My Very Own Shop

Imagine that you were given a big sum of money to build your own shop. You have to convince your investor to invest in your shop by writing him a proposal.

Questions for thoughts:
1. What kind of shop? (Japanese products)
2. Where (location)? (Causeway Bay? Taikoo? Hang up the boat to the sky?)
3. Theme? (marine theme? Boats?)
4. Opening hours? (24-hour? 10am to 9pm?)
5. Staff? (uniform? Costumes? What kind of people will you employ?)
6. Promotion? (flyers? Posters? Emails? banners? Advertisements? Fireworks? )
7. Decoration?
8. Name?
9. Entrance fee?
10. Different floors? (castle? Butterfly house?)
11. Special services? (telescope renting service?)

Remember to think BIG!

Tense: future tense (“will”, “is going to”, “won’t”)

Picture Story (amended by Phyllis)

Once upon a time, there were some “super-magicians” living in the sky and in a tree house. We could not see them because they wore invisible coats, and we could only see their shoes. They could make people fly in the sky. The magic was a mystery. The magic was special and could amaze you. Some magicians played pranks on thieves. Some people said they were like policemen. Now the super-magicians lived on earth but we could not see them.

When the super-magicians lived in the magic world, they did not have money to buy anything. Alvin was one of them. When he was young, is family was poor and did not have much food to eat. So Alvin went to the magic school to learn some magic. When he was 12 years old, he used magic to make more gold so his family was not poor. They could have more food and were not hungry everyday. Now, he has built magic schools on earth and is living here. He is a famous magician. Everyone goes to his school to learn about magic. The magic world has disappeared.

Reminder:
BECAUSE and SO cannot appear in the same sentence.

Picture Story (original writing)

pictures used: 10, 7, 5, 1, 6

type of story: magic story

Once upon a time, there were some “super-magicians” lived in the sky and tree house. We can’t see them because they wear invisible coats, so only saw their shoes. They could make the people fly in the sky. The magic is a mystery. The magic is special and can make you amazed. Some magicians were playing pranks on thieves. Some people were say they same of policeman. Now the super-magicians live in an earth but we can’t see them.

When the super-magicians lived in the magic world, they did not have money to buy something. When Alvin was young, his family were poor and not much food to eat. So Alvin went to the magic school and learn some magics. When he was 12 years old, he used the magic to make more gold so his family was not poor. They can eat more food and not hungry everyday. Now, he build magic schools in earth and live here. He is a famous magician. Everyone go to his school to learn the magics. The magic world disappeared.