20101010
Debate
Should children move out of home and live on their own when they are 18?
YES
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So that they can be independent(獨立)
Ø WHY: want to be an adult(成人)
Ø Earn(賺) money(錢)
Ø Prepare themselves for their future family
Ø Do housework
Ø Save (儲蓄) money
Ø Handle disputes (處理爭執)
Ø Face the reality (面對)
Ø Deal with pressure (處理壓力) -- love, work, friendship (友誼),
Ø Go outside for more experience (經驗), and be a mature (成熟) person
Call the police, and parents for help
20100923
Female Doctor - amended
Jenny is a doctor who works in
But many nurses disliked her. Many doctors said she was a coward, because she was scared of blood. Many people in the hospital did not like her. There were no female doctors, because many people thought women were timid. Many girls did not like a job with blood. But Jenny was very interested in it. She was a heart disease doctor and now she was the chief surgeon.
There was a serious problem in 2003. SARS visited
Jenny was very happy at that time, her team worked very hard and they helped a lot of people too. One day, Jenny was working in the hospital at night. Suddenly, two SARS patients were sent to the hospital; Jenny’s partner helped them quickly. Her partner did not wear any protection clothes. When the two patients got better, her partner had SARS. Jenny was very sad and thought she would die.
After a few months, a doctor invented some medicine and cured Jenny’s partner. Jenny was very happy and her partner became a World Health Organization member. After a few days, Jenny became the
Jenny was a doctor who was work in
When she became a doctor, there were many nurses disliked her too. Many doctor said she was scared blood and she was a coward in the hospital disliked her too. There were not girl be the doctor, because the girl looked like a coward. Many girls did not like to do the job which was bloody. But Jenny was very interested of it. Jenny was a heart disease doctor in there and now she was the hospital manager.
There was a difficult problem in 2003s. Atypical pneumonia visited
Jenny was very happy that time, her team was very hard and they helped many people too. One day, Jenny went to the Hospital at night. Suddenly, there were two people got the atypical pneumonia; Jenny’s partner helped the people quickly. Her partner did not wear any defense against chemical weapons clothes. After the two people safe, her partner got the atypical pneumonia. Jenny was very sad and thought she would die.
20100912
My Shocking Concert -amended
“Good evening everyone.” I am a dancer and singer in
“I believe I can fly…” I sang. The next day, I sang a song called “Fly In The Sky”. Suddenly, I lose my voice and could not sing. I was very scared, and the stagehand turned off all the lights on stage. I went to the backstage, and suddenly something exploded, and I was hurt. I didn’t know what happened. I thought it was lucky for me, because I had only hurt my left hand, and I did not need to sing that day. I had lost my voice, but the explosion helped me to go back to the backstage.
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I went back home and thought about how I could sing better. I had lost my memories of the explosion. When I left home, many reporters found me and asked me many questions. I was very scared so I hailed a taxi and left quickly. I was very confused, “Why are there so many reporters?” I thought for a long time, but I did not know what happened. I went to my management company, and asked my assistant, “Why were there so many reporters outside my home?” He said, “There was an explosion in your show, did you know?”
Suddenly, I recalled the explosion. I watched the closed-circuit television. There was a suspicious man near the stage, and then the explosion occurred, and I went backstage. I thought the man put a bomb near the stage. I could not see the man clearly. I called the police and they investigated the Hong Kong Coliseum. They found the crime scene and found a bomb near the crime scene.
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I had a concert on the next day, and I sang a song for the police and fans. When I sang the last song, a bomb exploded and the police helped me leave the stage. Suddenly, I heard a man fired a gun, and I was scared. After a few minutes, the police and I left the Hong Kong Coliseum. A man ran towards my way, and he had got a gun. I was very worried that he would kill me, so I stood still. Two policemen went in front of me, and they arrested him. The man said, “It’s my pleasure to meet you!” I still remember those words.
20100812
Serious Injury in Europe - amended
Cindy and I visited John in
When this explosion happened, there were 1,400 people inside the hotel and mall. The hotel was built on top of the mall. So the mall exploded and the hotel collapsed together. The police thought it happened because of negligence. The explosion happened at 1:12 p.m. on 14th Match. John was very lucky in the explosion. Other people broke their bones.
John worked very hard in physiotherapy, he needed to learn how to use his left hand because his right hand was hurt. When he knew how to use his left hand, he needed to check his right hand too. Now, his right hand had changed its colour. His burn was very serious, but he recovered very quickly. We went to his house to help him treat his hand.
When I talked to him, he told me a scary case. His father died twenty-nine years ago. His father heard the song “Gloomy Sunday”. He said, “When I was small, I heard the first half of ‘Gloomy Sunday’ and it was the scariest song in the world. Now I had this phonograph record in my mother’s house! But I locked it in a box, and I threw the key into the river.”
