20101010

Reading

http://student.thestandard.com.hk/student/ls_content_vpdf.asp?id=611

Debate

Should children move out of home and live on their own when they are 18?

YES

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So that they can be independent(
獨立)

Ø WHY: want to be an adult(成人)

Ø Earn() money()

Ø Prepare themselves for their future family

Ø Do housework

Ø Save (儲蓄) money

Ø Handle disputes (處理爭執)

Ø Face the reality (面對)

Ø Deal with pressure (處理壓力) -- love, work, friendship (友誼),

Ø Go outside for more experience (經驗), and be a mature (成熟) person

Call the police, and parents for help

20100923

Female Doctor - amended

Jenny is a doctor who works in Hong Kong Hospital since 1998. She goes to the hospital every day. She is not famous now, but she was famous in 1998. She became a doctor when she was nineteen years old. There were not many female doctors at that time. Jenny thought her job was boring at first. She went to the Shatin Hospital to be a nurse at first. After a few months, she became a doctor. She was very happy.

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But many nurses disliked her. Many doctors said she was a coward, because she was scared of blood. Many people in the hospital did not like her. There were no female doctors, because many people thought women were timid. Many girls did not like a job with blood. But Jenny was very interested in it. She was a heart disease doctor and now she was the chief surgeon.

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There was a serious problem in 2003. SARS visited Hong Kong, and many people died. Jenny had to take care of SARS patients. At that time, there were many girls becoming doctors and helping many people. Many female doctors became famous in 2003. There was no more hatred in the hospital.

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Jenny was very happy at that time, her team worked very hard and they helped a lot of people too. One day, Jenny was working in the hospital at night. Suddenly, two SARS patients were sent to the hospital; Jenny’s partner helped them quickly. Her partner did not wear any protection clothes. When the two patients got better, her partner had SARS. Jenny was very sad and thought she would die.

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After a few months, a doctor invented some medicine and cured Jenny’s partner. Jenny was very happy and her partner became a World Health Organization member. After a few days, Jenny became the Hong Kong Hospital manager. Jenny cured a lot of patients. She got the Good Citizen of the Year Award and she went to the UK next year. She would still be a doctor and she will bring her family there. She would live there for a long time.

Jenny was a doctor who was work in Hong Kong Hospital. She did the job form 1998s. She always went to hospital everyday. Always she was not famous now, she was famous in 1998s. She was nineteen years old gone she started to be a doctor. There were not many girls be doctor in 1998s. Jenny was very bored to be a doctor at first. She went to the Sha Tin Hospital to be a nurse there at first. After few mouths, she was a doctor. She was very happy when she became a doctor.

When she became a doctor, there were many nurses disliked her too. Many doctor said she was scared blood and she was a coward in the hospital disliked her too. There were not girl be the doctor, because the girl looked like a coward. Many girls did not like to do the job which was bloody. But Jenny was very interested of it. Jenny was a heart disease doctor in there and now she was the hospital manager.

There was a difficult problem in 2003s. Atypical pneumonia visited Hong Kong, and many people died. Jenny became the doctor who needed to help the people who got the atypical pneumonia. At that time, there were many girls became doctor and helped many people. There was many girls’ doctor famous in 2003s. There was not which doctor disliked which doctor.

Jenny was very happy that time, her team was very hard and they helped many people too. One day, Jenny went to the Hospital at night. Suddenly, there were two people got the atypical pneumonia; Jenny’s partner helped the people quickly. Her partner did not wear any defense against chemical weapons clothes. After the two people safe, her partner got the atypical pneumonia. Jenny was very sad and thought she would die.

After few mouths, a doctor invented a medicine and helped her partner that day. Jenny was very happy and her partner became world health organization member too. After few days, Jenny became the Hong Kong Hospital manager. Jenny always helped other to turn good. She got the Good Citizen of the Year Award and she went to the UK next year, and she would be go there and be the doctor there. Jenny went to there and she will bring her family there too. She would live there fo

20100912

Write a story about a person getting into a profession 行業 which is done mostly 通常by his/her opposite sex異性.
(200 words)

My Shocking Concert -amended

“Good evening everyone.” I am a dancer and singer in Hong Kong, and everyone knows who I am. If you want to see me perform dance, you can come to my shows at the Hong Kong Coliseum. They will be full quickly so get your tickets now.

