Write a story about REVENGE.

(verb: he revenges)
(noun: he pays a revenge)

Why revenge?
What is done to revenge?
Was it successful?
Afterwards, did the revenger feel happier? Or did he regret?

Alex and a Space

Once upon a time, there were are horse called Ben. He was a smile pet in the earth. When he was small, his mother had died. He was very sad. When he went to the park, a boy said, “Today, I kill a horse!” Ben was very angry, his angry made a space. The boy was very scared and he had hard-pressed in to the space. The boy was hungry and wanted to eat a lot of food. Finally, he died in the space. But Ben was very old and he only killed twenty-two years old. Then he died at 2nd February, 1984.

Form then on, an owner of horse had disappeared at 2nd February. Police was very worried. So they invited a detective. The detective was a smile boy. He was called Alex. He observed the owner of the horse. When he went to the horse room, he saw an old horse, the horse was very old. Alex was very frightened, because he saw the horse’s eye was very red. Alex was very inquisitive about the horse. Suddenly, he knew the horse was Ben. He ran after the horse. Finally, Alex went to the space. Alex was very smile and brought all the food and drink. Alex was in the space.

When he was full, he saw a door in to the line. He went to 1984 went he went of the door. He went out the door and he saw the horse room. Alex was very amazed, because he saw a boy wanted to kill the horse, so Alex prevent from the boy. Ben saw Alex helped his mother was very happy, and all the things were disappear. All the people who were disappearing and went back the world, but the space were disappear. If the space disappeared, Alex would disappear too.

Alex said to the horse, “I will disappear!” Ben’s mother was very sad and she used her power to helped Alex went back 2009’s Hong Kong. Alex was very happy. Then, he went to the police and he was famous and always needed to work everyday.