- king
- assassinate
- fail
20090726
What happens after "happily every after"?
Find a fairy tale that ends with "and they lived happily ever after". Write a story telling us what happens afterwards.
Marco's Dream - amended
When I watched a TV news report about a boy disappearing from a ship called Curious Boy, I saw a ray of light in my room. It came from the window and looked like an arrow. I was curious. So, I ran after the ray of light. It was very bright, I couldn’t see anything. Then, I fell asleep.When I got up, I saw a map on the ground. When I picked it up, my room became a bus. I saw that there were many aliens on the bus, and they looked like animals. When I get off the bus, the aliens were looking at me. They said angrily, “Everyone kill him!” I was very scared and keep running. When I was running, I met my friend, Tony. He shouted, “Run after me!” I saw a boy in the middle of the sun.Suddenly, I heard my alarm clock ringing. I find that it was a dream. Then I got up and prepared for school. When I looked out of the window, I saw the boy in the middle of the sun. It looked like my dream. When I wanted to tell my mum, the boy disappeared. I was very curious about it.So I told everything to my friends after school. Tony said, “I saw the boy too!” Jenny said, “When I was reading my comic books, the comics suddenly changed into a newspaper. There was report about a boy disappearing from the ship. They ship was called Curious Boy!” Tommy shouted, “I had this dream too!” I said, “Me too!”Jacky said, “We went to the Central Library. If we went to the top floor, we will find some data!” But the reference resources library did not welcome anyone under 12. So, only Tommy and I could go inside.
We went into the newspaper library. Tommy asked, “How can we find it?” I said, “The TV news report was on 21st May,1997, because I saw the day on the dream.”We asked the librarian, “Where is the newspaper on 21st may, 1997?” The librarian answered, “It was there!” I found the newspaper and read it. When I looked at the picture about the ship, I knew all the secrets. The ship was called Curious Boy! They boy was called Marco. There were many sharks on the ship. The captain and a sailor used the guns to kill Marco.We told everything to the police, and the captain and the sailor went to jail. When I went back home, I heard Marco said, “Thank you!”
We went into the newspaper library. Tommy asked, “How can we find it?” I said, “The TV news report was on 21st May,1997, because I saw the day on the dream.”We asked the librarian, “Where is the newspaper on 21st may, 1997?” The librarian answered, “It was there!” I found the newspaper and read it. When I looked at the picture about the ship, I knew all the secrets. The ship was called Curious Boy! They boy was called Marco. There were many sharks on the ship. The captain and a sailor used the guns to kill Marco.We told everything to the police, and the captain and the sailor went to jail. When I went back home, I heard Marco said, “Thank you!”
Marco's dream
Today, when I watched the TV news report about a boy disappeared on the ship. The ship called curious boy, I saw a ray of light in my room, it came form the window and looked like an arrow. I was curious. So, I ran after the ray of light. It was very bright, I couldn’t see anything. Then, I got a sleep.
When I got up, I saw a map on the land. When I took it up, my room became a bus. I saw a bus have many look like a pet, but it was not a pet. When I left out the bus, another pet only saw me. They said angry, “ Everyone we killer him!” I was very scared and ran and ran. When I ran to the bright, I saw a boy there. It was …
Suddenly, I listened my clock was ring out. Then I got up and preparation to go to school. When I watched the window, I saw the sun amidst had a boy. It looked like my dream. When I wanted to tel1 my mum, the boy disappeared. It was very curious it.
So, after school, I told all the things to my friends, Tommy, Jacky, Jenny and Alan. Tony said, “I saw the boy too!” Jenny said, “When I watched the comic, I saw a report. It was about a boy disappeared in the ship. They ship was called curious boy!” Tommy shouted, “I have this dream!” I said, “Me too!”
Jacky said, “We went to the Hong Kong Public Libraries. If we went to the top flow, we will find some data!” Then, we went to the Hong Kong Public Libraries. The reference resources libraries needed the persons enough 12years. So, only I and Tommy could came in the libraries. When we went to the newspaper libraries. Tommy said,“How can we find it?” I said, “The TV news report was at 21st May,1997, because I saw the TV news had this day.
We asked the libraries’s worker, “Where did the news about 21st may, 1997?” The libraries’s worker answer, “It was put it there!” I find the news and read it. The newspapers. Suddenly we went to they ship. The ship was called CURIOUS BOY! They boy was called Marco. They ship had many shark. The skipper and another sailor used the guns to kill Marco.
Suddenly, we went back the libraries. We said all the things to the policeman and the shipper and sailor went to the jail. When I went back home, I listened Marco said, “Thank you!”
When I got up, I saw a map on the land. When I took it up, my room became a bus. I saw a bus have many look like a pet, but it was not a pet. When I left out the bus, another pet only saw me. They said angry, “ Everyone we killer him!” I was very scared and ran and ran. When I ran to the bright, I saw a boy there. It was …
Suddenly, I listened my clock was ring out. Then I got up and preparation to go to school. When I watched the window, I saw the sun amidst had a boy. It looked like my dream. When I wanted to tel1 my mum, the boy disappeared. It was very curious it.