“I believe I can fly…” I sang. The next day, I sang a song called “Fly In The Sky”. Suddenly, I lose my voice and could not sing. I was very scared, and the stagehand turned off all the lights on stage. I went to the backstage, and suddenly something exploded, and I was hurt. I didn’t know what happened. I thought it was lucky for me, because I had only hurt my left hand, and I did not need to sing that day. I had lost my voice, but the explosion helped me to go back to the backstage.

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I went back home and thought about how I could sing better. I had lost my memories of the explosion. When I left home, many reporters found me and asked me many questions. I was very scared so I hailed a taxi and left quickly. I was very confused, “Why are there so many reporters?” I thought for a long time, but I did not know what happened. I went to my management company, and asked my assistant, “Why were there so many reporters outside my home?” He said, “There was an explosion in your show, did you know?”

Suddenly, I recalled the explosion. I watched the closed-circuit television. There was a suspicious man near the stage, and then the explosion occurred, and I went backstage. I thought the man put a bomb near the stage. I could not see the man clearly. I called the police and they investigated the Hong Kong Coliseum. They found the crime scene and found a bomb near the crime scene.

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I had a concert on the next day, and I sang a song for the police and fans. When I sang the last song, a bomb exploded and the police helped me leave the stage. Suddenly, I heard a man fired a gun, and I was scared. After a few minutes, the police and I left the Hong Kong Coliseum. A man ran towards my way, and he had got a gun. I was very worried that he would kill me, so I stood still. Two policemen went in front of me, and they arrested him. The man said, “It’s my pleasure to meet you!” I still remember those words.

20100812

Serious Injury in Europe - amended

Cindy and I visited John in France. We were doctors in the UK. John had a serious injury two years ago. It happened in 2008, when a bomb exploded in a shopping mall in France. When John was passing by the mall, a sweater which was on fire flew at John. John’s hand was hurt by it. Many parts of his body were burnt and he could not use his right hand for about five years. There were 369 deaths and 798 injuries.

When this explosion happened, there were 1,400 people inside the hotel and mall. The hotel was built on top of the mall. So the mall exploded and the hotel collapsed together. The police thought it happened because of negligence. The explosion happened at 1:12 p.m. on 14th Match. John was very lucky in the explosion. Other people broke their bones.

John worked very hard in physiotherapy, he needed to learn how to use his left hand because his right hand was hurt. When he knew how to use his left hand, he needed to check his right hand too. Now, his right hand had changed its colour. His burn was very serious, but he recovered very quickly. We went to his house to help him treat his hand.

When I talked to him, he told me a scary case. His father died twenty-nine years ago. His father heard the song “Gloomy Sunday”. He said, “When I was small, I heard the first half of ‘Gloomy Sunday’ and it was the scariest song in the world. Now I had this phonograph record in my mother’s house! But I locked it in a box, and I threw the key into the river.”

I was very scared, this song has “killed” more than 100 people, and it was a mystery. Then, Cindy and I left France and visited a girl called Candy. She was hurt in the explosion, and her boyfriend died. It was devastating to her, and she said it was an unlucky day for her. After we healed her, we went back to the UK. But I was very curious about John’s father. How did he died?

20100811

“Good evening everyone.” I am a dancer and singer in Hong Kong, and everyone knows who I am. If you want to see me perform dance, you can come to my shows at the Hong Kong Coliseum. They will be full quickly so get your tickets now.

“I believe I can fly…” I sang. The next day, I sang a song called “Fly In The Sky”. Suddenly, I lose my voice and could not sing. I was very scared, and the stagehand turned off all the lights on stage. I went to the backstage, and suddenly something exploded, and I was hurt. I didn’t know what happened. I thought it was lucky for me, because I had only hurt my left hand, and I did not need to sing that day. I had lost my voice, but the explosion helped me to go back to the backstage. //

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I went back home and thought some idea, how could I sing music better. When I went out my home, many reporters found me and asked me many questions. I was very scared and I found a Taxi and left quickly. I was very question, “Why my home had many reporter.” I thought and thought, but I could not know what happened. I went to my company; I went back company and found my assistant and asked a question to him, “Why there were many reporters outside my home?” He said, “Your show had a bang, did you knew?”

