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ORAL PRESENTATION

if I could delete and change one memory...

-- WHAT and WHY to delete? HOW to change?
  • brain 腦
  • memory 記憶
  • regret 後悔

Who Stalked Me? - amended

When I went to school today, I saw a shadow at the corner of my eye. I was very scared but I didn’t do anything. I looked very calm so that he would not notice. Then, I walked quickly. Suddenly, I saw my best friend, Johnny. So, we went to school together. I was not scared anymore and we arrived at school. I went to my classroom, and the shadow disappeared. When it was recess time, I went to the tuck shop. It was on the ground floor. There were many people, and I played basketball with them. The basketball court was near the front door of the school.

When it was time for newspaper delivery, Johnny shot the basketball carelessly. I ran out and wanted to get back the basketball. Suddenly, a woman walked in front of me and she was our class teacher. She asked, “Why do you go out?” I answered, “Johnny shot the basketball outside, and I want to get it back!” She said, “It is good, but you are not careful!”

When I went back to school, a basketball hit me. There was a man behind a car at the school door. I thought, “Who is he?” When I went back to my class, there were two classmates outside my classroom. They said, “That old man always helps us!” I asked, “Why?” They said, “He does not have any children, so he always talks with us!”

I thought the old man was the shadow. So I went back home happily after school. When I saw the shadow again, I went near the shadow. He was the old man! He bought some food and said, “What’s your name?” I answered, “My name is Alex!” Then I talked with him for an evening. The old man was called Jeff, and he was eighty- five years old.

He was never married, and he did not have any children. He wanted to have a child before he passed away. He wanted to play with children. Then I went back home quickly. When I went back home, I saw a TV news report about an old man being killed by a car. He was called Jeff!

I cried, “Jeff, have you fulfilled your dream?”
When I was small, I liked to play the ant to make me happy. I was born in Hong Kong and my best comic or funny picture was Conan and BLEACH. I always bought it at seven eleven. I went to school by MTR or bus. I was very sporty and play basketball every recess at school. When it was Saturday I will go to swimming pool and when it was Sunday, I will play basketball.

I wanted to be a detective because I like watched detect books. I needed to done well at anything. After I done my job—student, I got ten A and I used my money of school, I opened a detective room.

Before forty years, I was a famous detective. I always search many witness, and done many legal case. I was very happy, because I was very famous. But new, I did not have anything! I was not sad, because I had my clever son and my beautiful life. I was very lucky too. When I wrote my life, I want to talk you. I married my life when I was thirty- four years old, she was called Jenny and she was twenty –nine years old when we married. Now she was forty-three years old and I was forty-eight and my son was twelve years old now.

My son was a sporty and clever child. He said when he grew up, he wanted to be a sportier, and his name was Winson. His name was very lucky of match. It was because he was a son and I wanted he won any match, so win and son put together and became Winson! He was good at swam and four of swim he know. He won the Hong Kong 2046 swimming match. He made twelve notes taken down in his secondary school. When it was Sunday, we would go to the public swimming pool swim of three hours and he enjoyed the swimming.

Today was my retire day, I was very happy. Many cases flew in my brain. When I was eighteen years old, I done my first case and I became famous. When one month before, I done my last case and I careful to look after my son.

I wanted my son to be a good swimmer and wanted he make Hong Kong to win the first Olympic Game gold medal of swimming.