2121 underground city

When it was 2121, everyone lived in underground city. It was because 2073 had a big earthquake, and everywhere appeared some holes. The holes became the road and the street for the people to walk.

Many people used “Bar Kai” to be the transport. The invention was invented by Alex. When 2121, there were no one and where pool, everyone lived happily and rich. When Alex was small, he liked watched the car racing and always used his money to watched the live match. He liked car so he went to library and read some books about car.

When he was twenty-four years old, he invented a car that it could fly in the sky. Alex used four years to invent this car and he called it “Bar Kai” When it was 2121 he got the Nobel Prize. There were many people used the “Bar Kai” at 2121.

There were some sky shop and Alex always went there. Alex father was the shop boss. So Alex always went there and bought some food and snack to eat. When it was evening, there were many Bar Kai in the sky and much people went back home or bought foods. Some were not very fast, but some a very quick, look like his wife was waiting him.

At night, there were many birds sang song and flew in the sky. After the bird song, everyone had there dinner. And after dinner, there were many people sporting in the sky park. Sky Park was on top of the underground city and there were a small car match there. Alex went there every night and when he was thirty-one years old, he married a girl and she was called Candy. Candy born a boy, called Tom. Tom liked drive the car in the car match and he always joined it.

When the underground city was manypeople, there were forty-five teams to build building and all the police will be so hard to do anything, because they need to find the criminal not easily. The city were not many case, because anyone was not pool and rich. There were not war there and anyone lived there happily. The hospital facilities were very newly and all the ill could treat and everyone was very well.

Alex never wanted to die, because he could join this paradise happily and he could invented other new things and enjoyed this world.

Setting (time + place): choose one from below:

1. circus 馬戲團, 1920

2. underground 地下 city, 2121

3. Google office, 2010

The Special Holiday-- Snowing in Hong Kong-amended

Today was the first time Hong Kong snowed. My school had a special holiday and we could relax. I was very happy because we could play with the snow. Although it was not heavy, my sister and I played happily. After the snowball war, my sister went back home and I went to Taikoo Shing. I ate a spaghetti Bolognese for breakfast. It was very delicious, but it was very expensive and not enough for me.

I went to the Jusco department store and shopped there happily. After buying two models, I saw the American White House model and the American president, Barack Obama. He was saying something on stage to Donald Tsang. There were many reporters. It was a press conference. I was very amazed, although I did not know what they were saying.

I went to the Ocean Park happily after shopping. When I went to the upper area of the park, I saw there was an igloo next to the shark museum. When I went inside the igloo, it was a museum of South Pole animals. There was a warning at the door which wrote: “If you feel cold, you can rent a down coat at our shop.”

When I went inside, I found many animals and that the design of the museum was very interesting. The animals were very colourful and I liked the bears very much. I was very happy because I could see animals from other countries. I then went to the thrill rides.

When I left Ocean Park, I went to a Chinese restaurant and had some dim sum. Then, I looked at the photos taken today, so that I could tell my family about the interesting things happening today. There was a photo of my sister and I playing with the snow and there were photos of Barack Obama and Donald Tsang. I was very happy, because I saw Barack Obama.

When I went back home, it was four o’clock in the afternoon. I talked to my best friends on MSN and they were very amazed there was snow in Hong Kong and that there were animals from other countries in Ocean Park

Afterwards, I went to a fast food shop and ate a $20 combo. I went back home and slept all day. It was a funny and exciting day.

Today was the first day of Hong Kong snowed. My school had a special holiday and we could relax ourselves, I was very happy because we could play the snowed. Although it was not big, my sister and I played it happily. After we played the snow war, my sister went back home and I went to the Taikoo Shing. I ate a spaghetti Bolognese. It was very yummy, but it was very rich and not enough my capacity.

I went to the Jusco department store and shopping there happy. After I bug two models, I saw the USA White House model and I saw the USA president-- Barack Obama. He was saying something jing for Donald Tsang Yam-Kuen. There were many reporters. After I went to the 2nd flower, I knew it was a news conference.

I was very amazed, although I did not know what they are saying. I went to the Ocean Park happily too. When I went to the upper area, I saw there were a lgloo next to the Shark Museum. When I went inside the lgloo, it was a South Pole’s animals Museum. There were a warning before I went in, it writes: If you are not having warmed you may need a clothes of our shop, you can rent it one.
When I went in, it was very interesting and many animals inside too. The animals were very colorfully and I like the bear very much. I was very happy, because I could saw the animals from other country. After I visited it, I went to play the other games in Ocean Park.

After I went to Ocean Park, I went to a Chinese food shop and ate some dim some. Then, I took many photos today, so that I could take the interesting things for my family. There were a photo of my sister and I playing the snow and there were the photos of Barack Obama and Donald Tsang Yam-Kuen. I was very happy, because I saw the Barack Obama.
When I went back, it was four o’clock in the afternoon. I used MSM and talked to my best friends and they were very amazed Hong Kong had snow and Hong Kong Ocean Park had many other country animals.

After I sent the MSM, I went to a fast food shop and ate a $20 food, I went back home and slept a day. This was a funny and exciting day.

Write a story about a very special holiday.

