaghetti happy too.

They time of have dinner was come! Everyone went to the sitting room and ate the fruit salad first. Then, I ate the spaghetti Bolognese and photo par. After then, we ate the ice cake with the banana happily. Finally, we had drunk the tea of another country.

After we had the dinner, we when back home quickly. I went back home and gave the mother’s card and carnation quickly and my mother was very happy too. It had a very happy mother’s day!

It didn’t want to sleep, although it was very early, but I could not win the sleep. Although I was sleep, this day always to be my dream.

A Story about Mother's Day

write 400 words.

Tsunami and Me

I went to Japan with my best friends-Johnny. And we went there for two day

Today was pop star-Jon’s birthday. My friend-Johnny and I went to his Jon’s birthday party. The party was in Chan Yin Road Park. There were many fans, so we couldn’t see where Jon was. We were very unhappy and cried. We wanted to go back home, but the policemen said, “Sorry children, you can’t go back, because there were many fans. We only played the mobile phone’s game.

After one hour, we went back home and watch the TV news. The reporter report the news about a in the big tsunami in Japan broke many ships and boats in the sea. The reporter said, “The tsunami has come to Tokyo, Japan!”

I was very scared and looked out of the window, but it was nothing special, so I started to play on the computer. When we were playing happily, a man on the road said, “The tsunami has come! Run quickly!” And he ran away. When we looked out of the window again, I saw a big tsunami coming here! We ran out of the house. We could not use the lift because the power station was flooded, so we used the staircase. When we passed through the Chan Yin Road Park, we saw Jon said, “Everyone, we don’t need to run, there are not enough ships for everyone. We should help the old people go onto the ships! You only need to listened to my singing!”I was very touched. Although it was his birthday today, he let the old people go to the ship. I went to the airport because we needed to go back to Hong Kong today.

The marine security official wanted to help the victims. They used the helicopter to save the people. But the helicopter was not big enough, so the marine security, he jump into the sea after saving the people and he died. I was very sad. Why did he use his life to save the others?

Johnny said, “I need to take my mobile phone! You go to the airport first!” I went to the airport by bus. When we arrived, the driver did not go into the airport. He said, “I need to go back and help the people to the airport.”Then he drove the bus away. I was very unhappy I knew he would also lose his life. And I returned to Hong Kong quickly.

When I came back, I went to Johnny’s home to find him. But his mother said, “Johnny has not come back yet!” I cried because I thought my best friend was in Japan!

When I went to school in September, I saw Johnny. He said, “I went to Hong Kong by helicopter!”I was very happy and told everything in Japan to my friends in class. But I thought the driver and the marine security had died.

20-8-2008

Today was super star-Jon birthday. My friend’s-Alan went to the Jon’s birthday party. They part was in Chan Yin Road Park. There were many fans, so we couldn’t see where Jon was. We were very unhappy and cried up. We wanted to go back home, bit the policemen said, “Sorry children, you can’ t go back, because there were many fans of Jon. We only played the mobile phone’s game.

After one hour, we went back home and watch the TV news. The reporter report the news about a earthquake in the sea in Japan made a big tsunami broke many ships and boats in the sea. The reporter report the tsunami and said, “The tsunami is come to Japan’s Tokyo, that mean here!”

I was very scared and saw the window, but it was not things special, so I started to play the computer. When we played it happily, a man in the road said, “The tsunami is come! Quickly, and he run away.” When we watched the window again, I saw a big tsunami was coming to here! We saw the tsunami and ran out the house. We could not use the life because the power-station gave submerge so we went to the road. When we pass through the Chan Yin Road Park, we saw the super star said, “Everyone, we not need to run, the ship is not enough. We should help the old people go to the ship! You only need to listened to my song!”I was very moved although today was his birthday. I went to an airport because today, we needed to go back Hong Kong.

The marine security official wake hard, and wanted to help the people. They use the helicopter to help the people. But the helicopter was not big, so the marine security after help the people, he jump in to the sea and he died. I was very said, why did he used his live to help the people?

We went to the airport by bus. We went to the airport, but the driver did not went to the airport, he said, “I needed to go back and help the people to the airport.”Then he drive the bus away. I was very unhappy. And I went to Hong Kong quickly.

When I came back, I lost my friend. I cried because my best friend was in Japan!

1-9-2008

When I went to school, I saw my best friend- Johnny. He said, “I went to Hong Kong by helicopter”I was very happy and said all of the things in Japan for my friend in my class. But I thought the driver and the marine security died.

Write a disaster story

THINK ABOUT:

1. what kind of disaster? – tsunami, flood, fire, hurricane, earthquake, explosion, volcanic eruption, famine, drought, epidemic, etc

2. how do human beings react? – afraid, escape, save other people, commit suicide, responsible, etc

3. do you have a hero in this story?

write: at least 450 words

I have to kill Alex again because...

