- think of how old you are now
- why do you decide to write an autobiography 決定?
- important重要 events事件 in your life, like your birth 出生, school days, wedding 婚禮, divorce 離婚, work, etc. how do you feel about them?
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Unlucky day--Halloween: amended
Today was Halloween. I went to Ocean Park with my best friends, Johnny, Ben and Jason. It was the last day of the Ocean Park Halloween. When we went there, it was six o’clock. We went to the Chinese haunted house first. It was not scary at first. Suddenly, an old Chinese official ran towards our direction. We were very scared and wanted to leave the haunted house, but we could not find the exit. We went out of the house, but we only saw a forest. We were very tired, so we sat on the ground. When Ben sat down, he fell down into a hole. He got hurt.
We wanted to pull him out of the hole, but it was very small and narrow. Then, Ben fell deeper into the hole. I said to Johnny, “Could you use the mobile phone to call him?” He answered, “Okay! But my mobile phone does not have enough battery and we only have one chance to call!” Jason said, “We can call the police or Ocean Park! Alex stays here. Johnny and I go back and find the staff of Ocean Park!” I shouted, “No, maybe you stay here!”
Johnny said, “You should stay here, because it is your idea!” So Jason stayed there. Johnny and I went to the door again. When we went to the room, we did not see anything because it was very dark. Johnny turned on the light of his mobile phone, and we went to the correct exit. We went to the Call Center and said, “Can you give me a bottle of alcohol and a rope? My friend fell into the hole!”
The staff went with us and said, “Where did you find the hole?” Johnny said, “It was near the Chinese haunted house!” We went there and found Jason there. He was scared and yelled, “I… saw a ghost there!” We turned back and saw a Chinese ghost. There was some blood on his face and he had a man on his back. The man was covered with blood too! The staff went near the ghost.
The staff said, “It was our colleague and he was about to carry the dummy to the haunted house! Then the staff called the police and used the rope to save Ben. It was an unlucky day for us!
We wanted to pull him out of the hole, but it was very small and narrow. Then, Ben fell deeper into the hole. I said to Johnny, “Could you use the mobile phone to call him?” He answered, “Okay! But my mobile phone does not have enough battery and we only have one chance to call!” Jason said, “We can call the police or Ocean Park! Alex stays here. Johnny and I go back and find the staff of Ocean Park!” I shouted, “No, maybe you stay here!”
Johnny said, “You should stay here, because it is your idea!” So Jason stayed there. Johnny and I went to the door again. When we went to the room, we did not see anything because it was very dark. Johnny turned on the light of his mobile phone, and we went to the correct exit. We went to the Call Center and said, “Can you give me a bottle of alcohol and a rope? My friend fell into the hole!”
The staff went with us and said, “Where did you find the hole?” Johnny said, “It was near the Chinese haunted house!” We went there and found Jason there. He was scared and yelled, “I… saw a ghost there!” We turned back and saw a Chinese ghost. There was some blood on his face and he had a man on his back. The man was covered with blood too! The staff went near the ghost.
The staff said, “It was our colleague and he was about to carry the dummy to the haunted house! Then the staff called the police and used the rope to save Ben. It was an unlucky day for us!
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