So, after school, I told all the things to my friends, Tommy, Jacky, Jenny and Alan. Tony said, “I saw the boy too!” Jenny said, “When I watched the comic, I saw a report. It was about a boy disappeared in the ship. They ship was called curious boy!” Tommy shouted, “I have this dream!” I said, “Me too!”
Jacky said, “We went to the Hong Kong Public Libraries. If we went to the top flow, we will find some data!” Then, we went to the Hong Kong Public Libraries. The reference resources libraries needed the persons enough 12years. So, only I and Tommy could came in the libraries. When we went to the newspaper libraries. Tommy said,“How can we find it?” I said, “The TV news report was at 21st May,1997, because I saw the TV news had this day.
We asked the libraries’s worker, “Where did the news about 21st may, 1997?” The libraries’s worker answer, “It was put it there!” I find the news and read it. The newspapers. Suddenly we went to they ship. The ship was called CURIOUS BOY! They boy was called Marco. They ship had many shark. The skipper and another sailor used the guns to kill Marco.
Suddenly, we went back the libraries. We said all the things to the policeman and the shipper and sailor went to the jail. When I went back home, I listened Marco said, “Thank you!”
20090712
Life of a Football - amended
Hi, my name is Kiki. I am a football. I always run in the football field during the sunny days. I live in a storeroom for about one month. My best friend Horry, a cup, said yesterday morning, “I am very cold!” I asked, “Why?” He said, “I was put in the refrigerator, so that my owner could drink fruit juice coldly from my body! I feel very cold now!” Kenny was a red handkerchief. He said proudly to Horry,“I am the best on Earth! I can help you dry up, but you need to give me some money!” Horry was angry, and they disliked each other. Baby was a beautiful green handkerchief. She was very generous, she helped Horry to dry up.
In the afternoon, everyone needed to work except me and other sports equipments. It was sunny and hot today, and I needed to exercise. I went to the football field with my owner happily. I thought I could make many friends. I made a good friend today. He was a red and write football. He was called John. His owner was my owner’s friend. After the football match, some football players were angry, some were crying, some were happy. My owner had won the match, so he was happier than before.
When I came back home with my owner, everyone wanted to know who won the match,. After my owner gave me a bath, I dried myself. I went to the storeroom and told everything to my best friends. I had become a football commentator. They felt excited and entertained. Finally, I said, “Our owner used his feet to kick me to the gantry. Although I was very tried, I was happy. Our owner has won the match and at the end, it was a 1:0!”
Everyone had slept, but Horry did not sleep. He said, “My owner said I was very old and want to throw me away.” I said, “You don’t need to worry, our owner does not have too much money, if things could be used, he will not throw them away.”
Ten years later, I was very old and could not run with my owner, so he put me into the storeroom and I could not play with him anymore. But I could remember the happy times. I needed to sleep for a long time.
In the afternoon, everyone needed to work except me and other sports equipments. It was sunny and hot today, and I needed to exercise. I went to the football field with my owner happily. I thought I could make many friends. I made a good friend today. He was a red and write football. He was called John. His owner was my owner’s friend. After the football match, some football players were angry, some were crying, some were happy. My owner had won the match, so he was happier than before.
When I came back home with my owner, everyone wanted to know who won the match,. After my owner gave me a bath, I dried myself. I went to the storeroom and told everything to my best friends. I had become a football commentator. They felt excited and entertained. Finally, I said, “Our owner used his feet to kick me to the gantry. Although I was very tried, I was happy. Our owner has won the match and at the end, it was a 1:0!”
Everyone had slept, but Horry did not sleep. He said, “My owner said I was very old and want to throw me away.” I said, “You don’t need to worry, our owner does not have too much money, if things could be used, he will not throw them away.”
Ten years later, I was very old and could not run with my owner, so he put me into the storeroom and I could not play with him anymore. But I could remember the happy times. I needed to sleep for a long time.
Football live
Hi, my name is Kiki. I am a football. I always run in the football field in the sunny day. Yesterday day morning, my best friend Horry, he was a cup. He said, “I am very cold!” I asked, “Why?” He said, “I gave put in the refrigerator, so owner could drink the fruit juice coldly into my body! Now, I feel very cold!” Kenny was a red handkerchief. He said proudly,“I am the best things on the world! I can help you to clear the water, but you need to give me some money!” Horry was angry, so they disliked each other. Baby was a beautiful green handkerchief. She was very generous, she helped cup to clear up his water.
Afternoon was come, everyone needed to work among me and some things which was about sport. Today was sunny and hot, I needed to have a sport. I went to the football field with my owner happily. I could have many friends. Today, I made a good friends, he was a red and write football. He called John. His owner was my owner friends. I could listen someone was angry, someone cry, someone was happy. Today, my owner wins the football match, so he was happy more than before.