Suddenly, I remember it, and I watched the closed-circuit television. There was a dubious man near the stage, and than the explode occur, and I went back the backstage. I though the man put a bomb near the stage. I could not watch the man clearly. I called the police and they investigated the Hong Kong coliseum. They found a char place and found a bomb next to the char place.

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I had a concert next day, and I would sound the song for the police and fans. When I sang the last song, a bang bombed and the police helped me to leave the stage. Suddenly, I heard a man opened fire, and I scared. After a few minutes, the police and I left the Hong Kong coliseum. I man ran to my way, and he got a gun. I was very worried he will kill me, so I stood there only. Two policemen went in front of me, and they caught him. The man saw, “I could see you were my luck!” Now, I remember this word.

20100805

Write a story about you performing in a show. You can be a singer, dancer, athlete, magician, etc.
(420 words)

Big Hurt of Europe

Cindy and I visited France and friend, John. We were the doctor in the UK. John had a big hurt before two years. It was happened in 2008, France’s certain centre took place a big bang. John was outside the centre, but he got hurt. Although John was only get past the centre, a clothes afire and flew to John. John encountered the clothes and John’s hand hurt by it. His hand afire and had many place got hurt and could not used his right hand about five years. The catastrophe was called Hotel’s centre big bang. There were 369 people die and 798 people hurt.

Before this catastrophe, there were 1400 people inside the hotel and centre. The hotel and centre were together and the hotel was built on top of the centre. So the centre bang and the hotel would collapse together too. The police thought it was a human negligence so it would have this bang. The bang was happened at 1:12 p.m. at Friday in 14th Match. John was very luck in the bang. Another people some fracture of bones.

John was very hard in the Physical Therapy, he needed to know how to use his left hand to work. When he knew how to use his left hand, he needed to set a date to check his right hand. At now, his hand was turn flesh. His burn was very critical, but his since the viability was very fast. When I went to his house we helped him to treat.

When I talked to him, he said a scared case, his father die before twenty-nine years. His father heard the music “Gloomy Sunday”. He said, “When I was small I heard the ‘Gloomy Sunday’s first half and it was I scared music in the world. Now I had this phonograph record at my mother house! But I lock it in a box, and I threw the key into the river.

I was very scared of it, this music “kill” more than 100 people, and it was a mystery. Then, Cindy and I went to next place and visited a girl called Candy. She was the hurter in the bang, and his boy friend died. It was a big hurt on her, she said it was a very unlucky days of her. It was Saturday that day. After we therapy her, we went back the UK. But I was very question of John’s father. What hurt did his father had?

20100801

Clever Cheaters - amended

It was my birthday today, and my wife and I went to museum. The museum looked like a UFO. When we went inside, we saw many antiques. There were some vases and archives. I thought it was a museum about ancient China. I was a FBI coming from the USA. It was my first time going to China. My wife was a FBI too. We needed to find a cheater called Tommy. He was an internationally wanted person. After we visited the museum, we found a tuck shop in the museum. When we went inside the shop, we heard the sound of glass breaking outside the shop. I went outside and saw a security guard.

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The security guard looked like Tommy. I thought he was Tommy, so I went after him. Suddenly, he pointed a knife at a girl’s chest and took her as a hostage. I wanted to help the girl, but I could not do anything. When Tommy and the girl went outside, he drove a car and escaped. I was very worried about the girl. The police arrived, and a policeman counted how many pieces of antiques had disappeared. Four pieces of antiques had disappeared, and they were worth $600,000. They were not extremely expensive, but they were very precious in China.

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My wife and I went back to our suite first; we did not have any plans. It was very difficult; we searched for the museum on the net. There were many security guards. We found something about the girl in Tommy’s blog. The girl was called Jenny. She was a cheater too. After a few minutes, we heard that Jenny was safe, and she went back to the USA by airplane. She was Tommy’s partner. We called the FBI and arrested her in the USA airport.

