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Write a story of 430 words about changing of identity.

Words you may use:


  • dye the hair 染髮
  • have a cosmetic surgery 整容
  • have a transexual surgery 做變性手術
  • special agent 特務
  • witness 證人
  • South Africa 南非
  • World Cup世界杯
  • Argentina 阿根廷
  • Germany 德國
  • football fans 足球迷

A World-famous Invention - amended

“How are you? Nice to meet you!” I said. “You are…oh you are the inventor! Where are you going now?” “I am going to my laboratory to do some experiments!”

“Hi, my name is Alex; I am an inventor who wants to invent something we can always use!” I said. Suddenly, someone ran after me! I was very scared and went back to my laboratory quickly. When I got back to the laboratory, I started my experimentation. I needed to find many things, so I worked hard there. It was very difficult.

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I had an assistant, Alan. He always helped me to find some materials for experiments. I always invented something will him and we needed to do many experiments. We invented many products, like a helicopter that did not need any fuel. We only need to put some liquid into the helicopter to drop the atmospheric pressure. Next, we used some water to mix with the liquid. Water’s density is lower than the liquid, so it will fly in the sky. Lastly, we added a rudder and other helicopter parts.

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Many producers wanted to buy the sketch of our invention, and wanted to get some money from it. After Alan and I published this invention, there were many reports about me on TV and in the Internet. I became famous around the world. After selling the invention sketch, Alan and I got three hundred million euro. We were very amazed because we got a lot of money.

After a few mouths, the producer made many helicopters and they gave us one. Many people bought them, because the cost was not high, so the price was not high too. The customers felt they were very convenient.

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After one mouth, we got the Nobel Prize. We invented this helicopter because we wanted to help the world. The helicopter would not pollute the environment. We got twenty-five prizes for environmental protection.

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Our invention became the number six world invention. The number one invention was the x-ray machine which was used in all hospitals. Our helicopter was very popular in the market too. It was not easy to be popular in a market. Although we got a lot of money and prizes, and we continued our work and we made a lot of other inventions.

Famous in the Market

“How are you? Likes to meet you!” I said. “You are…oh you are the inventor! Where are you going now?” “I am going to my laboratory and do some experimentation!”

“Hi, my name is Alex; I am an inventor about a sell’s things and wants to invent something that we can always use it in the market!” I said. What happen, someone ran after me! I was very scared and went back my laboratory quickly. After back the laboratory, I started my experimentation. I needed to find many things, so I work hard there. It was very hard to do it.

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I had a helper, he was Alan. He always helped me to find some stuffs for do experimentation. I always invented some thing will him and we do many experimentation do done an invention. We invent many products, like a. The helicopter could fly in the sky, but no need to add any fuel. We only use some matter and put it in a helicopter to make the atmospheric pressure drop off. Next used some water to mix some water, water’s density lower than the matter some it will fly in the sky and than, add a rudder and than add some plain helicopter’s stuff.

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Many producers wanted to get our invention sketch, and wanted to get some money in this invention. After Alan and I publish this invention, many report about on TV and online. I became famous in the world. After I sell the invention sketch, Alan and I got three hundred millions. We were very amazed because we got much money.

After few mouths, the producer held many helicopter and they gave us one. After done the helicopter, many people bought, it was because the cost not high, so the price not high too. Someone drive the helicopter and felt is was very convenient.

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After one mouths, we got the Nobel Prize, we invent this helicopter and wanted to help the world. The helicopter did not have any contamination things and it was very environmental protection. So we got the prize about environmental protection. We got twenty-five prizes about environmental protection and invent.

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Our invention became the rank six of the world invent. The first was x-ray machine it was very famous in hospital. Our helicopter was very famous in the market too. It was not easy to be famous in a market. Although we got much money and many prizes, we will continue our job and invented a lot of inventions for the people and the market. I needed to do my job see you next time, bye!