When I came back home with my owner, very one wanted to know the match, who win. After my owner gave me a bath, I gave clear my water on my body. I went to the bedroom and told all the things to my best friends. Now I became a football speak aside. I said sincerity, they felt excited and did not felt bored. Finally I said, “Owner used his lag to play me to the gantry. Although I was very tried, but I was happy. So owner won the football match and the end, it became 1:0!”
Everyone was sleep, but Horry (cup) did not sleep. He said, “My owner said a was old and want to throw me away.” I said, “You no need to worry, our owner was not have to much money, if the things could use, he will not throw it.”
Ten years, I was very old and I could not run with owner, so owner put me to the storeroom and I could not play with owner, but I could remember. I needed to sleep to a long time.
20090705
Alex Was Famous - amended by Phyllis
BBQ newspaper 7th June, 2009 Sunday
A child called Law Chun Yin (Alex) solved a criminal case in Brazil. Alex was only twelve years old, but he had learnt a lot after this. This story is about a case of Amazon Rainforest airplane disappearance. Alex was so famous around the world. This story became a story book and a movie. He could be a leading role in the movie with a famous movie star called Jacky. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~!
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This was very amazing, I was very happy, too. It was because I could be a famous child in the film industry. And when I went to school by bus, many people said I was very clever and wanted to have my autograph. I was very happy. When I went to school, too many reporters took many photos of me. My principal Mr. Lee called me to his offices and said I would get a“Clever Child”award on Monday. When I went into my classroom, my best friend Johnny asked, “How much money did you get to be the leading role of the movie?’ I answered, “I got $193,000” Other children said I should buy them books, food, game points, cars, NDS, PSP, and many other things. I thought, “Fame is not a good thing!”
After school, some children in another class who did not like me sat by me on the bus and said, “Alex , you are my best friend, can you buy a game card for me?” I was very angry and thought, “He has a lot of money in his wallet. When I was not famous, he always said I was stupid and told me not to play online games.”
I never said anything and they only sat in another bench. When I went back home, some reporters took some photos of me. I was very annoyed. Then I ran back home.
I ate a lot for dinner. My mummy and my daddy did not need to work. But we could eat a lot of good food. When I was eating, my mother shouted, “Quick, get up! No time for you to waste!” I woke up and thought that everything was a dream. And I later read the newspaper about the Amazon Rainforest airplane disappearance, I thought, “Oh, it was true…”
A child called Law Chun Yin (Alex) solved a criminal case in Brazil. Alex was only twelve years old, but he had learnt a lot after this. This story is about a case of Amazon Rainforest airplane disappearance. Alex was so famous around the world. This story became a story book and a movie. He could be a leading role in the movie with a famous movie star called Jacky. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~!
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This was very amazing, I was very happy, too. It was because I could be a famous child in the film industry. And when I went to school by bus, many people said I was very clever and wanted to have my autograph. I was very happy. When I went to school, too many reporters took many photos of me. My principal Mr. Lee called me to his offices and said I would get a“Clever Child”award on Monday. When I went into my classroom, my best friend Johnny asked, “How much money did you get to be the leading role of the movie?’ I answered, “I got $193,000” Other children said I should buy them books, food, game points, cars, NDS, PSP, and many other things. I thought, “Fame is not a good thing!”
After school, some children in another class who did not like me sat by me on the bus and said, “Alex , you are my best friend, can you buy a game card for me?” I was very angry and thought, “He has a lot of money in his wallet. When I was not famous, he always said I was stupid and told me not to play online games.”
I never said anything and they only sat in another bench. When I went back home, some reporters took some photos of me. I was very annoyed. Then I ran back home.
I ate a lot for dinner. My mummy and my daddy did not need to work. But we could eat a lot of good food. When I was eating, my mother shouted, “Quick, get up! No time for you to waste!” I woke up and thought that everything was a dream. And I later read the newspaper about the Amazon Rainforest airplane disappearance, I thought, “Oh, it was true…”
Alex Was Famous
BBQ newspaper
A child called Law Chun Yin (Alex) clear up a criminal case in
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This was very amazing, I was very happy too. It was because I could be a famous child in the filmdom. And when I went to school by bus, many people said I was very clever and wanted to have my signature. I was very happy. When I went to school, to many reporter take many photo of me. My principle Mr. Lee called me to principle room and said you with got a “The clever child”aware in Monday (Day C). When I went to my classroom, my friends- Johnny question, “How many money did you have when you be the leading role in the movie?’ I said, “I could got $
I never said anything and the only sat in another chair. When I went back home, I needed to walk on the less than honorable or just path. Some reporter take some photo of me too. A was very impatient. After I walk on the less than honorable or just path, I went back home.
At home, I ate the dinner of many food. My mummy and my daddy no need to work. But we could ate many good food. When I ate it …
My mother said, “Quick get up! Not time could you butter one's bread on both sides.” I know it was a drum. And I watch the newspaper about Amazon Rainforest airplane disappearance, Law Chun Yin I think, “Oh- it was…”
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