Write a story about you performing in a show. You can be a singer, dancer, athlete, magician, etc.
(420 words)

Big Hurt of Europe

Cindy and I visited France and friend, John. We were the doctor in the UK. John had a big hurt before two years. It was happened in 2008, France’s certain centre took place a big bang. John was outside the centre, but he got hurt. Although John was only get past the centre, a clothes afire and flew to John. John encountered the clothes and John’s hand hurt by it. His hand afire and had many place got hurt and could not used his right hand about five years. The catastrophe was called Hotel’s centre big bang. There were 369 people die and 798 people hurt.

Before this catastrophe, there were 1400 people inside the hotel and centre. The hotel and centre were together and the hotel was built on top of the centre. So the centre bang and the hotel would collapse together too. The police thought it was a human negligence so it would have this bang. The bang was happened at 1:12 p.m. at Friday in 14^th Match. John was very luck in the bang. Another people some fracture of bones.

John was very hard in the Physical Therapy, he needed to know how to use his left hand to work. When he knew how to use his left hand, he needed to set a date to check his right hand. At now, his hand was turn flesh. His burn was very critical, but his since the viability was very fast. When I went to his house we helped him to treat.

When I talked to him, he said a scared case, his father die before twenty-nine years. His father heard the music “Gloomy Sunday”. He said, “When I was small I heard the ‘Gloomy Sunday’s first half and it was I scared music in the world. Now I had this phonograph record at my mother house! But I lock it in a box, and I threw the key into the river.

I was very scared of it, this music “kill” more than 100 people, and it was a mystery. Then, Cindy and I went to next place and visited a girl called Candy. She was the hurter in the bang, and his boy friend died. It was a big hurt on her, she said it was a very unlucky days of her. It was Saturday that day. After we therapy her, we went back the UK. But I was very question of John’s father. What hurt did his father had?

Clever Cheaters - amended

It was my birthday today, and my wife and I went to museum. The museum looked like a UFO. When we went inside, we saw many antiques. There were some vases and archives. I thought it was a museum about ancient China. I was a FBI coming from the USA. It was my first time going to China. My wife was a FBI too. We needed to find a cheater called Tommy. He was an internationally wanted person. After we visited the museum, we found a tuck shop in the museum. When we went inside the shop, we heard the sound of glass breaking outside the shop. I went outside and saw a security guard.

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The security guard looked like Tommy. I thought he was Tommy, so I went after him. Suddenly, he pointed a knife at a girl’s chest and took her as a hostage. I wanted to help the girl, but I could not do anything. When Tommy and the girl went outside, he drove a car and escaped. I was very worried about the girl. The police arrived, and a policeman counted how many pieces of antiques had disappeared. Four pieces of antiques had disappeared, and they were worth $600,000. They were not extremely expensive, but they were very precious in China.

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My wife and I went back to our suite first; we did not have any plans. It was very difficult; we searched for the museum on the net. There were many security guards. We found something about the girl in Tommy’s blog. The girl was called Jenny. She was a cheater too. After a few minutes, we heard that Jenny was safe, and she went back to the USA by airplane. She was Tommy’s partner. We called the FBI and arrested her in the USA airport.

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Tommy went to Hong Kong by boat and he drove an airplane back to USA. Although he did not know how to drive an airplane, he had played a computer game about airplanes. When he went back to the USA, he knew that his partner was arrested by the police. He was very worried about her, so he pretended to be a policeman and released his partner. Then, we went back to the USA quickly.

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Although Tommy and Jenny had pretended to be a lot of people, my wife finally arrested them in the UK! I thought Tommy and Jenny were very clever. If they became FBIs, they would be successful! The four antiques were found and sent back to the museum.

Write a story about an injury 受傷. (400 words)

WORDS YOU MAY USE:

• experience 經歷
• accident 意外

Clever Cheater

Today was my birthday, my wife and I went to a museum. The museum looked like the UFO. When we went inside, we saw many curios; there were some vase and some far back in history’s data. I thought it was a museum about far back in history’s China. I was a FBI came form the USA. It was my first time to go to China. My wife was a FBI too. We needed to find a cheater, Tommy, he was an international wanted persons. After we visited the museum, we found a snack shop in the museum. When we went to the shop, we heard some glass’s voice. I went there and saw a peace protection.