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Tommy went to Hong Kong by boat and he drove an airplane back to USA. Although he did not know how to drive an airplane, he had played a computer game about airplanes. When he went back to the USA, he knew that his partner was arrested by the police. He was very worried about her, so he pretended to be a policeman and released his partner. Then, we went back to the USA quickly.

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Although Tommy and Jenny had pretended to be a lot of people, my wife finally arrested them in the UK! I thought Tommy and Jenny were very clever. If they became FBIs, they would be successful! The four antiques were found and sent back to the museum.

20100728

Write a story about an injury 受傷. (400 words)

WORDS YOU MAY USE:
  • experience 經歷
  • accident 意外

Clever Cheater

Today was my birthday, my wife and I went to a museum. The museum looked like the UFO. When we went inside, we saw many curios; there were some vase and some far back in history’s data. I thought it was a museum about far back in history’s China. I was a FBI came form the USA. It was my first time to go to China. My wife was a FBI too. We needed to find a cheater, Tommy, he was an international wanted persons. After we visited the museum, we found a snack shop in the museum. When we went to the shop, we heard some glass’s voice. I went there and saw a peace protection.

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The peace protection looked like Tommy; Tommy always went to museum and stole some curios. When I went after him, he used a knife and point to a girl’s heart. I wanted to help the girl, but the girl did not have any power of resistance. So I could not do anything. When Tommy and the girl, they drove a car and left there. I was very worried the girl. When some policemen came to here, a policeman came to there and count how many products disappeared. There were only four curios disappeared, but it was value $309600000. It was not so expensive, but it was very rare in China.

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My wife and I went back our hotel first; we did not have any outline. It was very difficult; we used our computer and found some data about the museum. There were many peace protections. When we found a peace protection, we saw the girl. The girl was called Jenny. She was a cheater too. After few minutes, we heard Jenny got safe, and she went travel by the airplane. Jenny would go to the USA, she was a cheater, and Tommy was her partners. We called the FBI members in the USA and caught her in the airplane of the USA.

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Tommy went to Hong Kong by boat and he drove an airplane back to Hong Kong. Although he did not know how to drive the airplane, he always played a computer game about airplane. When he went back the USA, he heard her partner had caught by the police. He was very worried her, so he pass oneself off as a policeman and he release her partners. Then, we went back the USA quickly.

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Although Tommy and Jenny pass oneself off as many job, but my wife caught them in the UK! I thought Tommy and Jenny were very clever, if they became the FBI, they would be famous! The four curios found and the curios would back to the museum.

20100715

Tell a story about lying or cheating. --- FOR THE SUNDAY CLASS
(400 words)

WORDS YOU MAY USE:
  • cheater 騙子
  • flamingo 紅鶴

The Chicken and the Egg: Ancient Mystery Solved?

REUTERS/Jamal Saidi

Philosophers and fertility experts can rest easy as the age-old question, “Which came first, the chicken or the egg?” finally has an answer: The chicken.

The research comes from British scientists out of Sheffield and Warwick universities. It all boils down to one protein—ovocledidin-17 (OC-17)—that is only found inside a chicken's ovaries, and is essential for eggshell formation.

Although the protein has been studied as part of eggshell development before, researchers used a super computer to ‘zoom-in' while a shell was forming, and found that it actually serves as a catalyst. Sheffield Professor John Harding hopes that this will aid in designing new materials.

Well, that's one mystery solved. But still no word yet on the meaning of life.

20100711

My Last Special Agent Job - amended

Sam and I went to the UK. We were special agents who came from Russia. We needed to go to the UK and find some information. We needed to help another four special agents. My special agent number was 3947. Sam was my partner and his number was 5219. Today, we went back to Russia and brought some data to the UK. Sam traveled by another airplane, and I traveled by an airplane in London and needed to change my flight.

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When I went to Yukon, Canada and went on another airplane. We met in the Barnaul Airport in Russia. We met the Russian president at his office. His assistant negotiated with the USA’s representatives. Then, we met with Russia Special Agent head. He gave us a new mission. We found four military information in the UK. Sam and I joined the Russian Special Agent Team. It was very famous in Russia.

