20081021

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A world without...

Write a story about you waking up one day to find that any one of the following has not been invented:

1. glasses
2. air-conditioner
3. television
4. telephone
5. computer
6. car
7. aeroplane
8. book
9. camera
10. light bulb
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THINK ABOUT:
1. what the world will become?
2. how can you change the situation?

ALICE IN THE WONDERLAND SEQUEL - amended by Phyllis

When Alice got up, she saw a rabbit running fast. “It was a rabbit in my dream!” Alice shouted and ran after the rabbit. Her sister ran with Alice too. “Oh no, help me!” Alice shouted again and fell with her sister into the hole.

They walked and walked. Suddenly, a man wearing a hat called Hatter ran to their left. “Where is this place?” Hatter murmured. “I know, it is the other world. Let’s go there!” said Alice happily. A mouse fell into the hole and said quickly, “Hi I am…” “You are Mouse!” Alice said.

"We ought to go into our house, or else we will die. There’s no food and water here. Help us please!” Alice and her sister cried.

A caterpillar lay down on the ground and said, “Babies, go away from this place faster! If you don’t run away, you will be killed by the Queen and King of Hearts. Let’s go to the stairs beside the hole, quickly!”

The playing cards, the King and the Queen surrounded the two girls. “They are stupid!” all the playing cards shouted. “Music, quick!” the King ordered and danced.

Song:
King was angry, Girls walk slowly,
King was coming, Girls was running,Help…Help…Help Help…Help…HelpCatch you…Catch you.. Help you…Help you…


The playing cards caught the two girls. “Drink the magic potion to make you bigger!” Cheshire cat laid on the tree and shouted! Alice became bigger and bigger and exclaimed, “Go back to you heart house, and don’t use Dodo and Hedgehog to play golf again!”

Finally, Alice and her sister went back to their house. Sometimes they would go back to the hole to check if the king had treated the animals well.

"said"

  • murmur / whisper (say quietly)
  • shout / yell / cry (say loudly)
  • scream 尖叫
  • ask / question 問
  • explain 解釋
  • exclaim 興奮地大叫
  • order 命令

20081020






ALICE IN THE WONDERLAND SEQUEL.
When Alice was got up, she saw a rabbit ran faster. “It was a rabbit on my dream!”Alice shouted and ran after the rabbit. Her sister ran with Alice too. “Oh no help me!”Alice shouted again and threw with her sister on the hole. They walked and walked. “Where is this?” Duchess said smelly. “I know, it is the other world.” let’s go to there!”said Alice. “Hi I am…” Mouse said. “You are Mouse!”Alice said. “We ought to went to our house, help us please,” the two girl said.



Caterpillar said Baby went to this place faster, if you didn’t ran away, you will died by King of Hearts, let’s went to the share beside the hide, quickly,”
“There are stupid” all the playing cards man shouted. “Music, quickly” the King said.
Song:
King was angry, Girls walk slowly,
King was coming, Girls was running,
Help…Help…Help Help…Help…Help
Catch you…Catch you Help you…Help you…
The playing card man caught the two girls. “Eat the magic potion to made you bigger,” Cheshire cat shouted! Alice became bigger and bigger and shouted “went to you house, don’t use Dodo to play golf!”
Finally, Alice and Eaglet went to there house, sometime, they went to the hole to visited king it is took to the other animals good?

20081019

Fairy tales


Write a sequel 續集 to ALICE IN THE WONDERLAND.

words you may use:
  • evil (very bad)
  • lovely 可愛
  • kind (good-hearted)
  • playing cards 紙牌
  • magic potion 藥

Characters in Alice's Adventures in Wonderland:

Alice
The White Rabbit
The Mouse
The Dodo
The Lory
The Eaglet
The Duck
Bill the Lizard
The Caterpillar
The Duchess
The Cheshire Cat
The Hatter
The March Hare
The Dormouse
The Queen of Hearts
The Knave of Hearts
The King of Hearts
The Gryphon
The Mock Turtle



Alex newspaper - amended by Phyllis

Today, there was a small argument, and a father was hit in the eye!

It goes like this…The father wanted to take his two sons to the park. When they went out of their flat, there were other two men in the lobby. One was called Ben, the other Tony and Tony’s girlfriend Ying.