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The peace protection looked like Tommy; Tommy always went to museum and stole some curios. When I went after him, he used a knife and point to a girl’s heart. I wanted to help the girl, but the girl did not have any power of resistance. So I could not do anything. When Tommy and the girl, they drove a car and left there. I was very worried the girl. When some policemen came to here, a policeman came to there and count how many products disappeared. There were only four curios disappeared, but it was value $309600000. It was not so expensive, but it was very rare in China.

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My wife and I went back our hotel first; we did not have any outline. It was very difficult; we used our computer and found some data about the museum. There were many peace protections. When we found a peace protection, we saw the girl. The girl was called Jenny. She was a cheater too. After few minutes, we heard Jenny got safe, and she went travel by the airplane. Jenny would go to the USA, she was a cheater, and Tommy was her partners. We called the FBI members in the USA and caught her in the airplane of the USA.

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Tommy went to Hong Kong by boat and he drove an airplane back to Hong Kong. Although he did not know how to drive the airplane, he always played a computer game about airplane. When he went back the USA, he heard her partner had caught by the police. He was very worried her, so he pass oneself off as a policeman and he release her partners. Then, we went back the USA quickly.

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Although Tommy and Jenny pass oneself off as many job, but my wife caught them in the UK! I thought Tommy and Jenny were very clever, if they became the FBI, they would be famous! The four curios found and the curios would back to the museum.

Tell a story about lying or cheating. --- FOR THE SUNDAY CLASS
(400 words)

WORDS YOU MAY USE:

• cheater 騙子
• flamingo 紅鶴

The Chicken and the Egg: Ancient Mystery Solved?

By: TIME.com

REUTERS/Jamal Saidi

Philosophers and fertility experts can rest easy as the age-old question, “Which came first, the chicken or the egg?” finally has an answer: The chicken.

The research comes from British scientists out of Sheffield and Warwick universities. It all boils down to one protein—ovocledidin-17 (OC-17)—that is only found inside a chicken's ovaries, and is essential for eggshell formation.

Although the protein has been studied as part of eggshell development before, researchers used a super computer to ‘zoom-in' while a shell was forming, and found that it actually serves as a catalyst. Sheffield Professor John Harding hopes that this will aid in designing new materials.

Well, that's one mystery solved. But still no word yet on the meaning of life.

My Last Special Agent Job - amended

Sam and I went to the UK. We were special agents who came from Russia. We needed to go to the UK and find some information. We needed to help another four special agents. My special agent number was 3947. Sam was my partner and his number was 5219. Today, we went back to Russia and brought some data to the UK. Sam traveled by another airplane, and I traveled by an airplane in London and needed to change my flight.

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When I went to Yukon, Canada and went on another airplane. We met in the Barnaul Airport in Russia. We met the Russian president at his office. His assistant negotiated with the USA’s representatives. Then, we met with Russia Special Agent head. He gave us a new mission. We found four military information in the UK. Sam and I joined the Russian Special Agent Team. It was very famous in Russia.

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We went to the UK with another 30 people. They were all special agents. There were 5678 members in Special Agent Team. Some were in China, some were in Japan and some were in the UK and USA. They were all elites and geniuses. Our team was divided into four teams. There were eight members in one team. Our team needed to find the UK navy headquarters in the North Atlantic Ocean. The navy headquarters was next to the Clifden. They were hard to find and the guard was very stern.

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Sam and I stayed in a house which was near the UK navy headquarters. Other six members were trying to go inside. We were very worried, because other three teams got the military information. Now we were the slowest. One day, three members in our team were arrested by the police in the UK. The Russian Special Agent head found eight other members to help us. After one month, we got the military information.

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When we went back to Russia, I read from the newspaper that the arrested special agents would get life imprisonment. They would be very bored. The UK government said, “There were 32 Russian special agents stealing our military information!” They wanted to arrest us. The Russian President found an airplane and helped us to flee to another place. Sam and I went to South Africa and watched the World Cup. We were Argentina’s fans, but it had lost to Germany.

