Famous Life-amended

Ben was born in a poor family, there were many people living in his house. His aunt did not like him, so she always hit him. Ben had a younger brother, Ken, and his father loved Ken more than Ben. Ben thought it was unfair and studied very hard. He thought, “If I work hard, my father will love me more!” Although his family was poor, it could send Ben and Ken to school. Ben worked very hard at school. So he had very good results and he was famous at school. But someone hated him and wanted to make fun of him.

One day, Ben was on his way to school and suddenly a boy poured a bottle of water on his head. Ben was very sad and cried. The boy slipped away. When Ben arrived at school, he told the teacher about it. The boy came from a rich family and he was called Jason. Jason’s father is the principal. Jason hated Ben very much and always made fun of him. Although Ben worked very hard, he could not study happily at school.

Ben always went to a book shop to read the fashion magazines. He wanted to be a famous designer. He wanted to make his dream come true, so he always went to boutiques and studied the clothes. Ben was very happy when he graduated from primary school, because Jason could not make fun of him.

When Ben was eighteen years old, he got 10 As in the HKCEE. He went to France to study art. He met a famous designer and his name is Raymond. Raymond always designed interesting clothes. He worked for fifty actresses in the world. Raymond was Ben’s idol. After Ben had graduated from university, he became Raymond’s assistant.

Ben always helped Raymond a lot, so Raymond liked him very much. Other assistants thought he was just trying to please Raymond, and they always avoided him. Ben was very sad and quitted. Ben used his salary to set up a fashion company. There were many actresses inviting him to design clothes and he became famous in the USA.

When Ben was twenty-four years old, he was very famous in the world, and many celebrities asked him to design clothes. Ben’s designs appeared in many fashion magazines. He received more than sixty design awards and had twenty-two fashion labels.