When the two men and one of the children went into the lift, Ben suddenly said angrily, “Get out, stupid!” “Wait for the other lift, this one is ours, baby!” Tony shouted. The child’s father was angry and took his children into the lift first. The other two men hit the father’s eye. Ying used a bag to hit the father’s back. A child used his father’s phone to call 999.

The father had to stay in the hospital for two months and the police arrested the other two men.

(145 words)

Alex newspaper

Alex newspaper
Today, there were small argument, but a father is hit in the eye

It was about this...
The father wanted to take his two sons. When they went out their house, the other two men. One was call Ben, the other was Tony and Tony’s girl friend call Ying. When two men and one child went to the lift, suddenly “went back stupid,” Ben angry said. “Wait the other lift, this lift is us bye! bye!” Tony shout. The child’s father was angry and took their children in the lift first. Two men fight the father’s eye. Ying use a bag to fight the father back. The one child used his father phone to call 999.
The father ought to stay hospital two moths and the police arrest the other two men.
By Jenny Chan

20081012

What really happened?


"SOS” superman helps me? -- Amended by Phyllis

Halloween is on 31st October. Five people went to a mountain on that day. They were Ben, Jenny, Ken, Tony and Sam.

When it was 11 p.m., they stayed in the mountain. They had dinner there. They went to the forest at midnight. “Help me!” Ben suddenly screamed. Many monsters caught Ben away.

When the monsters brought Ben to another forest, they stopped when they were next to some yellow trees. There were many witches.〝You have to become Peter Pan!”the witches shouted. Then, the witch used a curse to make him into Peter Pan. “At one o’clock Ben will became an evil man called Peter Pan,” shouted a witch.

The other four children were trying to save Ben, and they saw the trees turning from green to red to blue to, finally, black. “I think we went to a ghost forest,” said Sam. “Let’s go out of the forest.” When they turned back, a ghost caught them and put them into a jail.

In the jail, they saw Ben again. ”Ben, why didn’t the monsters catch us, but only you?” asked Ken. “I don’t know!” Shouted Ben. A man opened the jail door. “I think he is Batman!” murmured Ken. “No, he is Spiderman!” “Hi, my name is Superman,” the man said. Suddenly, a witch, a ghost, a vampire, a werewolf, a wizard, Tinkerbell, an invisible monster, Frankenstein and God of Death came. Superman used super hand to make them run away.
When the children and superman went out of the forest at 1 a.m., Ben flew in the sky and became Peter Pan!”Superman, you have to die now!Bye-bye!” Peter Pan said angrily. Superman suddenly became huge and used super light to turn Peter Pan back to Ben. Finally, the five children went back to their house and fell asleep quickly.

(319 words)

Movie viewing

Here is the link to watch film
Corpse Bride

『SOS』 superman helps me?
31stoctober is Halloween, that day have five people gone to a mountain.
They were Ben, Jenny, Ken, Tony and Sam
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When it was eleven O’clock, they stay in the mountain. They ate dinner in the mountain too. Eleven O’clock they went to the forest. 「help me!」 Ben said. Many Jesus caught Ben away.
When they ran after Jesus, they saw the trees were green turn red turn blue turn............................. Finally turn black. 「I think we went to a ghost forest.」said Sam. Let’s went out forest. When they turn back, a ghost caught them in the jail.
In the jail, they saw Ben again.「Ben why did Jesus not caught us, only caught you?」said Ken. 「I do not!」said Ben. I man open the jail door
. 「I think he is batman!」said Ken. 「No, he is Spiderman!」 said Tony. 「Hi my name is superman.」the man said. Suddenly, Jesus, Witch, Ghost, Vampire, Werewolf, Wizard, Tinkerbell, Invisible monster, Frankenstein and God of Death came superman used super hand to made them ran away.
When Ben, Jenny, Ken, Tony, Sam and superman went out the forest, Ben fly in sky and became Peter Pan!「superman you had go to died now!bye!bye!」Peter Pan said. A superman became big and used super light to made Peter Pan became Ben. Finally, the five children went to their house and slept fast.

