Write a disaster story

THINK ABOUT:

1. what kind of disaster? – tsunami, flood, fire, hurricane, earthquake, explosion, volcanic eruption, famine, drought, epidemic, etc

2. how do human beings react? – afraid, escape, save other people, commit suicide, responsible, etc

3. do you have a hero in this story?

write: at least 450 words

I have to kill Alex again because...

1. he doesn't even remember the word THEY!
2. he often does his homework the day we are having class!
3. he always forgets about the tense!
4. he writes and reads too little!

>:(

An Unhappy Birthday - amended by Phyllis

Today was my friend’s birthday. His name is Ben. He is in my class too. Today, he is twelve year old. His mother held a small birthday party for him.

He was born on 4th Apirl, 1997. Today is 4th Apirl, 2009. His birthday party was at his home. He invited Sam, Tom, Amy and me.

We ate a lot of food – chicken wings, apples, milk, soft drinks, and apple pie. They were healthy for us, so I ate a lot.

After we had lunch, Ben invited us to play a game. It was called “ground in the land”. I played happily, so did my friends.

After we played this game in the park, we went back to Ben’s home. But I had lost my gift. Ben thought I did not buy a gift for him, so we fought with each other.

At the end, I found that it was stupid to fight with each other. I called him and apologized, but he never answered. I have lost this friend forever.

ben

Today is my friend’s birthday. His name is Ben. He is in my class too. Today, he is twelve year old. His mother holds a small birthday party for him.

His birthday is at 4thApirl, 1997. Today is 4thApirl, 2009. His birthday party is at his home. He invited Sam, Tom, Amy and me Alex.

Today we eat much food; there are chicken wing, some apple, some milk, some soft drink, and some apple rice. It is so healthy for our body, so I eat many foods there.

After we eat the lunch in the birthday party, Ben tells us to play a game. It is “ground in the land”. I play this game happily, and my friends play it happily too.

After we play this game in the park we go back Ben’s home. But I lose my gift. And Ben think me did not buy a gift for him, so we fight with each other.