Write a story about showing off.

WORDS YOU MAY USE:

• The gap between the rich and the poor 貧富差距 has widened擴大.
• worthless 無價值
• spoilt 寵壞的 brat 頑童
• only child 獨生子（或女)
• designer labels 名牌
• generous 慷慨的；大方的
• impress 給…留下深刻的好印象 a girl
• luxurious home 豪華住宅
• entourage 隨從
• splurge 亂花錢

The Story of the Bear -amended

Unluckily, we had lost our owner. No, she threw us away. We dislike her now. Baby cried, “Mum, where are you?” It made me furious, “I hate her, but why does Baby miss her?” We went to a nursery and started to build our world. There were a lot of toys. Their leader was called Ben, and he was a famous toy there.

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One day, he was sick, and I took good care of the toys. There were two toy rooms in the nursery. The first room was for children who were good-hearted. The second room was for the naughty children. When I went to the second room, I saw many children destroying the toys. I was very angry, because I was a toy too. So I led the toys to the first room. It made them happy and relieved, but the second room did not have any toys. So I put stronger toys there and started their fitness programme. They became stronger and happier.

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After a few days, Ben had recovered. I built a house for him and bought a lot of clothes for him. We were very happy, and I had forgotten about my owner. Baby wanted to see her owner again, because she wanted to have an owner to love her. After a month, our owner, Annie, came here and played with us only. I thought she loved me and baby only. We were very happy and wanted to see her everyday.

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We thought she lost us, not abandoning us. When we went to the second room, a lot of toys were hurt. We were very sad. Our leader, Ben, built a hospital in the second room. We built a tunnel to send the toys to the hospital quickly. The summer holidays were coming, and we went to the big swimming pool.

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We found an octopus near the swimming pool. It surprised me, because we had a new friend. We swam and played a lot of games. This kind of life made me happy, but I wanted to go back home. Baby and I left the nursery and went to Annie’s house. We rode on a dog to get there. There were a lot of toys. The leader was a cowboy. Annie was very happy that she saw us. We lived there again happily.

It was a bad time for me, we lost our own. No, she threw us away. We disliked her now. Baby cried, “Mum, where are you?” It made me angry, “I dislike her, but why she doesn’t dislike her? She dislike us, why you so love her?” We went to a nursery and started to build our world. There were a lot of toys. Their leader was called Ben, and he was a famous toy in there.

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One day, he sick, and I started to take the toys well. When I went to the next room, I saw there are many children destroy the toys. I was very angry, I was a toy too. So, I started to push the toy to here. It made them happy and relaxed, but the next room did not have any toys. So I chose the stranger toys to there and started there fitness. They became strong and happy.

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After a few minutes, Ben became health again. When Ben was not sick, I build a house to him and bought a lot of clothes to him. We were very happy there, and I lost my own any more. Baby wanted to see her own again, because she wanted to have an own to love her. After month, our own, Annie went here and she played me and baby only. I thought she loved me and baby only. We were very happy and wanted to see her everyday.

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We thought she was lost us only, and she threw us carelessly. When we went to room two, there were a lot of toys hurt. Our leader, Ben, held a hospital near the room two. We were very sad that there were a lot of toys hurt. We built a underpass to made the toys went to the hospital quickly. Sunny day was coming; we went to the big swimming pool to play ourselves.

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We found an octopus near a swimming pool. It made me amazed and happy, because we got a new friend. I went to play a lot of games, and we swam there. The live made me happy, but I wanted to go back home. Baby and I left the nursery and went to Annie’s house. We found a dog to go to Annie’s house. There were a lot of toys. The leader was a cowboy. Annie was very happy that she saw me and baby. We lived there again and happily.

The Dark Trip!!! - amended

One day, I went to school by MTR. Suddenly, the train stopped. All the lights were off and everyone fell down. I thought we were in Sai Wan Ho, I felt the door was on my left. I tried to open it. It was very big, and I couldn’t open it. I found something that felt like a rock. I threw it at the window and the window broke. I heard my friend, Johnny, crying, “Who can help me? I’ve lost my way!” I went near the voice, and I caught his hand.

