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Write a story about a building collapsing. (400 words)

Words you may use:
  • collapse
  • World Trade Centre
  • terrorist attack
  • terrorism
  • Al-Qaeda
  • commercial building
  • boss
  • fire hose
  • protective gear

Ben born in a poor family, there were many people lived in their house. His aunt did not like him, so she always hit him. Ben had a smaller brother-- Ken and his father love more than Ben. Ben felt very unfair and worked hard. He thought, “If I work hard, my father will love me fairly!” Although his family was poor, but they could gave Ben and Ken to school. When Ben studied at school, he worked very hard. So his subject was very good and he was famous at school. But someone were disliked him and wanted to injure him.

One day, Ben went to school and suddenly a child came, and used a bottle of water to topple on Ben’s head. Ben was very sad and cried. The child ran away quickly and quietly. When Ben went to school, he told the teacher. The child was come from a rich family and he called Jason. Jason’s father is the school of principal. Jason was very disliked Ben and always juggle him. Although Ben was work hard, he could not study happily at school.

Ben always went to a book shop, and read the fashionable magazine. He wanted to be a famous designer. He wanted to make his dream come true, so he always went to clothes shop and references the clothes. Ben was very happy went he left the primary school, because Jason could not juggle him.

When Ben was eighteen years old, he got 10A in Examination. He went to France and he studied art. He met a famous designer and his name is Raymond. Raymond always designed some interesting clothes. He worked for fifty models on the world. Raymond was Ben’s image. After Ben done his study, he became Raymond’s assistant and helped him some small works.

Ben always helped Raymond hard, so Raymond liked him very much. Another people thought he was not good for did anything, and they always did not work with him. Ben was very sad and left to Raymond’s office. Ben used his salary to open a fashionable company. There were many model invited him to design clothes and he became famous in the USA.

When Ben was twenty-four years old, he was very famous on the world, and many model wanted to find him to design clothes. Ben design’s clothes always appeared in many model magazines. He got more than sixty model design award and twenty- twenty Model Company.