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We went to the UK with another 30 people. They were all special agents. There were 5678 members in Special Agent Team. Some were in China, some were in Japan and some were in the UK and USA. They were all elites and geniuses. Our team was divided into four teams. There were eight members in one team. Our team needed to find the UK navy headquarters in the North Atlantic Ocean. The navy headquarters was next to the Clifden. They were hard to find and the guard was very stern.

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Sam and I stayed in a house which was near the UK navy headquarters. Other six members were trying to go inside. We were very worried, because other three teams got the military information. Now we were the slowest. One day, three members in our team were arrested by the police in the UK. The Russian Special Agent head found eight other members to help us. After one month, we got the military information.

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When we went back to Russia, I read from the newspaper that the arrested special agents would get life imprisonment. They would be very bored. The UK government said, “There were 32 Russian special agents stealing our military information!” They wanted to arrest us. The Russian President found an airplane and helped us to flee to another place. Sam and I went to South Africa and watched the World Cup. We were Argentina’s fans, but it had lost to Germany.

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After the football match, we would go to China and live there too. It was because things were not very expensive there. I thought our special agent job would stop for a long time!

My Last Military Intelligence

Sam and I went to the UK quickly. We were the special agent came from Russia. We needed to go to the UK and found some intelligence. We needed to help another four special agent. My special agent No. was 3947. Sam was my partner and he was special agent No. was 5219. Today, we went back Russia and brought some data to UK. Sam traveled another airplane, and I traveled an airplane in London and needed to favorable turn.

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When I went to Yukon from Canada and traveled another airplane there. We met in the Barnaul Airport from Russia. We went to presidential palace and met president there. His assistant negotiations with the USA’s representative. Then, we interviewed Russia Special Agent’s chairman. We got a new assignment from him, it was about found four military intelligences form the UK. Sam and I joined the 7794 Special Agent Team. It was very famous in Russia.

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We went to the UK with another 32 people. They were all special agent. 7794 Special Agent Team had 5678 member. Some were in China, some were in Japan and some were in the UK and USA. All were the elite and prodigy. Our team would into four teams. There were eight people in one team. Our team needed to found the UK navy headquarters in the North Atlantic Ocean. The navy headquarters was next to the Clifden. It was the hard things to do and the guard was very stern.

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Sam and I stayed in a house which was near the UK navy headquarters. Other six member were try to went to inside. We were very worried, because other three teams got the military intelligences. And now the slowly one was us. One day, three members in our team had caught by the police in the UK. We Russia Special Agent’s chairman found eight other members to help us. After one month, we got the military intelligence.

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When we went back the Russia, I read a report and heard the special agent who were our team member got the life imprisonment. It was very bored of them. The UK said, “There were 32 Russia’s special agent stole there military information. They were catching us. President found an airplane and helped us to go to another place. Sam and I went to South Africa and watched the World Cup. We were the Argentina’s fans, but it lost by Germany.

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After the football match, we would go to China and live there too. It was because the things were not very expensive. I thought our special agent job would stop a long time!

20100704

Write a story of 430 words about changing of identity.

Words you may use:


  • dye the hair 染髮
  • have a cosmetic surgery 整容
  • have a transexual surgery 做變性手術
  • special agent 特務
  • witness 證人
  • South Africa 南非
  • World Cup世界杯
  • Argentina 阿根廷
  • Germany 德國
  • football fans 足球迷

A World-famous Invention - amended

“How are you? Nice to meet you!” I said. “You are…oh you are the inventor! Where are you going now?” “I am going to my laboratory to do some experiments!”

“Hi, my name is Alex; I am an inventor who wants to invent something we can always use!” I said. Suddenly, someone ran after me! I was very scared and went back to my laboratory quickly. When I got back to the laboratory, I started my experimentation. I needed to find many things, so I worked hard there. It was very difficult.

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I had an assistant, Alan. He always helped me to find some materials for experiments. I always invented something will him and we needed to do many experiments. We invented many products, like a helicopter that did not need any fuel. We only need to put some liquid into the helicopter to drop the atmospheric pressure. Next, we used some water to mix with the liquid. Water’s density is lower than the liquid, so it will fly in the sky. Lastly, we added a rudder and other helicopter parts.

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Many producers wanted to buy the sketch of our invention, and wanted to get some money from it. After Alan and I published this invention, there were many reports about me on TV and in the Internet. I became famous around the world. After selling the invention sketch, Alan and I got three hundred million euro. We were very amazed because we got a lot of money.

