The Mystery of Amazon - amended by Phyllis

Today, I went to my father’s friend’s house with my father. It was in Brazil and we planned to watch a football match. Football was my favorite sport. I thought it was the most exiting match, because Brazil was good at playing football. We went there by aeroplane. We could see the Amazon Rainforest.

When we went to the plane, a boy yelled, “This airplane has make too many people die, do you want to drive it?” I was very scared. The plane got off, and I saw the boy looked like very frightened too.

After a few hours, we went to the Amazon Rainforest, the boy cried, “We will die on this airplane!” The flight attendant said, “He always goes to Brazil and Hong Kong by this airplane, but everyone on the plane has disappeared, except he and the people who worked on this airplane!” Suddenly, the airplane flew down quickly, the boy said, “The demon is killing us!” Everyone was afraid and did not know what they could do. The pilot shouted, “We will land on the Amazon Rainforest! All passengers should get off the plane!”

The other passengers did not take anything, but I took all my belongings. After a few minutes, the airplane disappeared. Only a flight attendant got off the airplane. She said, “When I went to get some water, I saw that the airplane caught a fire. It was a very old plane, and it was not the one we was on.

I looked around and found that the passengers had already left. I could only find one exit. I said to myself, ‘Oh no, I should use the boat or ship to get out!” When I sat under a tree, I heard someone singing. When I went near that person, I saw a house and twelve people, some were Hong Kong people and some were Brazilians. I asked them, “I am a victim. Why are you here?” A child said, “I am a victim too! My family’s things got lost on the airplane, so we went out of the plane. Then the airplane caught a fire.”

I knew what happened. I made a boat and went to Brazil. I told them everything about the airplane: first, the pilots deliberately landed the plane quickly. Then, when we got off the plane, the airhostess deliberately took us to the older plane. After that, the pilots went back to Brazil and said that the airplane disappeared, when the airplane was in fact in the Amazon Rainforest. We could not see it because there was an airport. The evidence was that the river was not on the map.

At the end, the criminals were arrested and I watched the football match with father happily.

Happy Father's Day - amended by Phyllis

22ndJune, 2009 Monday rainy and cold

Yesterday is Father’s Day. For Mother’s Day we ate European cuisine. Yesterday we had Japanese food.

I went to the swimming pool to swim yesterday morning with my father. We swam there happily. After we swam, we played underwater.

Afterwards, we went to a Chinese restaurant and ate some dim sum. We ate it happily because it was Father’s Day.

Then, we went back home. When it was two o’clock, I went to Jusco with my sister and Phyllis to buy some materials for cooking. We bought some seaweeds, soy sauce, rice, noodles, wasabi, corn, vegetables, ice-cream, strawberries and sweets.

After we bought the food, we went to grandmother’s house. I worked with my sister and Phyllis although I did not do too much.

We had to make sushi. First, we needed to cook rice. We used seaweed to wrap the rice. After that, we put the corn in the middle. Finally, we ate it with some wasabi.

We also made Japanese noodles. We needed to use water to cook the noodles. Then, we put it in the bowl. We put a bowl of noodles into the refrigerator. Finally, we took it out and put some seaweeds on top before we ate it.

We made parfait for dessert. We put some cornflakes in the bottom of a glass. We put some marshmallows and red bean ice-cream on top of the cornflakes. Finally, we put four pieces of strawberries on top.

Dinner time had come, we had the Japanese noodles first. Phyllis took some photos for us. Sister ate the noodles happily in the first photo. My aunt gave two kimonos to my sister and Phyllis. They looked like Japanese girls. If I did not know the photo was taken in Hong Kong, I would think it was taken in Japan.

My father and I were very happy at the dinner. After the dinner, we listened to the music and drank Japanese tea. We read a book together, too. We then ate parfait happily. It was cold and sweet.

Finally, we had some fruits and went back come. Before I slept, I thought this Father’s Day was a happy one. When I grow up, I will be a father! Then, I fell asleep… Good night!

Happy Father's Day

22ndJune, 2009 Monday ring and cold

Yesterday is father’s day. Mother’s day we ate a European cuisine. Yesterday, we ate the Japanese food.

Yesterday, morning I went to swimming pool and swim with my father. We swam there happily. After we swam, we play under the water.

After we swam in the swimming pool, we went to Chinese restaurant and ate some pastry and we ate it happily because it was father’s day.

Then, we went back home. When it was two o’clock was come, I went to Jusco with sister and Phyllis bought some materials which we needed to eat. We bought some seaweed, some soy source, some rice, noodles, wasabi, corn, vegetable, a box of ice-cream and some sweet.

After we bought the food’s seaweed, we went to grandmother’s house. And I worked with them although I did not do to many things.

Make sushi

First, we needed to cook rice. Then, we needed to use the seaweed to make with the rice. After that, we should use the corn to put it in the amidst. Finally, we could ate it with some mustard.

Make Japanese noodles

First, we needed to use the water to cook the noodles. Then, we put it in the blow. After that, we needed to put a blow of noodles in to the refrigerator. Finally, we put it out and put some seaweed, then, we could eat it.

Make Japanese ice-cream

First, we needed to put some cornflakes in the lowly of a cup. Then, we needed to put some sweet top of the cornflakes. After that, we needed to put some ice-cream. Finally, we needed to put four banana on the top.

Dinner time was come, we ate the Japanese noodles first. Phyllis took some photo for us. Sister was eating the noodles happily. On the first photo. My grandmother gave a coat of Japan for sister and Phyllis. They looked like a Japanese people. If I did not know it took in Hong Kong, I would thing it took the photo in the Japan.

