20091031

Who Stalk Me?

When I went to school today I saw a shadow in my corner of the eye. I was very scared but I never did anything. I looked like did not scared, so he will not fear. Then, I walked quickly and quickly. Suddenly, I saw my best friend—Johnny. So, we went to school together. I was not scared anymore and we arrived our school. I went to my class, and the shadow disappeared. When it was recess, I went to snack department. It was I in the ground floor. There were many people, so I played the basketball. The playground of basketball was near the school front door.

When it was the time of newspaper convey, Johnny shot the basketball carelessly. I ran out and wanted to take the basketball. Suddenly, a man walked in front of me he was our class teacher. She said, “Why do you go out?” I answered, “It was because Johnny shot the basketball outside, and I want to take it!” She said, “Although it is good, but you do not be careful!”

When I went back the school, a basketball hurt me. There was a man back to the car. I thought, “Who is he? I do not know!” When I went back my class, there were two classmate were outside my classroom. They said, “There is an old man, he always help us!” I questioned, “Why?” They said, “It is because he does not have any son, so he always talked with us!”

I thought the old man was the shadow. So I went back home happily after school. When I saw the shadow again, I went to the near to the shadow. He was an old man! He bought some food and said, “What is your name?” I answered, “My name is Alex! My school is…” Then I talked with him an evening. The old man called Jeff, he was eighty- five years old.

He did not married, so he did not have any son too! He wanted to have a son before him past away. He wanted to play with the children. Then I went back home quickly. When I went back home, I saw the TV news report. It was reporting an old man died by a car. The old man was called Jeff!

I cried and said, “Jeff, do you do your dream?” I did not cry anymore after four hours.

Unlucky day--Halloween

Today was Halloween. I went to Ocean Park with my friend. They were my best friends, Johnny, Ben and Jason. It was the last day of Ocean Park Halloween. When we went there, it was six o’clock. It was the time of Halloween room we play it. We went to the Chinese ghost house first. It was not scary at first, suddenly, an old Chinese office holder ran to our direction. We was very scared and wanted to go out the ghost house, but we lose the export. We went out the house, but we only saw the forest. We were very tired, so we sat on the land. When Ben sat down, he fell down in a hole. He got hurt himself. Ben used his hand to catch the clay.

We wanted to pull him outside, but the hole was very small and deep. Then, Ben fell down there. I said to Johnny, “Could you use the mobile phone to call him?” He answered, “Okay! But my mobile phone does not have enough battery and we only have one chance to call out!” Jason said, “We can call the police or Ocean Park! May be Alex stay here, Johnny and I go back and find the workers of Ocean Park!” I shouted, “No, may be you stay here!”

Johnny said, “It shall be you stay here, because you think this idea!” So, Jason stayed there. Johnny and I went to the room door again. When we went to the room, we did not see anything, it was because it was very dark. Johnny opened his mobile phone light, and we went to the correct exit. We went to the Call Center and said, “Can you give me a bottle of Lysol, and a rope? My friend fell down into the hole!”

Two workers went with us and said, “Where do you find the hole?” Johnny said, “It is near the Chinese ghost house!” We went to there and found Jason there. He shouted scared, “I… see a ghost there!” We turned it back and saw a Chinese ghost. His face had some blood and he took a man. The man had many blood too! The two workers went near the ghost and saw the ghost.

The worker said, “It was our colleague and he took the leave man he prepared to go to the ghost house! Then the worker called the police and used the rope to tide up him. It was the unlucky day of us!

20091020

Homework for these 2 weeks

1. Write a story about a stalker (400 words)

Stalk (verb) 追蹤
Stalker (noun; the person) 追蹤者

2. Write a horror恐怖 story (400 words)

scary令人恐懼
blood血
mysterious神祕man
haunted house鬼屋



SEE YOU ON 1 NOVERMBER (sunday)!

The Unfair Class

When I was eight years old, I was not very happy in my class. I was in class 3D, and I always answered my teacher’s questions. I had three best friends there. They were called Anson, Ma and Tony. We always played the Superman game. Ma was our leader. I was the second leader. Whenever I went to school on foot with my mother, my friends would chat with me.

One day, my teacher asked me how to
solve a math question. The question was 7-2x9. I was always very happy to answer these questions. I was very certain and answered, “The answer is 45!” My teacher said angrily, “Why?” I said loudly, “It is because 7-2=5, then 5x9 is 45!” Other students laughed at me and someone shouted, “Alex is a fool, the question is very easy!” My teacher said I did not concentrate, so he ordered me to stand up during the whole class.

My teacher asked my classmates another question, “What is 8+2x9? Jenny, can you answer it? Jenny stood up and answered, “It is 90!” When Jenny said the answer, I thought, “It is wrong, Jenny will need to stand up during class!” But my teacher said, “Sorry, you are wrong! It is because we need to multiply before adding! Sit down!”

