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Children Versus Robbers -amended

“Alex was going to school this morning, and he saw a man in black standing in front of the bank. Then Alex recognized him – he’s the wanted man in the news last night! The man was talking on the phone, “Hey, I’m going to start our plan. 7 o’clock tonight, right? I will bring 2 guns. See you at HSBC.” Alex knew he’s going to do something bad, but didn’t know what it would be. He wanted to tell the police, but he was afraid that the policemen would not believe him. He thought to himself, “Maybe I can stop him! Let me go home and plan about this!” He didn’t go to school and went home quickly.”

When Alex went back home, he saw his best friends and said, “Can you help me, there were two men wanting to rob the bank!” Jacky asked, “Are you cheating us?” Alex answered, “It is real, I do not cheat!” Sam asked, “Why don’t you tell to police?” Alex answered, “Do you think the police would believe us?” Ben suggested, “We can go there, but it should be after school!” Alex said, “Okay! Let’s talk about our plan in ‘
Happy Park’ after school!”

After school, they brought many weapons and went to the “
Happy Park”. Jacky said, “I have brought some ropes to tie up the two men!” Johnny was excited, “That’s a good idea! But I made some sgrens, so we can disturb them!” Sam brought a mobile phone, so if they have some accidents, they could call the police. Ben brought five toy guns for each of them. Alex brought five interphones.

Then, they made a plan. Alex would go to HSBC and observe what happened. Jacky and Sam would guard the gate. Johnny and Ben would stand in
East Road and South Road. Ben asked, “What does the man look like?” Alex answered, “He wore a big blue T-shirt, a red pair of shorts, a green hat, a pair of yellow shoes.

They arrived at HSBC at half past six. Alex said to a teller, “At seven o’clock, there will be two men robbing the bank!” The teller said, “You can’t play this joke! You can sit there and wait for the robbers!” Alex was angry, but he needed to help the bank.

When it was
seven o’clock, a man went into the bank and used a gun to point at a teller. Alex was very scared and used the interphone to call his other partners. Alex threw the sgran and used the rope to catch the man. After the smog disappeared, the man was caught. Alex used the interphones to call his friends, “Are there anyone running out of the bank?” Ben answered, “There is a man running out!” Alex shouted, “It was the robber!” Ben ran after the robber, used the toy gun to shoot the man and shouted, “Here is the robber!” Suddenly, a policeman appeared and caught him.

Finally, they got awarded and were famous in the school.

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