In the dinner, my father was very happy and me too.

After the dinner, we drank the Japanese diners—tea. We listen to the music and drank the tea. We read the book together too. Eat Japanese’s ice-cream time was come, we ate the ice-cream happily, it was cold and sweet.

Finally, we ate the fruit and we went back come. When I sleep, I thought the father’s day was a happy day. When I grow up, I will be a father! Then, I sleep.......... Good night!

We will setup a waterland. So the visitor will play in the water and swim there. There is a scubadiving pool and you will see many fish, starfish, sea horses and too many sea creatures. There will be no sharks and whales. They are more dangerous sea animals.

I want to build an old ship, and we will put some pirate in it and some treasures to make a pirate ship. It will be the most special ship and attract more people to go to Ocean Park. We should build the pirate ship in the sea. We can make up a name for this theme it could be-“Special Room”.

We can build a big pond and put some boats there. It will be more romantic.

As for children, we can have racing cars for children over six years and they could drive happily. They will be very exciting. They are famous in China. I think Ocean Park could had more visitor than Disneyland. It was because Disneyland was very boring and did not have exciting games.

Make Ocean Park

Class has been suspended for 2 weeks in Hong Kong’s kindergartens and primary schools. Ocean Park did not have enough visitor, so I wanted to made some special things in it.

So I wanted to have some discount. Then, we could attract many people to Ocean Park. We could not look like Disneyland made the discount for the school which was not open for the student.

We should open a hotel for about ocean. We could build it in the sea, it will be a ocean hotel. It will be most interesting. We could made a marry party in it, so the bridegroom and the bride could have a happy trip and could have a beautiful recollection.

We could open a park in a big swimming pool. So the visitor could play water and swim there. There had a diving pool and you could see many fish, sea star, sea horse and too many sea things. There did not have shark and whale. It was more not safe sea animals.

I wanted to built a old ship, and we put some pirate in it and some special and beautiful things to make a pirate ship. It will be most special and will be have more people went to Ocean Park. We should built the pirate ship in the sea. We could make a name of this all things, it could be...... Yes, it could call Special Room.

We could hold a big pond and hold some boat there. It will be more dissolute.

About children, we could open a baby car and they could drive a car happily. Baby car need enough six years. Baby car was very excited, you could play it to collide with another car. You need to made another car gave could not be ok. The game was call Collide Collide Car. It was be popular among in China. I thing Ocean Park could had more visitor than Disneyland. It was because Disneyland was very bored and did not have exciting games.

Quick, quick, come to Ocean Park!

Your own theme park

Class has been suspended for 2 weeks in Hong Kong’s kindergartens and primary schools. You are the boss of Ocean Park. Think of a special programme to attract these children (and their parents) at this time.

Think about:
1. the theme
2. the games

Write: at least 430 words

OCEAN PARK WEBSITE

Indirect questions

1. Jenny asked Henry, “How old are you?”
Jenny asked Henry how old he was.
2. “Can you help me?” Fred asked Peter.
Fred asked Peter if he could help him.
3. “What is this?” asked Ben.
Ben asked what this was.

Detective Alex Law1

Today, I went to my father’s friend house with my father. It was in Brazil and we will watch football match. Football was my favorite sport. I thing it was the most exited match, because Brazil was a country where was good at playing football. We went there by the airplane. We could watch the Amazon Rainforest.

Amazon Rainforest had the region is home to about 2.5 million insect species, tens of thousands of plants, and some 2,000 birds and mammals. To date, at least 40,000 plant species, 3,000 fish, 1,294 birds, 427 mammals, 428 amphibians, and 378 reptiles have been scientifically classified in the region.

When we went to the airplane, a man said, “This airplane make too many people die, did you want to drive this airplane?” Then, I went to the airplane. Airplane was start flying, and I saw the man was in the airplane, looked like so scare.

After a few hour, we went to the Amazon Rainforest, a man said, “We will die in this airplane!” The airhostess said, “He always went to Brazil and Hong Kong by this airplane, but everyone was die, except he and the people who was work at this airplane!” Suddenly, the airplane flew drawn quickly, the man said, “The demon is killing us everyone was scared and did not know what can they do. The airplane driver said, “We should crash-land in the Amazon Rainforest”

The people did not take any things, but I took all the things. After few minute, the airplane got lose. Only a airhostess went out the airplane. She said, “When I went to got some water back, I saw the airplane got fire broke scorch. I went to the airplane and saw it was very old airplane, it this not the airplane which was us went to Brazil’s airplane.

When I went back the place where people stayed there, I lost them. I only could found a place to leave out. When I walked to the road, I said,‘Oh-on, I should use the boat or ship to got out!”So I only could not went out. When I sat in under the tree, I listened someone was singing, when I went near the person, I saw a house and twelve people, some a Hong Kong people and some a Brazil people. I asked them, “I am a victim. Why did you here?” A child said, “I am a victim too! My family’s things got lose in the airplane, so we went out the plane. Finally, the airplane broke a fire.”

I knew what happen it was and I made a boat and went to Brazil. I took all the things of the airplane.

First, the airplane drivers deliberately gave the plane flew drawn quickly. Then, when we went out the plane, the airhostess deliberately took us to the older plane. After that, the driver went back Brazil and said the airplane gave lose, but the airplane was in the Amazon Rainforest. We could not saw it because there was a airdrome. The .evidence was the big river was not have in the map.