I was very scared, this song has “killed” more than 100 people, and it was a mystery. Then, Cindy and I left
20100811
“Good evening everyone.” I am a dancer and singer in
“I believe I can fly…” I sang. The next day, I sang a song called “Fly In The Sky”. Suddenly, I lose my voice and could not sing. I was very scared, and the stagehand turned off all the lights on stage. I went to the backstage, and suddenly something exploded, and I was hurt. I didn’t know what happened. I thought it was lucky for me, because I had only hurt my left hand, and I did not need to sing that day. I had lost my voice, but the explosion helped me to go back to the backstage. //
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I went back home and thought some idea, how could I sing music better. When I went out my home, many reporters found me and asked me many questions. I was very scared and I found a Taxi and left quickly. I was very question, “Why my home had many reporter.” I thought and thought, but I could not know what happened. I went to my company; I went back company and found my assistant and asked a question to him, “Why there were many reporters outside my home?” He said, “Your show had a bang, did you knew?”
Suddenly, I remember it, and I watched the closed-circuit television. There was a dubious man near the stage, and than the explode occur, and I went back the backstage. I though the man put a bomb near the stage. I could not watch the man clearly. I called the police and they investigated the
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I had a concert next day, and I would sound the song for the police and fans. When I sang the last song, a bang bombed and the police helped me to leave the stage. Suddenly, I heard a man opened fire, and I scared. After a few minutes, the police and I left the
20100805
Big Hurt of Europe
Cindy and I visited France and friend, John. We were the doctor in the
Before this catastrophe, there were 1400 people inside the hotel and centre. The hotel and centre were together and the hotel was built on top of the centre. So the centre bang and the hotel would collapse together too. The police thought it was a human negligence so it would have this bang. The bang was happened at 1:12 p.m. at Friday in 14th Match. John was very luck in the bang. Another people some fracture of bones.
John was very hard in the Physical Therapy, he needed to know how to use his left hand to work. When he knew how to use his left hand, he needed to set a date to check his right hand. At now, his hand was turn flesh. His burn was very critical, but his since the viability was very fast. When I went to his house we helped him to treat.
When I talked to him, he said a scared case, his father die before twenty-nine years. His father heard the music “Gloomy Sunday”. He said, “When I was small I heard the ‘Gloomy Sunday’s first half and it was I scared music in the world. Now I had this phonograph record at my mother house! But I lock it in a box, and I threw the key into the river.
I was very scared of it, this music “kill” more than 100 people, and it was a mystery. Then, Cindy and I went to next place and visited a girl called Candy. She was the hurter in the bang, and his boy friend died. It was a big hurt on her, she said it was a very unlucky days of her. It was Saturday that day. After we therapy her, we went back the
20100801
Clever Cheaters - amended
It was my birthday today, and my wife and I went to museum. The museum looked like a UFO. When we went inside, we saw many antiques. There were some vases and archives. I thought it was a museum about ancient
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The security guard looked like Tommy. I thought he was Tommy, so I went after him. Suddenly, he pointed a knife at a girl’s chest and took her as a hostage. I wanted to help the girl, but I could not do anything. When Tommy and the girl went outside, he drove a car and escaped. I was very worried about the girl. The police arrived, and a policeman counted how many pieces of antiques had disappeared. Four pieces of antiques had disappeared, and they were worth $600,000. They were not extremely expensive, but they were very precious in
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My wife and I went back to our suite first; we did not have any plans. It was very difficult; we searched for the museum on the net. There were many security guards. We found something about the girl in Tommy’s blog. The girl was called Jenny. She was a cheater too. After a few minutes, we heard that Jenny was safe, and she went back to the
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Tommy went to Hong Kong by boat and he drove an airplane back to
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Although Tommy and Jenny had pretended to be a lot of people, my wife finally arrested them in the
20100728
Clever Cheater
Today was my birthday, my wife and I went to a museum. The museum looked like the UFO. When we went inside, we saw many curios; there were some vase and some far back in history’s data. I thought it was a museum about far back in history’s
The peace protection looked like Tommy; Tommy always went to museum and stole some curios. When I went after him, he used a knife and point to a girl’s heart. I wanted to help the girl, but the girl did not have any power of resistance. So I could not do anything. When Tommy and the girl, they drove a car and left there. I was very worried the girl. When some policemen came to here, a policeman came to there and count how many products disappeared. There were only four curios disappeared, but it was value $309600000. It was not so expensive, but it was very rare in
My wife and I went back our hotel first; we did not have any outline. It was very difficult; we used our computer and found some data about the museum. There were many peace protections. When we found a peace protection, we saw the girl. The girl was called Jenny. She was a cheater too. After few minutes, we heard Jenny got safe, and she went travel by the airplane. Jenny would go to the
Tommy went to Hong Kong by boat and he drove an airplane back to
Although Tommy and Jenny pass oneself off as many job, but my wife caught them in the
20100715
The Chicken and the Egg: Ancient Mystery Solved?