20081007

Supernatural world

Here are some ideas:

1. Characters:
Jesus
Witch
Ghost
Vampire
Werewolf
Wizard
Peter Pan
Tinkerbell (fairy)
Invisible monster
Superman
Frankenstein
God of Death

2. Powers
Fly
Float in the air
Fireproof
Bulletproof
Invisible
Waterproof
Elastic

3. Places
Graveyard
Bat cave
Church
Alley
Haunted house

Movie viewing

NIGHMARE BEFORE CHRISTMAS
watch here

Counting

10 ten (“-ty”)
100 one hundred
1,000 one thousand
10,000 ten thousand
100,000 one hundred thousand
1,000,000 one million

All abouy eating - Phyllis' amendments

It is a sad news report. A shop selling fishballs, “siu mai”, fake shark’s fin, fried noodles, fried chicken wings, fried sweet potato, red and green bean soup, congee, sesame soup, sweet potato soup, French fries, apple pie, wanton, shrimp dumpling and soya milk in Causeway Bay. You can eat five bowls in two minutes because they are too yummy.
.
Although pop star Jenny Leung opened this shop, two people were food poisoned there. Many policemen went there to close the shop. Jenny was fined for HK$300,000 and the staff had to go to jail for two months. Many visitors said Hong Kong food is not good now. Jenny’s fans said she did not work hard and her songs were not good.

Alex Law Report

20081006

All abouy eating - Alex's original writing


Hong Kong Newspaper
It is a sad news report, a one shop selling fish balls, siu mai, fake shark, fin fried noodles, fried chicken wings, friend sweet potato, red/green bean soup, congee, sesame soup, sweet potato soup, French fries, apple pie, wanton, shrimp dumpling and soya milk shop in Causeway Bay. You can eat five bowls in two minutes because it is to mummy. Although pop stars Jenny Leung open this shop, two people food poisoning in that stall. Many policemen go there to close the shop. Jenny has to fine for 30000 money and the worker have to go to jail two moths. Many visitors said Hong Kong food is no good. Jenny fans said she no work hard and her song is no good.
Alex Law Report

20081005

Brainstorming

These are some ideas:

Hawker’s stall
Sell: Fishballs, “siu mai”, fake shark’s fin, fried noodles, fried chicken wings, fried sweet potato, red/green bean soup, sesame soup, sweet potato soup, congee, roasted beef, French fries, apple pie, wanton, shrimp dumpling, soya milk,

Food poisoning
Closing down (“the stall is closing down”)
Broke (“the hawker is broke.”)
Pop stars – Jenny Leung

In the form of a newspaper article (tense: past tense)

Married – divorce
Fans – upset

Customers scared of HK food
Interviews

Hawker
Go to jail
Fined for $....

Pop star invested in the shop

Haunted shop
Bats
They can eat 5 bowls at a time

20081001

Eating Place

We've discussed today about eating. Pick an eating place we've talked about (restaurant, cafe, dai pai dong, tea house, etc) and write a story about it. Think, for example, about what would happen in that place? What kind of people will be there? What kind of food will they order? What will they talk about?

Try to write more this time :-)

Somewhere in time - amended by Phyllis

Do you want to go back to a happy year?

I want to go back in time, when I was 6 years old. When I was P.1, I never did much homework and on weekdays we can go to some interesting places. In the picture, my sister and I were in Stanley and we were using clay to make a cartoon model. I always liked playing and never did much homework, and that's why I would want to go back to that period.

20080930

Somewhere in time 5 years - original writing

Somewhere in Time 5 years

Do you want to go to a happy year? I want to go in time, when I was 6 years. When I was P.1, I never did much homework and the weekday we can go to some interesting place. In the picture, my sister and I use the clay to make a cartoon. I like away playing and never do much homework, so that I want to during that period.

20080929

Old family albums


1. Find an old picture of yourself which was taken in the happiest moment of your life.
2. Tell me why you would choose to be that child in the picture again.

Questions to think about:
a. What year was it?
b. What were you doing in that period? (e.g. you were in kindergarten)
c. What were you doing in the picture?
d. How did you look like?
e. What was your life like during that period?
f. Why would you like to revisit that period?

My Very Own Shop (amended by Phyllis)

Japanese Shop

The shop will be a Japanese shop called “COME Japan”. It will be in Causeway Bay. It will be like SOGO, but this shop will have ten themes. The themes will be forest, ocean, boats, car, music, sky, toy, ball, food and airplane. There will be a butterfly house and a castle house. The staff will dress up as cartoon characters. It will be open 24/7. We can use flyers, posters and emails to promote the shop. The main colour for the decoration will be green. The entrance fee will only be $5.