After a few mouths, the producer made many helicopters and they gave us one. Many people bought them, because the cost was not high, so the price was not high too. The customers felt they were very convenient.

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After one mouth, we got the Nobel Prize. We invented this helicopter because we wanted to help the world. The helicopter would not pollute the environment. We got twenty-five prizes for environmental protection.

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Our invention became the number six world invention. The number one invention was the x-ray machine which was used in all hospitals. Our helicopter was very popular in the market too. It was not easy to be popular in a market. Although we got a lot of money and prizes, and we continued our work and we made a lot of other inventions.

Famous in the Market

“How are you? Likes to meet you!” I said. “You are…oh you are the inventor! Where are you going now?” “I am going to my laboratory and do some experimentation!”

“Hi, my name is Alex; I am an inventor about a sell’s things and wants to invent something that we can always use it in the market!” I said. What happen, someone ran after me! I was very scared and went back my laboratory quickly. After back the laboratory, I started my experimentation. I needed to find many things, so I work hard there. It was very hard to do it.

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I had a helper, he was Alan. He always helped me to find some stuffs for do experimentation. I always invented some thing will him and we do many experimentation do done an invention. We invent many products, like a. The helicopter could fly in the sky, but no need to add any fuel. We only use some matter and put it in a helicopter to make the atmospheric pressure drop off. Next used some water to mix some water, water’s density lower than the matter some it will fly in the sky and than, add a rudder and than add some plain helicopter’s stuff.

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Many producers wanted to get our invention sketch, and wanted to get some money in this invention. After Alan and I publish this invention, many report about on TV and online. I became famous in the world. After I sell the invention sketch, Alan and I got three hundred millions. We were very amazed because we got much money.

After few mouths, the producer held many helicopter and they gave us one. After done the helicopter, many people bought, it was because the cost not high, so the price not high too. Someone drive the helicopter and felt is was very convenient.

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After one mouths, we got the Nobel Prize, we invent this helicopter and wanted to help the world. The helicopter did not have any contamination things and it was very environmental protection. So we got the prize about environmental protection. We got twenty-five prizes about environmental protection and invent.

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Our invention became the rank six of the world invent. The first was x-ray machine it was very famous in hospital. Our helicopter was very famous in the market too. It was not easy to be famous in a market. Although we got much money and many prizes, we will continue our job and invented a lot of inventions for the people and the market. I needed to do my job see you next time, bye!

20100627

Write a story about a new product 產品you have invented 發明for the market市場. (430 words)

WORDS YOU MAY USE:
  1. brand 品牌
  2. technology 科技
  3. producer 生產商
  4. commission 佣金
  5. contract合約
  6. characteristic 特徵
  7. packaging包裝
  8. ingredients 成分
  9. develop 發展
  10. stock 股票
  11. salary 薪金

My Last Minute Exam - amended

“Have you finished your revision?” My mum asked me in the afternoon. “I have finished it a long time ago!” I answered. Then, I played computer games. I was very interested in some ninja games. I thought tomorrow’s exam was science, so I needed to study the names of the laboratory utensils.

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I found my laboratory utensil book. My teacher said we would do an experiment using a Bunsen burner to boil some water in a beaker. Then, we needed to boil liquid in a test tube. We would have a written exam and a laboratory exam. After the revision, I went shopping with my friend in Tai Koo. I bought some clothes and a pair of shoes there. My friend asked me, “Have you finished your revision?” I was bored, “I have finished!” He asked, “I have a question about the exam. Can I ask you when I get home?” I said, “Okay, see you!”

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When I went back home in the evening, I was very amazed. There was a box of sushi on the table. I thought it was my dinner, so I ate it quickly. At night, my friend asked me a question on the phone, “Do you know how to do question No.63 on page 33?” I answered, “First, you put a Bunsen burner on the table, and then…” “No, I am talking about the math book! We will have the math exam tomorrow!” I was shocked and said, “I have revised the other subject! I need to work hard, bye!” He said, “Bye! See you at school!’

