Osama Bin Laden is real?

I was a sensible person of computer, and I was a policeman too! It was very relaxed to do my job. When it was some case about online, I could crack it quickly. I had many friends in my team, Ben and Tom. They were sensible person of computer too. But their computer techniques were not go of me. Jenny, Ken, Peter, Sam, Candy and Alan were the front line of our team.

One day morning, I heard a case, it was about an Al-Qaeda’s video. Osama bin Laden was the leader of the team. He said he will use his life to deep-fry the White House of the USA. Before I heard this news, I read the newspaper about Osama bin Laden died. When I went to online of Osama bin Laden, he used the blog to say he would kill the George Walker Bush.

Jenny, Ken and Peter went to George Walker Bush’s house. Sam, Candy and Alan went to White House of the USA. Ben, Tom and I stay in the office. We needed to find the Al-Qaeda’s leader Osama bin Laden. It was very easy for me, but needed to quicker than the Osama bin Laden. Osama bin Laden said he would deep-fry the White House of the USA and kill the George Walker Bush at six o’clock in the evening today.

When I went to buy a computer reader, I saw Barack Obama and he bought it to me. He said, “You are very well in the police, lubricated!” I went to the police office quickly, and wanted to catch the Osama bin Laden. Ben used the computer reader to find the Osama bin Laden. He was in London and we thought he could not enough time to go to the USA. So I went back home and watched TV. When it was TV news report, the reporter said, “There was a bomb in USA’s large building. Twenty-five people die and sixty-eight hurt. Al-Qaeda said it was their attack, and they would call a person to kill George Walker Bush.

I went back to the office quickly, Ben and Tom were working there. I found the Al-Qaeda’s member and went to caught him. I found him in front of the White House. He wore the clothes like the military personnel. I was very happy that I could help Barack Obama and he gave me some money and a work for our team that it was very high firewood. But I know the video is not real, because the “Osama bin Laden” used the leave of hair.

Write a story about something fake 冒充; 假 (people, things, places, events事情, animals, etc). (400 words)

Words you may use:

• go online 在線的
• go on the Internet 上網
• video 錄像
• Osama bin Laden 拉登
• Al-Qaeda 阿爾蓋達
• spacecraft 太空船
• soul 靈魂
• spacesuit 太空衣
• pirated 非法翻版
• Pakistan 巴基斯坦
• fake moustache 假鬍子
• terrorist 恐怖分子
• explode 爆炸
• Indian 印度
• South Pole 南極
• polar bear 北極熊

Naughty or Lovely Cousin? -amended

I went to my grandfather’s house today to visit my cousin. He was six months old. He was very quiet and lovely. So my sister always kissed his face. It was very smooth and I always touched his face. When my mother took him to my grandfather’s backyard, my aunt shouted, “Eat the watermelon, it is very yummy!”

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So my mother went to eat the watermelon. She put my cousin in the ground, and he crawled in the backyard. He always loved crawling around, and he crawled into the house. When my mother went back to the backyard, she was very scared. She told my aunt, and she was very worried.

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My mother thought he went out of the house, so my mother and aunt went out of the house quickly. They thought someone kidnapped him. I was in my uncle’s room playing computer games. Suddenly, my cousin crawled in. I did not know my mother and aunt were finding him. So I played with him happily.

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I asked my grandfather in the evening, “Where is my mum?” He answered, “She is finding your cousin!” I said, “My cousin was in uncle’s room!” He said, “Oh, thank you! Let me tell your mother!” After they went back to grandfather’s house, they scolded me but I did not know what happened!

Naughty or Lovely Cousin?

I went to my grandfather house today, I visited my brother. He was six months old, he was my cousin. He was very quite and lovely. So my sister always kissed his face. It was very smooth and I always y taught his face. When my mother hold him to the grand of the small park in my grandfather, my aunt shouted, “Eat the watermelon, it is very yummy!”

So my mother went to eat the watermelon. She put my cousin on the grand, and he climbed on the park. He loved climbed always, so he climbed in to the house. When my mother went back to the park, she was very scared. She taught to my cousin’s mother, aunt, she was very worried after she heard this thing.

My mother thought he was went out the house, so my mother and my aunt went out the house quickly. They thought someone caught him to the other place. I was in my uncle room and played the computer games. Suddenly, my cousin climbed in. I did not know my mother and aunt were finding him. So I played with him happily.

I asked my grandfather in the evening, “Where is my mum?” He answered, “She is finding you cousin!” I said, “My cousin was in uncle room!” He said, “Oh, thank you! I tell to you mother!” After they went back to grandfather house, they reproved me but I did not know what happen!