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After the football match, we would go to China and live there too. It was because things were not very expensive there. I thought our special agent job would stop for a long time!

My Last Military Intelligence

Sam and I went to the UK quickly. We were the special agent came from Russia. We needed to go to the UK and found some intelligence. We needed to help another four special agent. My special agent No. was 3947. Sam was my partner and he was special agent No. was 5219. Today, we went back Russia and brought some data to UK. Sam traveled another airplane, and I traveled an airplane in London and needed to favorable turn.

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When I went to Yukon from Canada and traveled another airplane there. We met in the Barnaul Airport from Russia. We went to presidential palace and met president there. His assistant negotiations with the USA’s representative. Then, we interviewed Russia Special Agent’s chairman. We got a new assignment from him, it was about found four military intelligences form the UK. Sam and I joined the 7794 Special Agent Team. It was very famous in Russia.

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We went to the UK with another 32 people. They were all special agent. 7794 Special Agent Team had 5678 member. Some were in China, some were in Japan and some were in the UK and USA. All were the elite and prodigy. Our team would into four teams. There were eight people in one team. Our team needed to found the UK navy headquarters in the North Atlantic Ocean. The navy headquarters was next to the Clifden. It was the hard things to do and the guard was very stern.

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Sam and I stayed in a house which was near the UK navy headquarters. Other six member were try to went to inside. We were very worried, because other three teams got the military intelligences. And now the slowly one was us. One day, three members in our team had caught by the police in the UK. We Russia Special Agent’s chairman found eight other members to help us. After one month, we got the military intelligence.

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When we went back the Russia, I read a report and heard the special agent who were our team member got the life imprisonment. It was very bored of them. The UK said, “There were 32 Russia’s special agent stole there military information. They were catching us. President found an airplane and helped us to go to another place. Sam and I went to South Africa and watched the World Cup. We were the Argentina’s fans, but it lost by Germany.

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After the football match, we would go to China and live there too. It was because the things were not very expensive. I thought our special agent job would stop a long time!

Write a story of 430 words about changing of identity.

Words you may use:

• dye the hair 染髮
• have a cosmetic surgery 整容
• have a transexual surgery 做變性手術
• special agent 特務
• witness 證人
• South Africa 南非
• World Cup世界杯
• Argentina 阿根廷
• Germany 德國
• football fans 足球迷

A World-famous Invention - amended

“How are you? Nice to meet you!” I said. “You are…oh you are the inventor! Where are you going now?” “I am going to my laboratory to do some experiments!”

“Hi, my name is Alex; I am an inventor who wants to invent something we can always use!” I said. Suddenly, someone ran after me! I was very scared and went back to my laboratory quickly. When I got back to the laboratory, I started my experimentation. I needed to find many things, so I worked hard there. It was very difficult.

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I had an assistant, Alan. He always helped me to find some materials for experiments. I always invented something will him and we needed to do many experiments. We invented many products, like a helicopter that did not need any fuel. We only need to put some liquid into the helicopter to drop the atmospheric pressure. Next, we used some water to mix with the liquid. Water’s density is lower than the liquid, so it will fly in the sky. Lastly, we added a rudder and other helicopter parts.

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Many producers wanted to buy the sketch of our invention, and wanted to get some money from it. After Alan and I published this invention, there were many reports about me on TV and in the Internet. I became famous around the world. After selling the invention sketch, Alan and I got three hundred million euro. We were very amazed because we got a lot of money.

After a few mouths, the producer made many helicopters and they gave us one. Many people bought them, because the cost was not high, so the price was not high too. The customers felt they were very convenient.

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After one mouth, we got the Nobel Prize. We invented this helicopter because we wanted to help the world. The helicopter would not pollute the environment. We got twenty-five prizes for environmental protection.

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Our invention became the number six world invention. The number one invention was the x-ray machine which was used in all hospitals. Our helicopter was very popular in the market too. It was not easy to be popular in a market. Although we got a lot of money and prizes, and we continued our work and we made a lot of other inventions.

