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Hong Kong’s gap between the rich and the poor has widened. There were a lot of rich students in a school on the Hong Kong Island and they all lived in luxurious homes. Many students own designer labels and showed them off to each other. In Form 1A, all the students were rich. Form 1B was for clever children.

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The most beautiful student in Form 1 was called Jenny and she was from Form 1B. In Form 1A, a student called Ben loved Jenny long time ago, but Jenny did not know. One day, Jenny went to the Form 1A classroom and wanted to get a book from her friend, Cindy. Suddenly, a lot of boys surrounded her. All the boys gave her many things, like Iphone 4 and a few bags. Jenny was very scared and she ran away quickly.

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The next day, Ben and other two boys went to Form 1B and they gave money to everyone. Ben told them to take care of Jenny. Ben was the only child in his family and his family was very generous. Ben got $4000 as his pocket money each month. He gave an Iphone 4 to Jenny, but she did not want it. Ben was very sad. He thought she did not like Iphone 4, so he bought a lot of LV bags to her. Jenny did not want to hurt him, so she received them.

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After a few days, Jenny knew why Ben always gave her presents. Ben loved her, Jenny liked him too. Jenny was not rich, but she was not poor too. Ben’s family may dislike her family because she was not rich. One day, Jenny forgot to bring the math book, many classmates gave her their math books quickly. Jenny was very confused, but she did not know Ben gave money to her classmates to take care of her.

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Jenny asked Cindy, “Why do my classmates take care of me?” Cindy answered, “Ben gave money to your classmates and told them to take care of you!” Jenny was very angry and told Ben that money was worthless. Money was not something to be wasted. If Ben spent money to make his classmates his entourage, he would waste his money. Jenny said, “Don’t waste anymore money. We could know each other again.”

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Hong Kong was a place which was the gap between the rich and the poor has widened. A school in Hong Kong Island had a lot of rich student and they were all come from luxurious home. Many the students had designer labels and showed of with each other. The Form one class A, all the children was rich. The class B was the clever children class.

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One day, a student who was so beautiful in the hold form one. She was called Jenny. In the class A, a child called Ben. Ben love Jenny long time ago, but Jenny did not know. One day, Jenny went inside class A and wanted to get a book from her friend’s Cindy, suddenly, a lot of boys containment her. The all boy gave her many things, like Iphone 4, bag. Jenny was very scared and she ran away quickly.

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Next day, Ben and other two boys went to class B and they gave the money for everyone. But everyone needed to make Jenny know Ben loved her. Ben was the only child in his family and his family was very generous. Ben had pocket money about $4000 one month. Ben bought an Iphone 4 to Jenny, but Jenny did not want. Ben was very sad; he thought he did not like Iphone, so he bought a lot of LV bag to her. Jenny did want to hurt him, so she got it.

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After a few days, Jenny knew why Ben always gave her many things. Ben loved her. Jenny was not rich, but she was not poor too. If Jenny loved with him, Ben’s family may be disliked her family was not rich. One day, Jenny forgot to bring the math book, her classmates gave her quickly. Jenny was very question, but she did not know Ben gave money to her classmate to take care her.

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Jenny asked her friend Cindy, “Why the classmates take care of me?” Cindy answered, “Ben gave the money to your classmates and tell them to take care of you!” Jenny was very angry and found Ben to talk with him. She told to Ben that money was worthless in the world. Money was a thing made you to use, not to rise. If you used the money to make people entourage you, that you were raising money. Did not raise money any more, we could learn each other again.