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I dragged Johnny to the door and he climbed out of the door. It was small, so only children could climb outside. Johnny and I tried to stay away from the railway. After a few minutes, we felt a train leaving. It was the train we were on. We touched the wall and started to go the Heng Fa Chuen way. Suddenly, we could not feel the wall.

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We needed to choose a route to go to Heng Fa Chuen. We crawled and found the railway again. I realized that blind people had very hard and scary lives. However, we needed to find a way to leave the underground. We climbed up the line one railway. The railway was slanted and we climbed slowly. When we went to the exit, we saw the light again. Suddenly, a train was approaching. We ran quickly and saw a station.

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It was the Taikoo station, but there were no people. We chose the wrong route to Heng Fa Chuen. We were very scared. Johnny thought, “It may not be the right’s station!” Johnny used his mobile phone to call the police. We went back to the railway again. We climbed back to the connected line and we chose the line two railway. After a few minutes, we arrived at the real Taikoo station. There were many people.

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This incident made me scared but happy. However, when I went back to school, the teacher didn’t believe us.

The Dark Trip!!!

One day, I went to school by MTR. Suddenly, all the light disappeared and everyone threw down. I thought I was under the Sai Wan Ho, I felt the door was on my left side. I went there and tried to open it. It was very big, but I can’t open it. I found a thing like a rock. I threw it to the window. After I threw the rock at the window, I heard my friend was saying something, “Who can help me, I lost my way!” I went near the sound, and I caught the hand.

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My friend, Johnny and I went to there and he climbed outside the door. It was not big, so we could climb outside. Johnny and I went near the track and started to walk to the track. After a few minutes, we felt a MTR left. It was the MTR I travelled before the moment. We touched the wall and started to go to Heng Fa Chuen. Suddenly, we could not touch anything.

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We saw there are many trains in the track; we thought it is a connected line. Liked two train was a lot of way to go, and we could go there to line one or line two stations. Line one is under the line two station. When we needed to go to Tsuen Wan in Sheung Wan, you needed to go to line one station. The connected line made the train to go their destination.

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We needed to choose a place to go to Heng Fa Chuen. We went prone and found the track again. I learned he blind people were very hard and scared in their live. But we needed to find a way to leave the underground. We chose the line one track, and we climbed up side. The track was slope and we climbed slowly. When we went to the exit, we saw the light again. Suddenly, a train came outside our back. We ran quickly and we saw the stations were near us, so we climbed out the track and we arrived a station.

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The station was called Tai Koo, but there were not people. We were very scared, why there were not people. Johnny thought, “It may be had a stations near the real Tai Koo station. Johnny used his cellular phone and called the police. We went back to the track again and we climbed again to. We climbed back to the connected line and we chose the line two track. After a few minutes, we arrived the real Tai Koo station. There were many people there. This thing made me scared and happy. But when i went back to school, the teacher didn't believe our saying.

Write a story about you being in a completely dark space.

Words you might need to use:

• cannot see anything
• bump into 撞
• saw light again
• could not sleep

A New Ending - amended

Mother and I went back home. Unluckily, the ducks had taken over our home. Father said angrily, “I will kill them, let’s revenge!” Then, we flew away from the nest and found something to kill the ducks. After a few minutes, we felt hungry so we went back to the nest and started to find something to eat. My father said, “I never want to eat insects, they are very disgusting!”

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We found a tree with many fruits. I thought we could eat them. When I started eating, a man threw something at me. The man was my best friend, Tommy. I remembered he disliked birds and wanted to kill all of them. I flew back to our nest and discovered some cakes in the nest. They looked very yummy, so I ate them quickly. When my father went back home, it was time to kill the ducks. My bother got a bomb. He shouted, “I discover many bombs near the big tree!” Then, we got a lot of bombs and threw at the ducks. The ducks ran back to our house quickly.