Famous in the Market

“How are you? Likes to meet you!” I said. “You are…oh you are the inventor! Where are you going now?” “I am going to my laboratory and do some experimentation!”

“Hi, my name is Alex; I am an inventor about a sell’s things and wants to invent something that we can always use it in the market!” I said. What happen, someone ran after me! I was very scared and went back my laboratory quickly. After back the laboratory, I started my experimentation. I needed to find many things, so I work hard there. It was very hard to do it.

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I had a helper, he was Alan. He always helped me to find some stuffs for do experimentation. I always invented some thing will him and we do many experimentation do done an invention. We invent many products, like a. The helicopter could fly in the sky, but no need to add any fuel. We only use some matter and put it in a helicopter to make the atmospheric pressure drop off. Next used some water to mix some water, water’s density lower than the matter some it will fly in the sky and than, add a rudder and than add some plain helicopter’s stuff.

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Many producers wanted to get our invention sketch, and wanted to get some money in this invention. After Alan and I publish this invention, many report about on TV and online. I became famous in the world. After I sell the invention sketch, Alan and I got three hundred millions. We were very amazed because we got much money.

After few mouths, the producer held many helicopter and they gave us one. After done the helicopter, many people bought, it was because the cost not high, so the price not high too. Someone drive the helicopter and felt is was very convenient.

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After one mouths, we got the Nobel Prize, we invent this helicopter and wanted to help the world. The helicopter did not have any contamination things and it was very environmental protection. So we got the prize about environmental protection. We got twenty-five prizes about environmental protection and invent.

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Our invention became the rank six of the world invent. The first was x-ray machine it was very famous in hospital. Our helicopter was very famous in the market too. It was not easy to be famous in a market. Although we got much money and many prizes, we will continue our job and invented a lot of inventions for the people and the market. I needed to do my job see you next time, bye!

Write a story about a new product 產品you have invented 發明for the market市場. (430 words)

WORDS YOU MAY USE:

1. brand 品牌
2. technology 科技
3. producer 生產商
4. commission 佣金
5. contract合約
6. characteristic 特徵
7. packaging包裝
8. ingredients 成分
9. develop 發展
10. stock 股票
11. salary 薪金

My Last Minute Exam - amended

“Have you finished your revision?” My mum asked me in the afternoon. “I have finished it a long time ago!” I answered. Then, I played computer games. I was very interested in some ninja games. I thought tomorrow’s exam was science, so I needed to study the names of the laboratory utensils.

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I found my laboratory utensil book. My teacher said we would do an experiment using a Bunsen burner to boil some water in a beaker. Then, we needed to boil liquid in a test tube. We would have a written exam and a laboratory exam. After the revision, I went shopping with my friend in Tai Koo. I bought some clothes and a pair of shoes there. My friend asked me, “Have you finished your revision?” I was bored, “I have finished!” He asked, “I have a question about the exam. Can I ask you when I get home?” I said, “Okay, see you!”

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When I went back home in the evening, I was very amazed. There was a box of sushi on the table. I thought it was my dinner, so I ate it quickly. At night, my friend asked me a question on the phone, “Do you know how to do question No.63 on page 33?” I answered, “First, you put a Bunsen burner on the table, and then…” “No, I am talking about the math book! We will have the math exam tomorrow!” I was shocked and said, “I have revised the other subject! I need to work hard, bye!” He said, “Bye! See you at school!’

I was very scared that I would fail my math exam. Math was very hard for. I only had eight hours to revise, but I could not sleep! If I sleep, I would forget everything. I did not understand a lot of things, like how to measure the circumference and how to calculate the area.

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The next morning, I went to school. I asked my friend many questions on math. When the exam started, I had stomach ache and wanted to go to the toilet, I thought I had eaten too much sushi. I regretted it. When I went back to the classroom to continue my exam, I forgot everything. My friend gave me his answer sheet, and it was cheating. He was not afraid to be punished.

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After the exam, we both passed the exam, I was very happy but I thought I needed to reflect on myself.

My exam subject

“Have you finish you review?” My mum asked. “I finish it a lot!” I answered. My mum asked me in the afternoon. I reviewed my exam before two hours. I played the computer games. I was very interested by some ninja’s games. Suddenly, I remembered to study the science’s utensils. Tomorrow’s exam was the science.