I was very scared that I would fail my math exam. Math was very hard for. I only had eight hours to revise, but I could not sleep! If I sleep, I would forget everything. I did not understand a lot of things, like how to measure the circumference and how to calculate the area.

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The next morning, I went to school. I asked my friend many questions on math. When the exam started, I had stomach ache and wanted to go to the toilet, I thought I had eaten too much sushi. I regretted it. When I went back to the classroom to continue my exam, I forgot everything. My friend gave me his answer sheet, and it was cheating. He was not afraid to be punished.

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After the exam, we both passed the exam, I was very happy but I thought I needed to reflect on myself.

My exam subject

“Have you finish you review?” My mum asked. “I finish it a lot!” I answered. My mum asked me in the afternoon. I reviewed my exam before two hours. I played the computer games. I was very interested by some ninja’s games. Suddenly, I remembered to study the science’s utensils. Tomorrow’s exam was the science.

I found my science’s utensils. My teacher said we will do the experiment about used the Bunsen burner to burn some water in a beaker. And we needed to burn a test tube’s liquid. We needed to do an experiment and examination paper. After I finished my review about experiment, I approximately my friend to Tai Koo and shopping there. I bought some clothes and a pair of shone there. My friend asked me, “Did you finish your review?” I answered bored, “I finish!” He asked, “I have a question about the exam, I went back home and ask you ok?” I said, “Okay, see you!”

When I went back home in the evening, I was very amazed. It was because there were some sushis in a table. I thought it was my dinner, so I ate it quickly. At night, my friend asked me a question in the mobile phone, “How to do the No.63 in page 33?” I answered, “First, you put a Bunsen burner, and then…” “No I ask the math book! We will have an exam about math tomorrow!” I was very surprised and said, “I review the other subject! I need to hard work, bye!” He said, “Bye! See you at school!’

I was very scared that I failed the math. The math was very hard to review. I only had eight hours to review it, but I could not sleep! If I sleep, I will forget my review’s scope. I did not know many things, like how to count the circumference and how to count the cm2. The exam came, I asked my friend, “How to do it?” I ask many questions.

When it was exam, I was very stomach-ache and wanted to go to the toilet, I thought I eat many sushi. I was regretting to eat many sushis. After went back the classroom to do my exam, I forget many things. I forget all the questions that I asked my friend. My friend give me the answer, it was cheat. He did not worry any question.

After the exam I got pass in the exam and he got pass too, I was very happy but I thought I needed to self-criticism myself.

I was a computer expert, and a policeman too! My job was not hard work. I could solve internet cases quickly. I had many friends in my team, Ben and Tom. They were computer experts too. But their computer techniques were not as good as mine.

One morning, I got a case about Al-Qaeda’s video. Osama bin Laden was the leader of the terrorist group. He said he would use his life to bomb the White House. Before I heard about this news, I had read the newspaper article about Laden’s death. When I googled Laden, I found in his blog that he would kill George W. Bush.

One-third of my team went to Bush’s house. Another one-third went to the White House. Ben, Tom and I stayed at the police station. We needed to find Laden. It was very easy for me, but I needed to be quicker than Laden. Laden said he would bomb the White House and kill Bush at six o’clock in the evening.

When I went to get the GPS at the White House, I saw Obama and he gave it to me. He said, “You have done very well!” I went back to the police station quickly, and wanted to arrest Laden. Ben used the GPS to find Laden. Laden was in London and we thought he did not have enough time to go to the USA. So I went back home and watched TV. The news reporter said, “There was a bomb in USA’s Times Square. Twenty-five people died and sixty-eight hurt. Al-Qaeda said they did it, and they would send a member to kill Bush and bomb the White House.

I went back to the station quickly, and Ben and Tom were working there. I found that Al-Qaeda member and arrested him. I found him in front of the White House. He was dressed in a military uniform. I was very happy that I could help Obama. He gave me a big bonus and promoted our whole team. But I knew the video was not real, because the “Laden” wore a wig.

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Extreme situations

Write a story about one of the following extreme situations: (write 400 words)

-- 1 hour before the bomb explodes
-- 8 hours before your Math exam (and you just found that you've studied the wrong subject)

Words you may use:

  • Math equation
  • Bunsen burner
  • cheat
  • test tube holder
  • area