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The house was ours, not theirs. I was furious, and threw a lot of bombs at our house. Suddenly, a duck came out, and fired at us. My father threw all the bombs at them. The explosion attracted many ducks here. We were petrified because the duck fired at us. We flew back to the nest, but they ran after me.

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My mother told us, “There were many bombs underground!” All the ducks were hurt and one yelled angrily, “Be careful, we will kill you!” I threw the bombs at that duck. I said, “I think you can’t!” Then the duck died. We were very happy, because we won the war!

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We kept throwing a lot of bombs at the ducks. We saw a girl near a tree. She was our neighbour and she was crying. When she was angry, strange things would happen. We knew why we became birds. It was because she disliked us killing the ducks for fun when we were humans. After a few minutes, we became humans again. We never killed ducks for fun again.

Mother and I went to our home. It was a bad thing for us, because the ducks stroke our home. Father said angrily, “I will kill them, let’s retaliate them!” Then, we flew away the nest and found something to kill the ducks. After few minutes, we felt hungry and we went back to the nest and started to found something to eat. My father said, “I never want to eat the insects, they are very nausea!”

We found a tree and there were many fruits there. I thought we could eat it there. When I started to eat it, a man used something to throw me. The man was my best friend, Tommy. I remembered he dislike the bird and wanted to kill the bird there. I flew back to the nest and I discovered the nest had some cakes. It looked very yummy, so I ate it quickly. When my father back home, it was the time to kill the ducks. My bother got a bomb. He shouted, “I discover many bomb near the big tree!” Then, we got a lot of bombs and threw to the ducks. The ducks saw us threw the bombs to them, so they went back the home quickly.

The home was us, not them. I was very angry, and threw a bomb to the home. Suddenly, a duck went out, and used a gun and fire us. My father threw the entire bomb to them. A big sound made many ducks coming. We were very scared, because the duck fire us by their guns. We flew back the nest, but they ran after me. When they wanted to fire us, a bomb explosion in there.

My mother said, “There were many bombs under the land!” The all ducks got hurt and said angrily, “Be careful, we will kill you!” I threw a bomb to the ducks who said something. I said, “I think you can’t!” Then the duck died. We was very happy, because we won the gas!

Then we threw a lot of bomb to the ducks, they were very scared us. Many ducks hurts. We saw a girl there, she was crying. The girl always saw red, and the impossible things would happen. We learned why we became the birds, it was because she dislike we kill the ducks for funny when we were the people. After few minutes, we became the people again. We didn’t kill the birds for funny that time.

Living on My Own - amended

One day, my parents and I fought at home. I was very angry and ran away quickly. I brought all my things to the dormitory. My friend Johnny and I lived there. I like my dormitory. It was not small, but our things made the room look small. We agreed to take turns to do the housework. I would do it on Sundays, and he would do it on Wednesdays.

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I had a part-time job in a convenience store. Johnny was a waiter in a restaurant. The job was not hard for me, because there were not many people buying things. But Johnny disliked his job, because the restaurant was in a famous place. After worked, we would have dinner at the dormitory. I always cooked dinner, because Johnny was very tired when he went back to the dormitory. We worked a lot so we had saved a lot of money.

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I worked on Mondays, Thursdays, Fridays and Saturdays. I went to school from Monday to Wednesday. It was a good plan for us to save money. We wanted to buy a flat and lived together. One day when I went to school, a man pushed me suddenly, and I hurt myself. The man was my classmate. I disliked him when I was in secondary school.

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After school, I worked the convenience store. I always took something back to the dormitory, like ice-creams, drinks and snacks. The boss treated me very well. After three years, we left the dormitory. Johnny and I bought a flat. Our flat was in Shek Tong Tsui, and it was a good place for us. The Shek Tong Tsui Municipal Services Building and the Shek Tong Tsui Market was closed to our flat.

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When I was twenty-one years old, I visited my family. My sister lived at home, and didn’t leave. It was not a bad thing for me. I was lucky to live on my own, and I knew how to handle disputes, face the reality, go outside for more experience and be a mature person. I became an adult.