Cafe Owner - amended

I was a café owner in Tai Koo, and my business was not bad. Many customers chatted with me. I was the cafe owner and a waiter. I thought as an owner needed to know the customers what they liked and what their suggestions were, to make my café famous in Tai Koo.

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There were four waiters in the cafe and two bartenders. They earned a high salary, so they were not angry about anything. They were all my best friends. Tom and Jack, the bartenders, were my classmates in university. Our English was better than that in other cafes. We had a lot of customers and we made a lot of money.

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One day, a tourist went to our cafe and he saw a waiter being very polite. The tourist felt relaxed when we chatted with him. After a month, he brought many foreigners to our cafe, and they spent a lot of money on our desserts and coffee. Tom kept talking with a magazine owner, but Tom did not know who he was.

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After a month, there were a lot of foreigners going to our café. One day, a foreigner left a magazine and I saw that there were a lot of pages about my café. I always eavesdropped on the customers, and I was very happy with my job at that time. Tom opened a new café in Tai Koo, and it was our new branch, and he was the café owner too.

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When I eavesdropped on the customers, they said that they found a gun in a swimming pool. I was very worried and did not know what they would do. They might kill people or rob the bank near our café. I was very scared and called the police quickly. When the police had come, those customers did not escape. The police questioned them, and I knew they were off-duty policemen and they needed to get a gun from the swimming pool in the police station.

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I was very surprised that my customers were policemen. Then, I got the “Best Restaurant Award” from a magazine in Hong Kong and my café became very famous in Hong Kong. Every day, there were office workers who are in a hurry, relaxed people, expatriates, HKCEE students before the exams and tourists coming to my café.

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From then on, I did not need to be a waiter, but I still did it or else I would be bored. So I was a waiter and owner again.

Cafe Owner

I was a café owner in Tai Koo, and my business was not bad. There were many suggestion talked with me. Although I was the cafe owner, I was a waiter. I thought the owner needed to know the customers what did they like and their suggestion, and made my café famous in Tai Koo.

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There were four waiters in the cafe and two staffs, and they could a high salary and they did not angry anything. They were all my best friends, Tom and Jack was my classmates in the university. Our English was better than other cafes and we had a lot of suggestions and made us a lot of money.

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One day, a tourist went to our shop and he saw other waiter was very polite and did not know other waiter, and he said that we could talk with him relaxed. After a month, he brought many foreigners to our shop, and the foreigners planed a lot of money to eat our dessert and coffee. Tom always talked with a magazine boss, but Tom did not know.

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After a month, there were a lot of foreigners went to our café, but we did not what happen. That day, a foreigner left a magazine and I saw that, and there were a lot of pages about my café. I always eavesdropped the suggestion what did they talking, and I was very happy for my job at that time. Tom opened a new café in Tai Koo, and it was my branch store, and he was the café owner too.

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When I eavesdropped the suggestion, the suggestion said that he got a gun in a swimming pool. I was very worried and did not know what they would do, as killed people or robed the bank near our café. I was very scared and called the police quickly. When the police was came, the suggestion did not run away. The police questioned them, and I knew they were the policemen and they needed to get a gun from the swimming pool in the police office.

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I was very amazed, because my frequent was a policeman. Then, I got a prize called “The Best Restaurant Prize” and my café became very famous in Hong Kong. Every day, many suggestions, there were office workers who are in a hurry, relaxed people, expatriates, HKCEE students before the exams and tourists.

That time, I did not need to be a waiter, but it I did not, I would be bored. So I was a waiter and owner again.

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Café owner

- more polite than waiters in cha chaan tangs

- people he sees everyday: office workers who are in a hurry, relaxed people, expatriates, HKCEE students before the exams, tourists

- chat with customers

Chinese New Year Resolutions - amended

Chinese New Year had come, all the red pockets went into my pockets. Yesterday, my family and I fired fire crackers to celebrate Chinese New Year. We were overjoyed and played many games at home. We played mahjong and poker, and my sister went karaoking. She was having fun too. We like Chinese New Year, and we like red pockets.

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We had a lot of Chinese New Year delicacies, and carrot cakes were my favourite. Chinese New Year is not my favourite festival, my favourite is Christmas. Why? It is because you can have wishes for Christmas, but not Chinese New Year. I was very bored after a few days, because I had gotten all the red pockets, and I just eat and play every day. Chinese New Year was like an eating festival, and I dislike it.

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On the tenth day of the Chinese New Year, I went to Ocean Park with my friends. There were many visitors. The new aquarium was very famous and we wanted to go inside. The staff said, “There are many people inside, only VIPs can go inside!” We were furious and went to ride the roller coaster. Suddenly, a “God of Wealth” gave me a red pocket and said, “It can make your dream come true!”

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That day, I went back home and I wrote something on the red pocket. The next day, it was snowing in Hong Kong, and it was my wish. I went outside quickly and joined the snow war. My friends and I were very happy, but I wondered why it would snow in Hong Kong. Suddenly, the snow disappeared, and I got up. It was a dream, and it was not real! I was very depressed, but the red pocket was real.

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The red pocket made my “dream” come true. The red pocket disappeared, and suddenly, I saw that it was snowing. I was amazed and ran outside quickly. Chinese New Year was not boring, and it made me happy. I went downstairs, and I saw someone throwing snow down.

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I went to the rooftop quickly, and I saw a man throwing snow down from the rooftop. I did not understand why and I went in front of him to look at his face. He was the “God of Wealth”. I asked him, “Why did you do this?” He answered, “I am a god and my job is to make people happy! See you boy!” Then, he flew to the sky. Chinese New Year made my dream come true. My dream was, “Meet a god!”

Chinese New Year Resolutions

Chinese Year had came, red pockets all were coming to my pickets. Yesterday, my family and I fire crackers to celebrate Chinese Year. We were very happy and played many games at home. Played mahjong and poker, my sister went to Karaoking. She was very happy too. We liked Chinese New Year, and we liked the red pockets.

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We could eat a lot of food in Chinese New Year; carrot cake was my favourite food. Chinese New Year was not my favourite festival, my favourite was Christmas. Why? It was because Christmas has resolutions, but Chinese New Year didn’t. I was very bored after a few days, because I had got all the red pockets, and every day only eat and play. Chinese New Year liked an eating festival, and it made me feel dislike.

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10^th Chinese calendar, I went to Ocean Park with my friends. There were many visitors. The new ocean room was very famous and we wanted to go inside. The staff said, “There are many people inside, only VIP can go inside!” We were very angry and went to play the roller coaster! Suddenly, a mammon gave a red pocket for me and said, “It can make your dream come true!”

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That day, I went back home and I wrote something into the red pocket. Next day, Hong Kong snowing, it was my dream. I went outside quickly and joined the snow war. My friends and I were very happy, but I was much questioned, why Hong Kong could snow? Suddenly, the snow disappeared. It was a dream, and it was not real! I was very sad, but the red picket was really.

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The red pickets made my “dream” came true. The red pocket disappeared, suddenly, I saw the snow snowing. I was very amazed and ran outside quickly. Chinese New Year was not bored, it made me happy. After I went to the land, I saw someone threw the white thing down.

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I went to rooftop quickly, and I saw a man threw the things like snow down to the rooftop. I was very question and I went there and saw his face. He was the mammon. I asked to him, “Why do you do this thing?” The mammon answered, “I was a deity and my job is making people happy! See you boy!” Then, the mammon flew to the sky. Chinese New Year made my dream come true. My dream was, “See a deity!”