The Mystery of Amazon - amended by Phyllis

Today, I went to my father’s friend’s house with my father. It was in Brazil and we planned to watch a football match. Football was my favorite sport. I thought it was the most exiting match, because Brazil was good at playing football. We went there by aeroplane. We could see the Amazon Rainforest.

When we went to the plane, a boy yelled, “This airplane has make too many people die, do you want to drive it?” I was very scared. The plane got off, and I saw the boy looked like very frightened too.

After a few hours, we went to the Amazon Rainforest, the boy cried, “We will die on this airplane!” The flight attendant said, “He always goes to Brazil and Hong Kong by this airplane, but everyone on the plane has disappeared, except he and the people who worked on this airplane!” Suddenly, the airplane flew down quickly, the boy said, “The demon is killing us!” Everyone was afraid and did not know what they could do. The pilot shouted, “We will land on the Amazon Rainforest! All passengers should get off the plane!”

The other passengers did not take anything, but I took all my belongings. After a few minutes, the airplane disappeared. Only a flight attendant got off the airplane. She said, “When I went to get some water, I saw that the airplane caught a fire. It was a very old plane, and it was not the one we was on.

I looked around and found that the passengers had already left. I could only find one exit. I said to myself, ‘Oh no, I should use the boat or ship to get out!” When I sat under a tree, I heard someone singing. When I went near that person, I saw a house and twelve people, some were Hong Kong people and some were Brazilians. I asked them, “I am a victim. Why are you here?” A child said, “I am a victim too! My family’s things got lost on the airplane, so we went out of the plane. Then the airplane caught a fire.”

I knew what happened. I made a boat and went to Brazil. I told them everything about the airplane: first, the pilots deliberately landed the plane quickly. Then, when we got off the plane, the airhostess deliberately took us to the older plane. After that, the pilots went back to Brazil and said that the airplane disappeared, when the airplane was in fact in the Amazon Rainforest. We could not see it because there was an airport. The evidence was that the river was not on the map.

At the end, the criminals were arrested and I watched the football match with father happily.