20100627

Write a story about a new product 產品you have invented 發明for the market市場. (430 words)

WORDS YOU MAY USE:
  1. brand 品牌
  2. technology 科技
  3. producer 生產商
  4. commission 佣金
  5. contract合約
  6. characteristic 特徵
  7. packaging包裝
  8. ingredients 成分
  9. develop 發展
  10. stock 股票
  11. salary 薪金

My Last Minute Exam - amended

“Have you finished your revision?” My mum asked me in the afternoon. “I have finished it a long time ago!” I answered. Then, I played computer games. I was very interested in some ninja games. I thought tomorrow’s exam was science, so I needed to study the names of the laboratory utensils.

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I found my laboratory utensil book. My teacher said we would do an experiment using a Bunsen burner to boil some water in a beaker. Then, we needed to boil liquid in a test tube. We would have a written exam and a laboratory exam. After the revision, I went shopping with my friend in Tai Koo. I bought some clothes and a pair of shoes there. My friend asked me, “Have you finished your revision?” I was bored, “I have finished!” He asked, “I have a question about the exam. Can I ask you when I get home?” I said, “Okay, see you!”

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When I went back home in the evening, I was very amazed. There was a box of sushi on the table. I thought it was my dinner, so I ate it quickly. At night, my friend asked me a question on the phone, “Do you know how to do question No.63 on page 33?” I answered, “First, you put a Bunsen burner on the table, and then…” “No, I am talking about the math book! We will have the math exam tomorrow!” I was shocked and said, “I have revised the other subject! I need to work hard, bye!” He said, “Bye! See you at school!’

I was very scared that I would fail my math exam. Math was very hard for. I only had eight hours to revise, but I could not sleep! If I sleep, I would forget everything. I did not understand a lot of things, like how to measure the circumference and how to calculate the area.

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The next morning, I went to school. I asked my friend many questions on math. When the exam started, I had stomach ache and wanted to go to the toilet, I thought I had eaten too much sushi. I regretted it. When I went back to the classroom to continue my exam, I forgot everything. My friend gave me his answer sheet, and it was cheating. He was not afraid to be punished.

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After the exam, we both passed the exam, I was very happy but I thought I needed to reflect on myself.

My exam subject

“Have you finish you review?” My mum asked. “I finish it a lot!” I answered. My mum asked me in the afternoon. I reviewed my exam before two hours. I played the computer games. I was very interested by some ninja’s games. Suddenly, I remembered to study the science’s utensils. Tomorrow’s exam was the science.

I found my science’s utensils. My teacher said we will do the experiment about used the Bunsen burner to burn some water in a beaker. And we needed to burn a test tube’s liquid. We needed to do an experiment and examination paper. After I finished my review about experiment, I approximately my friend to Tai Koo and shopping there. I bought some clothes and a pair of shone there. My friend asked me, “Did you finish your review?” I answered bored, “I finish!” He asked, “I have a question about the exam, I went back home and ask you ok?” I said, “Okay, see you!”

When I went back home in the evening, I was very amazed. It was because there were some sushis in a table. I thought it was my dinner, so I ate it quickly. At night, my friend asked me a question in the mobile phone, “How to do the No.63 in page 33?” I answered, “First, you put a Bunsen burner, and then…” “No I ask the math book! We will have an exam about math tomorrow!” I was very surprised and said, “I review the other subject! I need to hard work, bye!” He said, “Bye! See you at school!’

I was very scared that I failed the math. The math was very hard to review. I only had eight hours to review it, but I could not sleep! If I sleep, I will forget my review’s scope. I did not know many things, like how to count the circumference and how to count the cm2. The exam came, I asked my friend, “How to do it?” I ask many questions.

When it was exam, I was very stomach-ache and wanted to go to the toilet, I thought I eat many sushi. I was regretting to eat many sushis. After went back the classroom to do my exam, I forget many things. I forget all the questions that I asked my friend. My friend give me the answer, it was cheat. He did not worry any question.

After the exam I got pass in the exam and he got pass too, I was very happy but I thought I needed to self-criticism myself.

I was a computer expert, and a policeman too! My job was not hard work. I could solve internet cases quickly. I had many friends in my team, Ben and Tom. They were computer experts too. But their computer techniques were not as good as mine.

One morning, I got a case about Al-Qaeda’s video. Osama bin Laden was the leader of the terrorist group. He said he would use his life to bomb the White House. Before I heard about this news, I had read the newspaper article about Laden’s death. When I googled Laden, I found in his blog that he would kill George W. Bush.

One-third of my team went to Bush’s house. Another one-third went to the White House. Ben, Tom and I stayed at the police station. We needed to find Laden. It was very easy for me, but I needed to be quicker than Laden. Laden said he would bomb the White House and kill Bush at six o’clock in the evening.

When I went to get the GPS at the White House, I saw Obama and he gave it to me. He said, “You have done very well!” I went back to the police station quickly, and wanted to arrest Laden. Ben used the GPS to find Laden. Laden was in London and we thought he did not have enough time to go to the USA. So I went back home and watched TV. The news reporter said, “There was a bomb in USA’s Times Square. Twenty-five people died and sixty-eight hurt. Al-Qaeda said they did it, and they would send a member to kill Bush and bomb the White House.

I went back to the station quickly, and Ben and Tom were working there. I found that Al-Qaeda member and arrested him. I found him in front of the White House. He was dressed in a military uniform. I was very happy that I could help Obama. He gave me a big bonus and promoted our whole team. But I knew the video was not real, because the “Laden” wore a wig.

20100623

Extreme situations

Write a story about one of the following extreme situations: (write 400 words)

-- 1 hour before the bomb explodes
-- 8 hours before your Math exam (and you just found that you've studied the wrong subject)

Words you may use:

  • Math equation
  • Bunsen burner
  • cheat
  • test tube holder
  • area