1. he doesn't even remember the word THEY!
2. he often does his homework the day we are having class!
3. he always forgets about the tense!
4. he writes and reads too little!

>:(

An Unhappy Birthday - amended by Phyllis

Today was my friend’s birthday. His name is Ben. He is in my class too. Today, he is twelve year old. His mother held a small birthday party for him.

He was born on 4th Apirl, 1997. Today is 4th Apirl, 2009. His birthday party was at his home. He invited Sam, Tom, Amy and me.

We ate a lot of food – chicken wings, apples, milk, soft drinks, and apple pie. They were healthy for us, so I ate a lot.

After we had lunch, Ben invited us to play a game. It was called “ground in the land”. I played happily, so did my friends.

After we played this game in the park, we went back to Ben’s home. But I had lost my gift. Ben thought I did not buy a gift for him, so we fought with each other.

At the end, I found that it was stupid to fight with each other. I called him and apologized, but he never answered. I have lost this friend forever.

ben

Today is my friend’s birthday. His name is Ben. He is in my class too. Today, he is twelve year old. His mother holds a small birthday party for him.

His birthday is at 4thApirl, 1997. Today is 4thApirl, 2009. His birthday party is at his home. He invited Sam, Tom, Amy and me Alex.

Today we eat much food; there are chicken wing, some apple, some milk, some soft drink, and some apple rice. It is so healthy for our body, so I eat many foods there.

After we eat the lunch in the birthday party, Ben tells us to play a game. It is “ground in the land”. I play this game happily, and my friends play it happily too.

After we play this game in the park we go back Ben’s home. But I lose my gift. And Ben think me did not buy a gift for him, so we fight with each other.

3 endings

Pick one of the three endings:

1. At the end, I found that it was stupid to fight with each other. I called him and apologized, but he never answered. I have lost this friend forever.

2. He could not believe what he saw, but there’s no way he could change the ending anymore.

3. The next morning, he opened the box and found that it was empty. He could not believe he was being fooled.

Story of bullying - amended by Phyllis

Andrew Johnston is my best friend. But a student in my class did not like him. He always bullied him -- hit him, scolded him, made fun of him, so he was very unhappy. He always cried in class, so the bully disliked him more.

The bully had many bad friends. One day, when Andrew and I went to school together, the bully and his bad friends saw us and said, “Who is the best singer in our class? Andrew Johnston, but he is a girl!” I shouted angrily, “Someone is not good at singing. He is a bully and a bad student in our class!” The bully hit me and Andrew. I wanted to hit him, but Andrew said softly, “No, we cannot win him in fighting!”

After a few days, Andrew entered a competition. It was called “Britain’s Got Talent”. I wanted him to win the competition. But the bully said cunningly, “You cannot win. You are the worst singer in our school!”

Andrew was sad but he did not give up. He went to the competition and sang “Pie Jesu”. Everyone cried for him and I cried too. I wanted him to win the competition. Although he lost at the end, he was happier than before.

Although the bully did not like him, he said, “You are the best singer in our school, sorry, can you forgive me?”Andrew was happy and said, “ Yes, of course!”

This is the road which can change his life. I think he can be the best singer when he grows up.

Although I am not his best friend, I want him to have more than one friends to play with him, sing with him...

Andrew, you will be the best singer. When you grow up, I will buy your records.

Andrew Johnston

Andrew Johnston is my best friend. But the student in my class who did not like him. He always bully to Andrew Johnston. Such as fright him, dress down him, to embarrass him, so he was very unhappy. He always cried in the lesson, so the bullies more unlike him.

The bullies have many bad friends. One day, when we went to school together, the bullies and his bad friends saw us and said, “Who are the best singer in our class-Andrew Johnston, but he is a girl!” I shouted angry, “Who are not good at sing, he is a bullies and he is a bad student in our class!” The bullies hit me and Andrew Johnston. I wanted to hit him, but Andrew Johnston said softly, “No, we can hit to them, we can win them!”

After few days, he entered a competition. It called Britain Got Talent Show. I wanted him win the competition. But the bullies said cunningly, “You can not win the competition. You are the bad person in our school of singing!”

Andrew Johnston was sad but he did not abandon. He went to the competition place. He sings the AMDEW UOHMSTOH. Everyone cried for him and me too. I want him to win the competition. Although he lose the competition but he was happier hen before.

Although the bullies did not like him, he said, “You are the best singer in our school, sorry, can you forgive me?”Andrew Johnston was happy and said, “ Yes of course!”

This is the road which can change his life. I thing he can be a best singer when Andrew Johnston grow up.

Although I am not the best friend with him, but I want him look like this story the end. I want Andrew Johnston have more than one friends to play with you, sing with you...

Andrew Johnston, you are the best singer, when you grow up, I will buy a phonograph record about you song.

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