I went to my uncle’s birthday party today. My uncle was a brave and helpful fireman. So I bought a birthday gift for him. It was a Hong Kong Firemen’s badge in 1868. I thought he was very happy about it. I bought it in an old shop in Tai Koo which sold souvenirs of the Hong Kong Fire Department. I brought a bag with something inside

My great-great-grandfather was a fireman, and my father was a fireman too. I did not want to be a fireman, because I did not want to be a burnt like a roasted chicken. I thought it was too dangerous, and I was not brave. When I went to my uncle’s party, I forgot to bring the gift and I was very worried. According to my family rules, if we did not give our uncles and aunts a birthday gift, we needed to give them $100,000 and needed to wash the dishes for about ten years. I was very frightened, so I went to the toilet and climbed out of the party room.

I ran back home quickly and I found the birthday gift. It was in the drawer of my desk and I took it quickly. When my uncle wanted to go to the toilet, there was nobody inside. He did not know I went inside before him and he closed the window of the party room. When I went outside the toilet, I could not go back in the party room, because the window was closed.

I bought an electric saw and I cut the window quickly. I saw a boy going to the toilet. I was very unhappy, because the boy was my brother. Finally, I could not play computer for one month, it felt like staying in a prison!

What I Lost It

I went to my uncle birthday party today, my uncle was a brave and a helpful fireman. So I bought a birthday gift to him, it was a Hong Kong Fireman team’s badge from 1868 years. I thought I was very happy to him. I bought it in an old shop which sold the Hong Kong Fire Services Department in Tai Koo. I brought a bag there and I brought some things there.

My grand grand grand father did the fireman, so my father was a fireman too. I didn’t want to be a fireman, because I did not want to be a chicken stewed in rice wine. I thought it was not good to me, and I was no brave. When I went there, I forgot to bring the Hong Kong Fireman team 1868’s badge and I was very scared. If I did not give him a gift, I needed to give him $100000 and needed to wash dishes about ten years. I was very frightened of it, so I went to the toilet and climbed out the party room.

I ran back my home quickly and I found the birthday gift. It was in my table and I took it quickly. When my uncle wanted to go toilet, he saw there were not anyone. He did not know I went inside before he went toilet he and he closed the window of the party room. When I went outside the party room toilet, I could not go in, because the window was closed.

I bought an electric saw and I cut the window quickly. I saw a boy was going toilet, I did not want to go down that time, but I full down there. I was very not happy, because the boy was my brother. Finally I could not play computer one mouth, it liked I stay in a prison!

Write a story about you forgetting to bring something one morning. It should have a surprising ending.

Words:

• attitude towards life
• sense of time

My African Friend- amended

My friend arrived at Hong Kong today. He was very rich in his country. He was an African. I took him to street stalls to eat some Hong Kong delicacies. He was very happy, because there were different kinds of food.

He liked to eat egg puffs, he said they were very cute and delicious. I bought herbal jelly for him, and he shook suddenly when he was eating it. He said, “It is very cold for me, because I come from a very hot country! But it was very sweet, and I like it. Can you buy some hot jelly for me?” I answered, “Sorry, the jelly needs to be icy, if not it will turn bad and it cannot be eaten!”

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The next day, I took him to Ocean Park, because he had never seen any sea animals before he came here. When we went in, he saw some sharks and thought they were lovely. We went to the Headland Rides. He was very excited after playing in the Raging River. It was because he was very hot when he lined up for the Raging River, and he could cool down in the river.

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He was very happy in Hong Kong. He told me about cultural differences and their beautiful accessories made of bones. Then, he went back to Africa. I thought he would remember this trip.

My Strange Neighbour- amended

I was a From.1 student. I had a new neighbour and her name was Candy. She was very strange. She didn’t like to talk with others. She always went to the library. I thought her hobby was reading books.

One day, she moved in next door. When I went to school we ran into each other, I asked her some questions, but she did not answer me. When I went to school that day, I saw light in her pocket and I was curious. I went back home, and I saw from my window that she was eating sashimi. I thought there were enough for her to eat one year. There were forty-three boxes in her red refrigerator, twenty-nine in a green refrigerator, one hundred and forty-five in a black refrigerator. There were many sashimis all over the house.

I thought she was very rich. When it was six o’clock in the evening, her parents and sister came back. I could not see their faces, because they wore hats and masks. I wanted to know what they looked like. At school, she always drew during class. She drew quickly and she got many art awards. But I thought she was unhappy, because she did not smile.

One day, our Chinese teacher told us to work on a project with our neighbor. Candy gave me a letter which wrote: “Would you like to do this project at my home?” I was very happy, because I could see her family and I could eat the sashimi.

When I went to her home, I saw many games. I was very happy and played happily. I forgot to do my work, only Candy did the project. When it was three o’clock in the afternoon, I went to Candy and she scolded, “Don’t play anymore, do the project! If not, you can go back home and no need to come!”

I felt guilty and I did the project with her and I knew she was a serious girl. When it was six in the evening, her father was back. He was surprised to see me and asked, “Who is he?” Candy answered, “He is my classmate and he is doing a project with me!” Then, he took off his mask and I recognized him. He was the chief executive!

Candy said to me when her father went back to his room, “My mother was very busy and no time to cook dinner to me, so she bought many sashimi for me to eat!” I knew all the mysteries were solved and became friends with Candy.