I shouted
at my teacher, “Why didn’t Jenny need to stand up during class?” My friends shouted too. My teacher said angrily, “It is because Jenny was careless! But you were not concentrating!” I was very angry and shouted, “How did you know I was not concentrating and Jenny was?” My teacher did not say anything and he took me to the Discipline Office.

My teacher said to the teacher
at the Discipline Office that I was naughty in math class. He shouted to me angrily. The Discipline Office teacher asked, “Why were rude to your teacher?” I told her everything.

I went to my class again
. The bell rang and it was recess. I played the Superman game with my best friends. Suddenly, my Math teacher found me and took me to the Discipline Office again. He said to me, “Sorry, I cant say you were not concentrating, I have hurt your feelings!” From then on, my Math teacher always took care of me and Math became my favorite subject!

*PROOFREADING LIST*

1. tense
2. spelling
3. noun / verb / adj / adv
4. there is (NOT there have)
5. don’t mix up A and I
6. plural / singular
7. prepositions (e.g. on, at , in)
8. punctuation (e.g. . / , / … / ?)
9. pronouns (e.g. he, she, they)
10. capitalize the first letter in names (e.g. Facebook)
11. son't mix up THEN and THAN

20091018

My favorite lesson-Math

When I was eight years old, I was very not happy in my class. I was 3D class, but I always answered my teacher question. I had three best friends there. They were called Anson, Ma and Tony. We always played the game of superman. Ma was our playing leader. I was the se When I went to school on foot with my mother, my friends talked with me.

One day, my teacher asked me how to do this math. They math was 7-2x9 I was very happy when I answered the questions. I was very affirmative and answered, “The answer is 45!” My teacher said angrily, “Why?” I said loudly, “It is because 7-2=5 than, x9. So it is 45!” Other students smiled me and someone shouted, “Alex is a blockhead, it is very easy!” My teacher said I did concentrate, so he ordered me to stand up conduct a class.

After I stood up, my teacher asked the question for other classmates, “What is 8+2x9? Jenny, can you answer it? Than, Jenny stood up and answered, “It is 90!” When Jenny said the answer, I thought, “It is wrong, Jenny will need to stand up conduct a class!” But my teacher said, “Sorry, you are wrong! It is because we need to x the math, than + the math! Stand down!”

I shouted to my teacher, “Why did Jenny no need to stand up conduct a class?” My friend shouted too! My teacher said, “It is because Jenny is not careful! You are not concentrating!” I was very angry and shouted, “Why do you know I am not concentrating? But Jenny is concentrating?” My teacher did not say anything and he took me to Discipline Office!

My teacher said to the Discipline Office’s teacher this child did not well in math lesson! He shouted to my angrily! The Discipline Office’s teacher asked, “Why do you said to teacher angry and shout?” I answered, “My teacher say me do not concentrate and need me to …” Then, Discipline Office’s teacher knew the things.

I went to my class again and the bell sound and it was recess. I played the superman with my best friends. Suddenly, my Math’s teacher found me and took me to the Discipline Office again. The Math’s teacher said to me, “Sorry, I can not say you are concentrate, I hurt you heart!” Form than on, my Math’s teacher took care of me always and Math became my favorite lesson!

20091017

Write a story about FAIRNESS.

The New Nobel Prize - amended

A man called Samson made a new category for the 35th Nobel Prize. It was called the A man called Samson made a new category for the 35th Nobel Prize. It was called the Nobel Prize in Entertainment. A man called William Kennedy Laurie Dickson was Thomas Alva Edison’s student. After Edison had invented the phonograph, Dickson and Eugene Lauste became the students of Edison.

After Edison died, Dickson invented the movies. Then, he won the first Nobel Prize in Entertainment. Then, Dickson and Lauste left and they invented the Latham loop. They set up the Kinetoscope Exhibition Company. He died in 1935.

Jerry Yang invented Yahoo and many people got entertained by it since 1995. Yahoo helps you find games, knowledge, pictures and movies. There are many things you can find there. Yahoo can help you make a blog. It is fun! So, Jerry Yang got the 1997 Nobel Prize in Entertainment. After three years, Larry Page and Sergey Brin invented Google. They invented Gmail. Gmail is the first e-mail service with a very big storage.They got the Nobel Prize in Entertainment.

In 2004, Mark Elliot Zuckerberg invented Facebook. He was born in Amerca on 14th May, 1984.

There were three people who got the Nobel Prize in Entertainment. I think they deserve this prize. I think they all worked very hard. They invented things that make many people happy.
. A man called William Kennedy Laurie Dickson was Thomas Alva Edison’s student. After Edison had invented the phonograph, Dickson and Eugene Lauste became the students of Edison.

