"SOS” superman helps me? -- Amended by Phyllis

Halloween is on 31st October. Five people went to a mountain on that day. They were Ben, Jenny, Ken, Tony and Sam.

When it was 11 p.m., they stayed in the mountain. They had dinner there. They went to the forest at midnight. “Help me！” Ben suddenly screamed. Many monsters caught Ben away.

When the monsters brought Ben to another forest, they stopped when they were next to some yellow trees. There were many witches.〝You have to become Peter Pan！”the witches shouted. Then, the witch used a curse to make him into Peter Pan. “At one o’clock Ben will became an evil man called Peter Pan,” shouted a witch.

The other four children were trying to save Ben, and they saw the trees turning from green to red to blue to, finally, black. “I think we went to a ghost forest,” said Sam. “Let’s go out of the forest.” When they turned back, a ghost caught them and put them into a jail.

In the jail, they saw Ben again. ”Ben, why didn’t the monsters catch us, but only you?” asked Ken. “I don’t know！” Shouted Ben. A man opened the jail door. “I think he is Batman！” murmured Ken. “No, he is Spiderman！” “Hi, my name is Superman,” the man said. Suddenly, a witch, a ghost, a vampire, a werewolf, a wizard, Tinkerbell, an invisible monster, Frankenstein and God of Death came. Superman used super hand to make them run away.

When the children and superman went out of the forest at 1 a.m., Ben flew in the sky and became Peter Pan！”Superman, you have to die now！Bye-bye！” Peter Pan said angrily. Superman suddenly became huge and used super light to turn Peter Pan back to Ben. Finally, the five children went back to their house and fell asleep quickly.

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