I found my science’s utensils. My teacher said we will do the experiment about used the Bunsen burner to burn some water in a beaker. And we needed to burn a test tube’s liquid. We needed to do an experiment and examination paper. After I finished my review about experiment, I approximately my friend to Tai Koo and shopping there. I bought some clothes and a pair of shone there. My friend asked me, “Did you finish your review?” I answered bored, “I finish!” He asked, “I have a question about the exam, I went back home and ask you ok?” I said, “Okay, see you!”

When I went back home in the evening, I was very amazed. It was because there were some sushis in a table. I thought it was my dinner, so I ate it quickly. At night, my friend asked me a question in the mobile phone, “How to do the No.63 in page 33?” I answered, “First, you put a Bunsen burner, and then…” “No I ask the math book! We will have an exam about math tomorrow!” I was very surprised and said, “I review the other subject! I need to hard work, bye!” He said, “Bye! See you at school!’

I was very scared that I failed the math. The math was very hard to review. I only had eight hours to review it, but I could not sleep! If I sleep, I will forget my review’s scope. I did not know many things, like how to count the circumference and how to count the cm2. The exam came, I asked my friend, “How to do it?” I ask many questions.

When it was exam, I was very stomach-ache and wanted to go to the toilet, I thought I eat many sushi. I was regretting to eat many sushis. After went back the classroom to do my exam, I forget many things. I forget all the questions that I asked my friend. My friend give me the answer, it was cheat. He did not worry any question.

After the exam I got pass in the exam and he got pass too, I was very happy but I thought I needed to self-criticism myself.

I was a computer expert, and a policeman too! My job was not hard work. I could solve internet cases quickly. I had many friends in my team, Ben and Tom. They were computer experts too. But their computer techniques were not as good as mine.

One morning, I got a case about Al-Qaeda’s video. Osama bin Laden was the leader of the terrorist group. He said he would use his life to bomb the White House. Before I heard about this news, I had read the newspaper article about Laden’s death. When I googled Laden, I found in his blog that he would kill George W. Bush.

One-third of my team went to Bush’s house. Another one-third went to the White House. Ben, Tom and I stayed at the police station. We needed to find Laden. It was very easy for me, but I needed to be quicker than Laden. Laden said he would bomb the White House and kill Bush at six o’clock in the evening.

When I went to get the GPS at the White House, I saw Obama and he gave it to me. He said, “You have done very well!” I went back to the police station quickly, and wanted to arrest Laden. Ben used the GPS to find Laden. Laden was in London and we thought he did not have enough time to go to the USA. So I went back home and watched TV. The news reporter said, “There was a bomb in USA’s Times Square. Twenty-five people died and sixty-eight hurt. Al-Qaeda said they did it, and they would send a member to kill Bush and bomb the White House.

I went back to the station quickly, and Ben and Tom were working there. I found that Al-Qaeda member and arrested him. I found him in front of the White House. He was dressed in a military uniform. I was very happy that I could help Obama. He gave me a big bonus and promoted our whole team. But I knew the video was not real, because the “Laden” wore a wig.

Extreme situations

Write a story about one of the following extreme situations: (write 400 words)

-- 1 hour before the bomb explodes
-- 8 hours before your Math exam (and you just found that you've studied the wrong subject)

Words you may use:

• Math equation
• Bunsen burner
• cheat
• test tube holder
• area

Osama Bin Laden is real?

I was a sensible person of computer, and I was a policeman too! It was very relaxed to do my job. When it was some case about online, I could crack it quickly. I had many friends in my team, Ben and Tom. They were sensible person of computer too. But their computer techniques were not go of me. Jenny, Ken, Peter, Sam, Candy and Alan were the front line of our team.

One day morning, I heard a case, it was about an Al-Qaeda’s video. Osama bin Laden was the leader of the team. He said he will use his life to deep-fry the White House of the USA. Before I heard this news, I read the newspaper about Osama bin Laden died. When I went to online of Osama bin Laden, he used the blog to say he would kill the George Walker Bush.