Words you may use:

• Taikoo Shing
• spaghetti bolognese
• White House
• South Pole
• penguins
• Haiti
• earthquake

Famous Life-amended

Ben was born in a poor family, there were many people living in his house. His aunt did not like him, so she always hit him. Ben had a younger brother, Ken, and his father loved Ken more than Ben. Ben thought it was unfair and studied very hard. He thought, “If I work hard, my father will love me more!” Although his family was poor, it could send Ben and Ken to school. Ben worked very hard at school. So he had very good results and he was famous at school. But someone hated him and wanted to make fun of him.

One day, Ben was on his way to school and suddenly a boy poured a bottle of water on his head. Ben was very sad and cried. The boy slipped away. When Ben arrived at school, he told the teacher about it. The boy came from a rich family and he was called Jason. Jason’s father is the principal. Jason hated Ben very much and always made fun of him. Although Ben worked very hard, he could not study happily at school.

Ben always went to a book shop to read the fashion magazines. He wanted to be a famous designer. He wanted to make his dream come true, so he always went to boutiques and studied the clothes. Ben was very happy when he graduated from primary school, because Jason could not make fun of him.

When Ben was eighteen years old, he got 10 As in the HKCEE. He went to France to study art. He met a famous designer and his name is Raymond. Raymond always designed interesting clothes. He worked for fifty actresses in the world. Raymond was Ben’s idol. After Ben had graduated from university, he became Raymond’s assistant.

Ben always helped Raymond a lot, so Raymond liked him very much. Other assistants thought he was just trying to please Raymond, and they always avoided him. Ben was very sad and quitted. Ben used his salary to set up a fashion company. There were many actresses inviting him to design clothes and he became famous in the USA.

When Ben was twenty-four years old, he was very famous in the world, and many celebrities asked him to design clothes. Ben’s designs appeared in many fashion magazines. He received more than sixty design awards and had twenty-two fashion labels.

Hong Kong's 1st Mail Robbery-amended

There were three postmen going to work. Suddenly, two men appeared and blinded two of the postmen with chemical spray and grabbed two mailbags containing 1,100 letters. When the two men ran away, a policeman helped them and called 999. The three postmen went to the police station after leaving the hospital.

After two days, the three postmen got a letter. It wrote, “If you report to the police, we will kill you!” The postmen were very scared, because they told the police about the robbers’ clothes. Now the police was finding them. The postmen were scared that the robbers would come back for revenge, so they found the famous private detective, Alex, for help.

Alex said, “I will help you!” When the postmen left the Alex’s office, they saw many men who looked like gangsters. When the gangsters tried to hit the postmen, four police cars arrived. The gangsters escaped. The postmen were very scared and thought, “Who called the police?” Alex appeared and said, “Me!”

The postmen were very surprised and asked, “Why did you know?” Alex said, “Because I found that there aren’t many people shopping here in Mongkok today. I thought there must be something wrong. It was the gangsters, so I called the police to save you.” Then Alex asked about what the robbers looked like, and the postmen answered, “They were wearing green clothes and were not very tall.”

Alex went to the New Territories and thought, “If the robbers are gangsters, it will not be easy to find them.” So he investigated the gangsters. There were seven gangs in the New Territories. When the two investigators came back, they said, “The robbers came from Yuen Long.” Alex went to his office and searched for the gangs on the Internet. The gang put some drugs in four envelopes and sold them. If the police knew about the drugs, it would arrest the gangsters.

Alex went to the police station and told the police everything. Then, the police arrested the Yuen Long gang. Alex became famous after this case. But the gang did not disappear, and Alex was very scared. He worked hard on his other cases.

1. don’t mix up: FORM and FROM

2. don’t mix up: THE and THEY

3. don’t forget the singulars and plurals

4. don’t forget the close quotation mark (”)

Today was Kenny’s birthday, so he no needed to do his job—fire chief. When Kenny was shopping with his wife, there was an airplane colliding to the World Trade Centre and Kenny ran to there. It was because he was a fire chief and he went near the fire engine and wore the protective gear to help the people.

When Kenny wanted to go inside, there was a second airplane colliding and the Centre of 89th flower fire. There were many firemen inside and could not go out. Kenny was very worried and went inside quickly. When Kenny went inside, many types of rubble flew down and the exit disappeared. Kenny avoided the rubbles, but he fell down. Kenny saw his other team members were went to the back door and he went after them to.

Suddenly, Kenny heard a little girl cried loudly. Kenny turned back and saw the girl. He wanted to help the girl, but it helped the girl, he may die. Kenny’s team members—Ken shouted, “Kenny I am coming, help the girl!” So Kenny ran to help the girl carefully. When the wanted to leave out the World Trade Centre, and he saw there were many rubbles flew down. Kenny was much scored and wanted to run outside quickly, but Ken did not have enough time to run out, because he was backing a girl.

Ken was Kenny best Shot block, so he went back and took him outside. When they went outside, the building flew down and there were many people inside. When Kenny and Ken went out, there were many firemen smile and said, “Good job, Kenny!”

They went to drink some water and suddenly, they saw a boss and went inside to help the boss. The boss is president’s family member, if they do not helped the boss, they lose there work and could not be famous on the world. So, they went inside and used a fire hose and caught the fire. When Kenny went inside, the back was disappeared, and the commercial building disappeared too. Many people fell down and they died.

Kenny and the boss—Ben went to a toilet, so that they could safe. Then, the building collapsed. Kenny’s team members and the other firemen ranks found them. Ken heard someone shouted, and he was Ben. Although Ken found Ben, Kenny died. President helped Kenny awarded a prize and said he was a brave man after two day.