After Edison died, Dickson invented the movies. Then, he won the first Nobel Prize in Entertainment. Then, Dickson and Lauste left and they invented the Latham loop. They set up the Kinetoscope Exhibition Company. He died in 1935.

Jerry Yang invented Yahoo and many people got entertained by it since 1995. Yahoo helps you find games, knowledge, pictures and movies. There are many things you can find there. Yahoo can help you make a blog. It is fun! So, Jerry Yang got the 1997 Nobel Prize in Entertainment. After three years, Larry Page and Sergey Brin invented Google. They invented Gmail. Gmail is the first e-mail service with a very big storage.They got the Nobel Prize in Entertainment.

In 2004, Mark Elliot Zuckerberg invented Facebook. He was born in Amerca on 14th May, 1984.

There were three people who got the Nobel Prize in Entertainment. I think they deserve this prize. I think they all worked very hard. They invented things that make many people happy.

20091013

Charles Kao
Got a Nobel Prize

Do you think he deserves it? (1/3)

Think of a new category for the Nobel Prize? Who would you award it to? Why? (2/3)

Nobel Prize in Entertainment
Inventor of movies
William Kennedy Laurie Dickson
entertainment

Embarrassed Alex

Today, I want to talk about my embarrassing experience when I was small. When I was seven years old, I went to the mall with my family during Chinese New Year to buy some new clothes. There were many things to buy, but I only wanted to play with my toy cars at home. I was very naughty and liked playing with toys very much. When my family was looking for clothes for me, I saw a toy shop next to the boutique. I saw many toys there. I hoped my mother would buy some for me.

When I went back to the boutique, I asked my mother, “Can you buy some toy cars for me? If I need to buy new clothes, I think you need to buy a toy car for me!” My mother shouted, “I don’t know why I need to buy a toy car for you. If you don’t want to have new clothes, I will not buy for you!” I was very angry and shouted, “No, no, no, I need to have a toy car! I don’t want any clothes; I only want a toy car!” I shouted very loudly, so all the shoppers in the mall looked at me. I was very scared and went behind my mother’s back. I was very embarrassed. So, when I went to the mall again, I didn’t shout anymore.

20091007

ORAL PRESENTATION

Embarrassment尷尬

Embarrassed (adj)
Embarrass (v)

200 words

ORAL PRESENTATION

Embarrassment尷尬

Embarrassed (adj)
Embarrass (v)

200 words

Important treasure - amended

One day, a man called Jason found a private detective, Alex. Jason’s father was a rich man and opened a big museum in his attic. But his father died of heart disease. All his relatives received a letter: “If I die, I will put all my money at my office. There is a lot of money so you don’t need to work anymore. But I have put it into a safe! You find it, please! Be careful, there are many engines in my office!”

After Alex read this letter, he and Jason went to his father office. They saw many relatives of Jason. When Alex and Jason went into the room, his mother said, “Be careful, there are many engines, Alex!” They went to the office and found a letter on the table. It wrote: “The code is the month of birthday. If you get it wrong, you will fall into the engines and hurt!”

Alex wanted to say the answer, but Jason’s relatives fell into the engines. Alex knew the number and opened it. The letter wrote: “You need to go to the museum.”

Then, they found the museum’s switch under the sofa. When they turned it on, there were a lot of arrows shooting out. Many people hurt themselves. But no one helped the injured. Only Alex took them outside and called the police.

When they went to the entrance of the museum, they saw a letter which wrote, “No entry!” But many people ran inside, and they were hurt by the engines. Alex used his first aid kit to help the people. There were only two people who were not hurt. Alex used the torch and went inside. When they went to the terminal point, they saw the money, and a girl ran to take the money. Alex shouted, “Stop! It is not the money, there are engines!”

Alex took the girl away and they went out of the museum. Alex said, “I know where the money is!” Alex went to the office again and pushed a book. “Here is the money!” Many people snatched the money. Then they saw a letter under the money. It wrote: “Sorry, I think you will hurt yourself, not one will die. The blood of the injured is only ketchup! You cannot hurt Jason anymore, he is my son!”

After they read it, they always took care of Jason. Jason was very happy, and Alex went back to his own office to work.

20091003

Treasure Hunt

Legacy, dinosaur fossil,
Why-
Will(遺囑),
Where-museum dungeon(地下室), heirloom(家傳之寶), hint(提示), engines(機關)
One day, a man called Jason found Alex

Children Versus Robbers -amended

“Alex was going to school this morning, and he saw a man in black standing in front of the bank. Then Alex recognized him – he’s the wanted man in the news last night! The man was talking on the phone, “Hey, I’m going to start our plan. 7 o’clock tonight, right? I will bring 2 guns. See you at HSBC.” Alex knew he’s going to do something bad, but didn’t know what it would be. He wanted to tell the police, but he was afraid that the policemen would not believe him. He thought to himself, “Maybe I can stop him! Let me go home and plan about this!” He didn’t go to school and went home quickly.”