20080928

My Very Own Shop - original writing


Japanese Shop
The shop is a Japan shop. This is on Causeway Bay. It like SOGO, but this shop will have ten themes. Will be forest, ocean, boats, car, music, sky, toy, ball, food and airplane theme. The are butterfly house and castle house. The service people make up about character It open about 24-hours. We can use flyer, poster and email. The decoration is green. The name is (COME Japan ). The entrance only 5$.

20080923

My Very Own Shop


Imagine that you were given a big sum of money to build your own shop. You have to convince your investor to invest in your shop by writing him a proposal.

Questions for thoughts:
1. What kind of shop? (Japanese products)
2. Where (location)? (Causeway Bay? Taikoo? Hang up the boat to the sky?)
3. Theme? (marine theme? Boats?)
4. Opening hours? (24-hour? 10am to 9pm?)
5. Staff? (uniform? Costumes? What kind of people will you employ?)
6. Promotion? (flyers? Posters? Emails? banners? Advertisements? Fireworks? )
7. Decoration?
8. Name?
9. Entrance fee?
10. Different floors? (castle? Butterfly house?)
11. Special services? (telescope renting service?)


Remember to think BIG!

Tense: future tense (“will”, “is going to”, “won’t”)

Picture Story (amended by Phyllis)


Once upon a time, there were some “super-magicians” living in the sky and in a tree house. We could not see them because they wore invisible coats, and we could only see their shoes. They could make people fly in the sky. The magic was a mystery. The magic was special and could amaze you. Some magicians played pranks on thieves. Some people said they were like policemen. Now the super-magicians lived on earth but we could not see them.

When the super-magicians lived in the magic world, they did not have money to buy anything. Alvin was one of them. When he was young, is family was poor and did not have much food to eat. So Alvin went to the magic school to learn some magic. When he was 12 years old, he used magic to make more gold so his family was not poor. They could have more food and were not hungry everyday. Now, he has built magic schools on earth and is living here. He is a famous magician. Everyone goes to his school to learn about magic. The magic world has disappeared.


Reminder:
BECAUSE and SO cannot appear in the same sentence.

Picture Story (original writing)

pictures used: 10, 7, 5, 1, 6
type of story: magic story
Once upon a time, there were some “super-magicians” lived in the sky and tree house. We can’t see them because they wear invisible coats, so only saw their shoes. They could make the people fly in the sky. The magic is a mystery. The magic is special and can make you amazed. Some magicians were playing pranks on thieves. Some people were say they same of policeman. Now the super-magicians live in an earth but we can’t see them.

When the super-magicians lived in the magic world, they did not have money to buy something. When Alvin was young, his family were poor and not much food to eat. So Alvin went to the magic school and learn some magics. When he was 12 years old, he used the magic to make more gold so his family was not poor. They can eat more food and not hungry everyday. Now, he build magic schools in earth and live here. He is a famous magician. Everyone go to his school to learn the magics. The magic world disappeared.

20080921

Picture Story (homework for 21st Sep)

Create a story based on at least 5 pictures from below. Feel free to reorder them. (you can use the words next to the pictures)

1. floating house
2. umbrellas, raining night
3. clown, circus

4. superman, fly
5. magician
6. invisible people
7. furniture, bed, hanging on a tree
8. colourful pigeons, chair
9. balloonman
10. invisible man

Rewriting the Ending of "Charlie and the Chocolate Factory"


The Chocolate Factory was closed from 1950 to 2003. Willy Wonka put five golden tickets in 5 chocolate bars. If you had a golden ticket, you could go to thechocolate factory which had been closed for 53 years. Five children got the golden ticket. They were a computer boy, a fat boy, a competitive girl, Charlie, and me (a rich girl).
In the factory, the fat boy drank the chocolate milk in the chocolate river. Buthe was too fat, so he fell into the river. I wanted Charlie to lose the competition, so I told a monkey to catch Charlie. He wasthrown to the sweet mountain, but the competitive girl pushed me to the mountainas well. The computer boy and the competitive girl went onto the boat, and thecompetitive girl was thrown into the ice-cream pool. Finally, the computer boy won the competition and he got the factory. I was very angry and I never talked to my Dad.

20080916

Tongue Twister of the Day: she sells seashell on the seashore.
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also practice the /v/ sound