Jenny, Ken and Peter went to George Walker Bush’s house. Sam, Candy and Alan went to White House of the USA. Ben, Tom and I stay in the office. We needed to find the Al-Qaeda’s leader Osama bin Laden. It was very easy for me, but needed to quicker than the Osama bin Laden. Osama bin Laden said he would deep-fry the White House of the USA and kill the George Walker Bush at six o’clock in the evening today.

When I went to buy a computer reader, I saw Barack Obama and he bought it to me. He said, “You are very well in the police, lubricated!” I went to the police office quickly, and wanted to catch the Osama bin Laden. Ben used the computer reader to find the Osama bin Laden. He was in London and we thought he could not enough time to go to the USA. So I went back home and watched TV. When it was TV news report, the reporter said, “There was a bomb in USA’s large building. Twenty-five people die and sixty-eight hurt. Al-Qaeda said it was their attack, and they would call a person to kill George Walker Bush.

I went back to the office quickly, Ben and Tom were working there. I found the Al-Qaeda’s member and went to caught him. I found him in front of the White House. He wore the clothes like the military personnel. I was very happy that I could help Barack Obama and he gave me some money and a work for our team that it was very high firewood. But I know the video is not real, because the “Osama bin Laden” used the leave of hair.

Write a story about something fake 冒充; 假 (people, things, places, events事情, animals, etc). (400 words)

Words you may use:

• go online 在線的
• go on the Internet 上網
• video 錄像
• Osama bin Laden 拉登
• Al-Qaeda 阿爾蓋達
• spacecraft 太空船
• soul 靈魂
• spacesuit 太空衣
• pirated 非法翻版
• Pakistan 巴基斯坦
• fake moustache 假鬍子
• terrorist 恐怖分子
• explode 爆炸
• Indian 印度
• South Pole 南極
• polar bear 北極熊

Naughty or Lovely Cousin? -amended

I went to my grandfather’s house today to visit my cousin. He was six months old. He was very quiet and lovely. So my sister always kissed his face. It was very smooth and I always touched his face. When my mother took him to my grandfather’s backyard, my aunt shouted, “Eat the watermelon, it is very yummy!”

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So my mother went to eat the watermelon. She put my cousin in the ground, and he crawled in the backyard. He always loved crawling around, and he crawled into the house. When my mother went back to the backyard, she was very scared. She told my aunt, and she was very worried.

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My mother thought he went out of the house, so my mother and aunt went out of the house quickly. They thought someone kidnapped him. I was in my uncle’s room playing computer games. Suddenly, my cousin crawled in. I did not know my mother and aunt were finding him. So I played with him happily.

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I asked my grandfather in the evening, “Where is my mum?” He answered, “She is finding your cousin!” I said, “My cousin was in uncle’s room!” He said, “Oh, thank you! Let me tell your mother!” After they went back to grandfather’s house, they scolded me but I did not know what happened!

Naughty or Lovely Cousin?

I went to my grandfather house today, I visited my brother. He was six months old, he was my cousin. He was very quite and lovely. So my sister always kissed his face. It was very smooth and I always y taught his face. When my mother hold him to the grand of the small park in my grandfather, my aunt shouted, “Eat the watermelon, it is very yummy!”

So my mother went to eat the watermelon. She put my cousin on the grand, and he climbed on the park. He loved climbed always, so he climbed in to the house. When my mother went back to the park, she was very scared. She taught to my cousin’s mother, aunt, she was very worried after she heard this thing.

My mother thought he was went out the house, so my mother and my aunt went out the house quickly. They thought someone caught him to the other place. I was in my uncle room and played the computer games. Suddenly, my cousin climbed in. I did not know my mother and aunt were finding him. So I played with him happily.

I asked my grandfather in the evening, “Where is my mum?” He answered, “She is finding you cousin!” I said, “My cousin was in uncle room!” He said, “Oh, thank you! I tell to you mother!” After they went back to grandfather house, they reproved me but I did not know what happen!