When Alex went back home, he saw his best friends and said, “Can you help me, there were two men wanting to rob the bank!” Jacky asked, “Are you cheating us?” Alex answered, “It is real, I do not cheat!” Sam asked, “Why don’t you tell to police?” Alex answered, “Do you think the police would believe us?” Ben suggested, “We can go there, but it should be after school!” Alex said, “Okay! Let’s talk about our plan in ‘
Happy Park’ after school!”

After school, they brought many weapons and went to the “
Happy Park”. Jacky said, “I have brought some ropes to tie up the two men!” Johnny was excited, “That’s a good idea! But I made some sgrens, so we can disturb them!” Sam brought a mobile phone, so if they have some accidents, they could call the police. Ben brought five toy guns for each of them. Alex brought five interphones.

Then, they made a plan. Alex would go to HSBC and observe what happened. Jacky and Sam would guard the gate. Johnny and Ben would stand in
East Road and South Road. Ben asked, “What does the man look like?” Alex answered, “He wore a big blue T-shirt, a red pair of shorts, a green hat, a pair of yellow shoes.

They arrived at HSBC at half past six. Alex said to a teller, “At seven o’clock, there will be two men robbing the bank!” The teller said, “You can’t play this joke! You can sit there and wait for the robbers!” Alex was angry, but he needed to help the bank.

When it was
seven o’clock, a man went into the bank and used a gun to point at a teller. Alex was very scared and used the interphone to call his other partners. Alex threw the sgran and used the rope to catch the man. After the smog disappeared, the man was caught. Alex used the interphones to call his friends, “Are there anyone running out of the bank?” Ben answered, “There is a man running out!” Alex shouted, “It was the robber!” Ben ran after the robber, used the toy gun to shoot the man and shouted, “Here is the robber!” Suddenly, a policeman appeared and caught him.

Finally, they got awarded and were famous in the school.

“Alex was going to school this morning, and he saw a man in black standing in front of the bank. Then Alex recognized him – he’s the wanted man in the news last night! The man was talking on the phone, “Hey, I’m going to start our plan. 7 o’clock tonight, right? I will bring 2 guns. See you at HSBC.” Alex knew he’s going to do something bad, but didn’t know what it would be. He wanted to tell the police, but he was afraid that the policemen would not believe him. He thought to himself, “Maybe I can stop him! Let me go home and plan about this!” He didn’t go to school and went home quickly.”

When Alex went back home, he saw his best friends and said, “Could you help me, there were two men, want to pillage!” Jacky asked, “Are you artifice us?” Alex answered to Jacky, Ben, Johnny and Sam, “It was really, I do not artifice!” Sam asked, “Why do you do not tell to police?” Alex answered again, “It is because, if I told the police, you think the police will believe us?” Ben, Johnny, Jacky and Sam answered together, “We can go there, but it should be after school!” Alex said, “Okay!” Alex said again, “It should be talk our plan in “Happy Park”.

After school, they brought many weapons and they went to the “Happy Park” Jacky said, “I bring some ropes, to truss up the two men!” Johnny shouted, “That’s a good idea! But I made some sgrens, so we can disturb them!” Sam bring a model photo, so if they have some unexpected, they could call the police. Ben brought five toy guns for each other. Finally, Alex brought five interphones.

Then, they made a plan. They need to bring the entire weapon, and they needed to run after the man! Ben asked, “What is they man?” Alex answered, “He wore a big blue T-shirt, a red short, a green hot, a pair of yellow shone. They saw the HSBC at half past six. Alex went to the HSBC and said to the attendant of HSBC, “At seven o’clock, it will have two men to pillage the money of this bank!” The attendant of the HSBC said to Alex, “You can’t play this thing; it is not speak in game! You can sit there and see the man!” Alex was angry, but he needed to help the bank.

When it was seven o’clock, a man went to the bank and he used a gun to directional the attendant of HSBC. Alex was very scared and used the interphone to call other coagents. Alex threw the sgran and used the rope to catch the man. After the smog disappeared, the man had caught there. Alex thought and used the interphones to call the friend, “Are there anyone ran out the bank?” Ben answered, “There have a man ran out!” Alex shouted, “It was the bandit!” Ben ran after the man and used the toy gun to shoot the man and shouted, “There a bandit!” Suddenly, a policeman appeared and caught him.

Finally, they got rules and famous in the school.