By: TIME.com
REUTERS/Jamal Saidi
Philosophers and fertility experts can rest easy as the age-old question, “Which came first, the chicken or the egg?” finally has an answer: The chicken.
The research comes from British scientists out of Sheffield and Warwick universities. It all boils down to one protein—ovocledidin-17 (OC-17)—that is only found inside a chicken's ovaries, and is essential for eggshell formation.
Although the protein has been studied as part of eggshell development before, researchers used a super computer to ‘zoom-in' while a shell was forming, and found that it actually serves as a catalyst. Sheffield Professor John Harding hopes that this will aid in designing new materials.
Well, that's one mystery solved. But still no word yet on the meaning of life.
20100711
My Last Special Agent Job - amended
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My Last Military Intelligence
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20100704
A World-famous Invention - amended
“How are you? Nice to meet you!” I said. “You are…oh you are the inventor! Where are you going now?” “I am going to my laboratory to do some experiments!”
“Hi, my name is Alex; I am an inventor who wants to invent something we can always use!” I said. Suddenly, someone ran after me! I was very scared and went back to my laboratory quickly. When I got back to the laboratory, I started my experimentation. I needed to find many things, so I worked hard there. It was very difficult.
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I had an assistant, Alan. He always helped me to find some materials for experiments. I always invented something will him and we needed to do many experiments. We invented many products, like a helicopter that did not need any fuel. We only need to put some liquid into the helicopter to drop the atmospheric pressure. Next, we used some water to mix with the liquid. Water’s density is lower than the liquid, so it will fly in the sky. Lastly, we added a rudder and other helicopter parts.
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Many producers wanted to buy the sketch of our invention, and wanted to get some money from it. After Alan and I published this invention, there were many reports about me on TV and in the Internet. I became famous around the world. After selling the invention sketch, Alan and I got three hundred million euro. We were very amazed because we got a lot of money.
After a few mouths, the producer made many helicopters and they gave us one. Many people bought them, because the cost was not high, so the price was not high too. The customers felt they were very convenient.
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After one mouth, we got the Nobel Prize. We invented this helicopter because we wanted to help the world. The helicopter would not pollute the environment. We got twenty-five prizes for environmental protection.
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Our invention became the number six world invention. The number one invention was the x-ray machine which was used in all hospitals. Our helicopter was very popular in the market too. It was not easy to be popular in a market. Although we got a lot of money and prizes, and we continued our work and we made a lot of other inventions.
Famous in the Market
“How are you? Likes to meet you!” I said. “You are…oh you are the inventor! Where are you going now?” “I am going to my laboratory and do some experimentation!”
“Hi, my name is Alex; I am an inventor about a sell’s things and wants to invent something that we can always use it in the market!” I said. What happen, someone ran after me! I was very scared and went back my laboratory quickly. After back the laboratory, I started my experimentation. I needed to find many things, so I work hard there. It was very hard to do it.
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I had a helper, he was Alan. He always helped me to find some stuffs for do experimentation. I always invented some thing will him and we do many experimentation do done an invention. We invent many products, like a. The helicopter could fly in the sky, but no need to add any fuel. We only use some matter and put it in a helicopter to make the atmospheric pressure drop off. Next used some water to mix some water, water’s density lower than the matter some it will fly in the sky and than, add a rudder and than add some plain helicopter’s stuff.
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Many producers wanted to get our invention sketch, and wanted to get some money in this invention. After Alan and I publish this invention, many report about on TV and online. I became famous in the world. After I sell the invention sketch, Alan and I got three hundred millions. We were very amazed because we got much money.
After few mouths, the producer held many helicopter and they gave us one. After done the helicopter, many people bought, it was because the cost not high, so the price not high too. Someone drive the helicopter and felt is was very convenient.
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After one mouths, we got the Nobel Prize, we invent this helicopter and wanted to help the world. The helicopter did not have any contamination things and it was very environmental protection. So we got the prize about environmental protection. We got twenty-five prizes about environmental protection and invent.
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Our invention became the rank six of the world invent. The first was x-ray machine it was very famous in hospital. Our helicopter was very famous in the market too. It was not easy to be famous in a market. Although we got much money and many prizes, we will continue our job and invented a lot of inventions for the people and the market. I needed to do my job see you next time, bye!
20100627
My Last Minute Exam - amended
“Have you finished your revision?” My mum asked me in the afternoon. “I have finished it a long time ago!” I answered. Then, I played computer games. I was very interested in some ninja games. I thought tomorrow’s exam was science, so I needed to study the names of the laboratory utensils.