I went to my uncle’s birthday party today. My uncle was a brave and helpful fireman. So I bought a birthday gift for him. It was a Hong Kong Firemen’s badge in 1868. I thought he was very happy about it. I bought it in an old shop in Tai Koo which sold souvenirs of the Hong Kong Fire Department. I brought a bag with something inside

My great-great-grandfather was a fireman, and my father was a fireman too. I did not want to be a fireman, because I did not want to be a burnt like a roasted chicken. I thought it was too dangerous, and I was not brave. When I went to my uncle’s party, I forgot to bring the gift and I was very worried. According to my family rules, if we did not give our uncles and aunts a birthday gift, we needed to give them $100,000 and needed to wash the dishes for about ten years. I was very frightened, so I went to the toilet and climbed out of the party room.

I ran back home quickly and I found the birthday gift. It was in the drawer of my desk and I took it quickly. When my uncle wanted to go to the toilet, there was nobody inside. He did not know I went inside before him and he closed the window of the party room. When I went outside the toilet, I could not go back in the party room, because the window was closed.

I bought an electric saw and I cut the window quickly. I saw a boy going to the toilet. I was very unhappy, because the boy was my brother. Finally, I could not play computer for one month, it felt like staying in a prison!

What I Lost It

I went to my uncle birthday party today, my uncle was a brave and a helpful fireman. So I bought a birthday gift to him, it was a Hong Kong Fireman team’s badge from 1868 years. I thought I was very happy to him. I bought it in an old shop which sold the Hong Kong Fire Services Department in Tai Koo. I brought a bag there and I brought some things there.

My grand grand grand father did the fireman, so my father was a fireman too. I didn’t want to be a fireman, because I did not want to be a chicken stewed in rice wine. I thought it was not good to me, and I was no brave. When I went there, I forgot to bring the Hong Kong Fireman team 1868’s badge and I was very scared. If I did not give him a gift, I needed to give him $100000 and needed to wash dishes about ten years. I was very frightened of it, so I went to the toilet and climbed out the party room.

I ran back my home quickly and I found the birthday gift. It was in my table and I took it quickly. When my uncle wanted to go toilet, he saw there were not anyone. He did not know I went inside before he went toilet he and he closed the window of the party room. When I went outside the party room toilet, I could not go in, because the window was closed.

I bought an electric saw and I cut the window quickly. I saw a boy was going toilet, I did not want to go down that time, but I full down there. I was very not happy, because the boy was my brother. Finally I could not play computer one mouth, it liked I stay in a prison!

Write a story about you forgetting to bring something one morning. It should have a surprising ending.

Words:

• attitude towards life
• sense of time

My African Friend- amended

My friend arrived at Hong Kong today. He was very rich in his country. He was an African. I took him to street stalls to eat some Hong Kong delicacies. He was very happy, because there were different kinds of food.

He liked to eat egg puffs, he said they were very cute and delicious. I bought herbal jelly for him, and he shook suddenly when he was eating it. He said, “It is very cold for me, because I come from a very hot country! But it was very sweet, and I like it. Can you buy some hot jelly for me?” I answered, “Sorry, the jelly needs to be icy, if not it will turn bad and it cannot be eaten!”

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The next day, I took him to Ocean Park, because he had never seen any sea animals before he came here. When we went in, he saw some sharks and thought they were lovely. We went to the Headland Rides. He was very excited after playing in the Raging River. It was because he was very hot when he lined up for the Raging River, and he could cool down in the river.

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He was very happy in Hong Kong. He told me about cultural differences and their beautiful accessories made of bones. Then, he went back to Africa. I thought he would remember this trip.

My Strange Neighbour- amended

I was a From.1 student. I had a new neighbour and her name was Candy. She was very strange. She didn’t like to talk with others. She always went to the library. I thought her hobby was reading books.

One day, she moved in next door. When I went to school we ran into each other, I asked her some questions, but she did not answer me. When I went to school that day, I saw light in her pocket and I was curious. I went back home, and I saw from my window that she was eating sashimi. I thought there were enough for her to eat one year. There were forty-three boxes in her red refrigerator, twenty-nine in a green refrigerator, one hundred and forty-five in a black refrigerator. There were many sashimis all over the house.

