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Write a story about collectors 收藏家. (400 words)

WORDS YOU MAY USE:
  • Nobel prize 諾貝爾獎
  • Nobelist 諾貝爾得獎人
  • history 歷史
  • museum 博物館
  • Los Angeles 洛杉磯
  • London 倫敦
  • Paris 巴黎
  • Sweden 瑞典

Scary Day- amended

I picked up a mobile phone in the library this morning. I picked it up and wanted to give it to the librarian. Suddenly, the phone rang and I answered it. I heard a strange voice saying, “Please give the phone back to me. Meet me in the park in 20 minutes.” I had some time before the next class so I took the phone to the park.

I arrived there 20 minutes later, and there were six young men who looked like gangsters. I felt scared and wanted to go back. There was an older man who was the gang leader. He had a scar on his face and a dragon tattoo on his arm. It was very scary and I used my pocket knife to protect myself. My pocket knife was my daily necessity. It was because I was a private detective and many relatives of the criminals I caught came back for revenge.

One of the young men asked, “Where is my mobile phone? If you don’t give it back, I will hit you!” I gave the mobile phone to him and he looked carefully. Suddenly, he shouted, “Where is the password of my phone? Did you get it?” I thought he was a crook and wanted to steal my money. I said, “I don’t know what you are talking about!” He roared, “Don’t cheat me, you should pay me back!” I ran out of the park and turned back, and there were eight gangsters running after me.

I went into the alley and there were four men smoking. They were holding wooden clubs. I wanted to escape, but there were six gangsters at the back. I could not escape and needed to give them money. I was very worried and used the pocket knife to stab them. They were very careless and fell down one by one. I went to the library and pretended to read a book so that they wouldn’t find me.

When they went to the library, I called the police to go to the library door. I went out of the library and saw the gangsters being caught by the police. I got the good citizen reward. Then I needed to be careful everyday, because they were gangsters and they would revenge. I would not be safe anymore.

When I went back home, I saw two gangsters running after me and I went to my car to get my gun. When I closed my car door, two gangsters were behind me. They caught me to their headquarters. There were a lot of gangsters and they had many wooden clubs. I used my gun and shot the gang leader and called the police. The police found many debtors. They were very exhausted and starving. I was safe and did not need to be scared everyday.
I picked up a mobile phone in the library this morning. I picked it up and wanted to give it to the librarian. Suddenly, the phone rang and I answered it. I heard a strange voice saying, “Please give the phone back to me. Meet me in the park in 20 minutes.” I had some time before the next class so I took the phone to the park.

After 20 minutes I arrived there, there were six people. They looked like the gangsters. I felt scare and wanted to go back. The man called Jacky had a scar on his face and he had a tattoo of dragon. It was very terror and I used my pocket knife to prepare. Pocket knife was my articles for daily use. It was because if I done the case, the convict’s one’s parent retaliate of me. So I needed to have a pocket knife to preserve against me.

Jacky asked, “Where is my mobile phone? If you don’t give me I will hit you!” I gave the mobile phone to him and he look be careful. Suddenly, he shouted, “Why I lose my phone password! Did you get it?” I thought he was a cheater and wanted to steal my money. I said, “I didn’t know what you said!” He shouted, “You no need to cheat me, you should give me money!” I went out the park and I saw back, there were eight people ran after me.

I went to the alley and there were four people smoke and they took the wooden club. I wanted to go back, but the six gangsters at the back. I did not have any export and needed to give the money to them. I was very worried and used the pocket knife to hit them. They were very careless one on one and fell down in there and I went to the library. I used a Chinese story book to read. So that they couldn’t know I was the target.

When they went to the library, I called the police to go to the library door. I thought they were cheater. I went out the library and saw they all caught of the police. I got a good resident of a city reward. Then I needed to be careful everyday. It was because they were gangsters and could not relieve too. I will not safe anymore.

When I went back home, I saw two people ran after me and I went to my car to took my gun. When I closed my car door, two people were on my back. They could me to there headquarter. There were a lot of gangsters and they got wood club. I used my gun and shot the eldest of headquarter and I called the police to arrive there. The police found many calumniator of the loan there. They were very tired and hungry.