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I found my laboratory utensil book. My teacher said we would do an experiment using a Bunsen burner to boil some water in a beaker. Then, we needed to boil liquid in a test tube. We would have a written exam and a laboratory exam. After the revision, I went shopping with my friend in Tai Koo. I bought some clothes and a pair of shoes there. My friend asked me, “Have you finished your revision?” I was bored, “I have finished!” He asked, “I have a question about the exam. Can I ask you when I get home?” I said, “Okay, see you!”
When I went back home in the evening, I was very amazed. There was a box of sushi on the table. I thought it was my dinner, so I ate it quickly. At night, my friend asked me a question on the phone, “Do you know how to do question No.63 on page 33?” I answered, “First, you put a Bunsen burner on the table, and then…” “No, I am talking about the math book! We will have the math exam tomorrow!” I was shocked and said, “I have revised the other subject! I need to work hard, bye!” He said, “Bye! See you at school!’
I was very scared that I would fail my math exam. Math was very hard for. I only had eight hours to revise, but I could not sleep! If I sleep, I would forget everything. I did not understand a lot of things, like how to measure the circumference and how to calculate the area.
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The next morning, I went to school. I asked my friend many questions on math. When the exam started, I had stomach ache and wanted to go to the toilet, I thought I had eaten too much sushi. I regretted it. When I went back to the classroom to continue my exam, I forgot everything. My friend gave me his answer sheet, and it was cheating. He was not afraid to be punished.
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After the exam, we both passed the exam, I was very happy but I thought I needed to reflect on myself.
My exam subject
“Have you finish you review?” My mum asked. “I finish it a lot!” I answered. My mum asked me in the afternoon. I reviewed my exam before two hours. I played the computer games. I was very interested by some ninja’s games. Suddenly, I remembered to study the science’s utensils. Tomorrow’s exam was the science.
I found my science’s utensils. My teacher said we will do the experiment about used the Bunsen burner to burn some water in a beaker. And we needed to burn a test tube’s liquid. We needed to do an experiment and examination paper. After I finished my review about experiment, I approximately my friend to Tai Koo and shopping there. I bought some clothes and a pair of shone there. My friend asked me, “Did you finish your review?” I answered bored, “I finish!” He asked, “I have a question about the exam, I went back home and ask you ok?” I said, “Okay, see you!”
When I went back home in the evening, I was very amazed. It was because there were some sushis in a table. I thought it was my dinner, so I ate it quickly. At night, my friend asked me a question in the mobile phone, “How to do the No
I was very scared that I failed the math. The math was very hard to review. I only had eight hours to review it, but I could not sleep! If I sleep, I will forget my review’s scope. I did not know many things, like how to count the circumference and how to count the cm2. The exam came, I asked my friend, “How to do it?” I ask many questions.
When it was exam, I was very stomach-ache and wanted to go to the toilet, I thought I eat many sushi. I was regretting to eat many sushis. After went back the classroom to do my exam, I forget many things. I forget all the questions that I asked my friend. My friend give me the answer, it was cheat. He did not worry any question.
After the exam I got pass in the exam and he got pass too, I was very happy but I thought I needed to self-criticism myself.
I was a computer expert, and a policeman too! My job was not hard work. I could solve internet cases quickly. I had many friends in my team, Ben and Tom. They were computer experts too. But their computer techniques were not as good as mine.
One morning, I got a case about Al-Qaeda’s video. Osama bin Laden was the leader of the terrorist group. He said he would use his life to bomb the White House. Before I heard about this news, I had read the newspaper article about Laden’s death. When I googled Laden, I found in his blog that he would kill George W. Bush.
One-third of my team went to Bush’s house. Another one-third went to the White House. Ben, Tom and I stayed at the police station. We needed to find Laden. It was very easy for me, but I needed to be quicker than Laden. Laden said he would bomb the White House and kill Bush at six o’clock in the evening.
When I went to get the GPS at the White House, I saw Obama and he gave it to me. He said, “You have done very well!” I went back to the police station quickly, and wanted to arrest Laden. Ben used the GPS to find Laden. Laden was in
I went back to the station quickly, and Ben and Tom were working there. I found that Al-Qaeda member and arrested him. I found him in front of the White House. He was dressed in a military uniform. I was very happy that I could help Obama. He gave me a big bonus and promoted our whole team. But I knew the video was not real, because the “Laden” wore a wig.
20100623
Extreme situations
-- 1 hour before the bomb explodes
-- 8 hours before your Math exam (and you just found that you've studied the wrong subject)
Words you may use:
- Math equation
- Bunsen burner
- cheat
- test tube holder
- area