I thought she was very rich. When it was six o’clock in the evening, her parents and sister came back. I could not see their faces, because they wore hats and masks. I wanted to know what they looked like. At school, she always drew during class. She drew quickly and she got many art awards. But I thought she was unhappy, because she did not smile.

One day, our Chinese teacher told us to work on a project with our neighbor. Candy gave me a letter which wrote: “Would you like to do this project at my home?” I was very happy, because I could see her family and I could eat the sashimi.

When I went to her home, I saw many games. I was very happy and played happily. I forgot to do my work, only Candy did the project. When it was three o’clock in the afternoon, I went to Candy and she scolded, “Don’t play anymore, do the project! If not, you can go back home and no need to come!”

I felt guilty and I did the project with her and I knew she was a serious girl. When it was six in the evening, her father was back. He was surprised to see me and asked, “Who is he?” Candy answered, “He is my classmate and he is doing a project with me!” Then, he took off his mask and I recognized him. He was the chief executive!

Candy said to me when her father went back to his room, “My mother was very busy and no time to cook dinner to me, so she bought many sashimi for me to eat!” I knew all the mysteries were solved and became friends with Candy.

My Africa's friend

Today was my friend gone to Hong Kong. He was very rich in his country. He was an Africa people and he was a blacks. When he went to Hong Kong, I took him to a shop to eat some Hong Kong’s food. He was very happy, because the shop had many different foods there.

He liked eat the egg puff, he said it was very cute and very delicious. I bought an agar-agar jelly to him. When he ate the agar-agar jelly, he shake suddenly. He said, “It is very cold for me, because it is icy and I was hot in my country, Africa! But it was very sweet, I like it. Can you buy some hot for me?” I answered, “Sorry, the agar-agar jelly need to icy, if no it will be turn bad and can not eat it!”

Next day I took him to Ocean Park, because he did not see any sea animals before he come here. When we went in, he saw the shark and thought it was lovely. We played the attraction. He liked the Dragon, Raging River, Eagle and Crazy Galleon. He was very happy after he played the Raging River. It was because when he was very hot by waited to play the Raging River, he could get some water to make him cold.

He was very happy to go to Hong Kong, he told some cultural difference and their accessory, bone, it was beautiful for them. After four o’clock, he went back Africa. I thought he could remember this trip.

Write a story abour a friend from abroad.

Words you may use:

• Africa非洲
• blacks黑人
• bone骨
• accessory 配飾
• cultural difference 文化差異
• snore 打鼾
• stay away from the cold 遠離寒冷

Contemporary Ninja- amended

Do ninjas exist? Yes, I am a ninja in Japan and my name is Leo. Everyone thinks ninjas are not real. They think it is a myth in Japan. There are many cartoons about ninjas. Only children believe in ninjas. But we are not the ninjas in cartoon. We do not know how to split ourselves. We can climb a mountain quickly.

There are many ninjas in the city. We can run on a rope quickly, and we have a lot of weapons like the “kunai” and the “shuriken”. They are convenient weapons for killing our enemies. The “kusarigama” is a very hard to catch and is our best weapon.

When we were twenty years old, we needed to leave our village and go to a city. It was my birthday, and I was both happy and sad. I was twenty years old, and I needed to leave my village. I would work in the city. Although I could go back to the village, I wanted to give some money for my family.

I was very interested in working in the city. I was the member of a moving company. I had a lot of strength, so I could carry many goods every time. My weapons were heavier than the goods. And now, I lived in Tokyo.

One day, my pet owl, Ken, gave a letter to me which wrote: “I was the chief fireman in Japan. I know you have a lot of strength, so I want you to become a fireman!” I was very happy, and when I went inside the scene of a fire, I used my ninja tricks to save the people and put out the fire. I became the chief fireman in Japan.

I was very happy to become rich. I went to my village quickly. There were many ninjas. My friend, Jacky, and my classmate, Kenny, became the teachers in the Ninja School. I was very bored in the city, so I found a girlfriend. She was called Jenny, and I taught her to become a female ninja. After one year, we got married in my village.

I was very happy and I wanted to become the best ninja. But my wife, Jenny, was the best ninja in our village. We worked for the president now. We became rich in Japan and lived happily.