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Two perspectives - amended by Phyllis

Ben and Tom were friends. Today, Ben fought with Tom and they disliked each other.

Ben’s part

When Ben went into the classroom, he saw Tom sitting on his chair. Tom was playing with his pen! Ben was angry and hit Tom. Although they were friends, Ben hit him hard. Ben thought, “Why did you steal my pen and played with it? It is mine not yours!” Suddenly, Tom fought back. Ben thought, “You have stolen my pen and played with it, it is your fault! Why did you hit me?”

Tom’s part

When Tom saw Ben going into the classroom, he took his new pen and sat on his new chair. It was because his teacher said, “Tom, you need to change your seat. You will be in Ben seat.” Suddenly, Ben hit Tom. Tom thought, “Why does he hit me?” Tom fell down. He stood up again quickly and fought back.

Ending

The teacher told Ben the fact, and Ben cried, “Sorry Tom!” And they played football happily together in the afternoon!

Ben and Tom

Ben and Tom was friend. Today, Ben fought with Tom and they disliked each other.

Ben past
When Ben went to his classroom, he saw Tom sit on his chair. Tom was played his pen! Ben was angry and fought to Tom. Although they were friend, Ben fought with Tom to exert great efforts. Ben thought, “Why did you steal my pen and played it? It was my thing not your! Suddenly, Tom fought to Ben quickly. Ben thought,“You steal my pen and play it, it is your faults why you fought me?”


Tom past
When Tom saw Ben went to the classroom, he took his new pen and sat on his new chair because teacher said,“Tom you need to change of positions, you sit on Ben chair!” Suddenly, Ben fought with Tom. Tom thought, “Why do you fight with me?” and Tom fall down. Tom stood up quickly and he fought with Ben impatiently. Tom thought, “Why do you fight with me?”

The End
Teacher told to Ben the fact, and Ben cried, “Sorry Tom!” And the play football happily with each other in the afternoon!