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Write a story about child trafficking非法交易 . Write 400 words.

words you may use:

  • trafficker 販子
  • kidnapper 拐子
  • abduct 誘拐;綁架
  • speedboat 快艇
  • mine 礦
  • lure 引誘
  • fall into the trap 上當

Rom Was Not Useless - amended

There was a nurse called Jenny who discovered Rom Houben was not vegetative. He could still think and was not unconscious. But the truth was he was a famous policeman 23 years ago, and he had got “The Best Policeman” award. When he investigated the mayor corruption case, the mayor pushed him to the highway from the 23rd floor. It was because Rom found a witness and evidence against the mayor.

There had been worldwide reports on Rom not being vegetative, and he was very frightened and worried. He thought the mayor and his partners would kill him. So he wanted to get a computer so that he could use his brain to tell other people the truth.

When Rom was in bed one night, he heard some step. He thought it was his nurse coming. Suddenly he could not breathe, because a man was pulling the tube and wanted to kill him. Luckily, Rom’s nurse heard it and stopped the man. The man was arrested by the police. The man said he wanted to perform mercy killing on Rom but the nurse stopped him. The police only told him to pay a fine.

When the man left the police station, he was shot and died after two minutes. He was from the gang which was the partner of the mayor. They thought the man would tell the truth.

Rom got the computer after two days, and told the police the truth. He could get an award from the police. The police of the USA found the mayor and all gang members went to prison. When Rom was taken to the garden of the hospital, a man who looked like the mayor used a lighter to burn Rom. He was very scared and other nurses used blankets to extinguish the fire. But the mayor ran away quickly.

When Rom went back to the hospital, the mayor appeared again. He poured a glass of wine into Rom’s room and turned on the lighter. The floor became a sea of fire. Rom was inside, and he could not say anything so no one could help him. Finally, he died and the mayor got the death penalty. There were many people at Rom’s memorial on that day.
There was a nurse called Jenny she discovered Rom Houben was not a vegetative. His heard could thick over and unconscious. But there was a real situation of he became a vegetative. Before 23 years, he was a famous policeman and he got a reward of “The Best Policeman”. When he went to follow a case of mayor corruption, the mayor pulled him to the highway from the 23F. It was because he knew the case witness and exhibit.

After he knew he is not a vegetative report in the entire world, he was very frightened and worried. He thought the mayor and his partners would kill him. So he wanted to get the computer that he could use him heard to tell other people that things.

When Rom Houben slept in the bed, he heard some step, he thought it was his nurse coming. Suddenly he felt very hard, because a man pulled the tube and wanted him to die. Lucky, Rom Houben heard it and prevent from the man. The man went to the police and said he wanted Rom Houben mercy killing but the nurse prevent form him. The police only tell could him to hand over impose a fine.

When the man went out the police, he shot and he die after two minutes. The man was from the gangland which was the partners of the mayor. They thought the man would tell the things that the mayor pulled Ran Hoube to the highway.

Ran Houben got the computer after two day, he told the truth to the police. He could get a award of the police. The police of USA found the mayor and the gangland of the mayor partners all members went to the prison. When Ran Houben went to the park, a man looked like the mayor used a lighter to burn Ran Houben. He was very scared and other people used a clothe to destroy the fire. But the mayor ran away quickly.
When Ran Houben went back the hospital, the mayor appeared again and used a glass of wine to invert the room who was Ran Houben he turned of the lighter and all the floor became a fire of sea. Ran Houben was in inside, he could not said anything so not one could help him. Finally he die and the mayor got the death. There were many people memorial him of that