Disguiser and Jack

Tom was a disguiser and he always helped the people in African. One day, an Africian went to his office, and he said, “Dr. Tom, could you helped me to be a star and made famous in the world ok?” Tom said, “Which star did you want to be?” The man said, “I want to MJ!” Tom shouted, “Why? He had died already!” The man said, “I was very poor and I want to be rich!” Tom asked, “What’s you name?” The man said, “Jack!”

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After a few days, Jack went to the USA and he went to there by airplane and he started to find a record label. The supper star in the USA was all came from the record label, “Letter Star”, just like the Jesse McCartney, he was a famous star and he was very young in the USA. Many fans that were younger they liked his too. “West life”, was a famous band in the USA. Jack found a place to live and he worked in a restaurant and a fast food shop.

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He had to work everyday, he wanted to join the “Little Star” tryout, but he did not have enough money to join it. One day, the disguiser, Tom went to the USA and he told to Jack, “There were twenty thousands for you, your friends and family were waiting your song and money to help them became rich!” Jack got the money and he sang songs everyday.

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The day before the “Little Star” tryout, Tom helped Jack to face lift. Jack’s sound was the best singer in his village. Jack always sang after work, and he was very nervous when he was singing in the tryout. After he sang, he felt relieved and he was waiting the result. Jack saw his idol, Jesse McCartney, he was singing in the stage.

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Jesse McCartney was the review in the tryout too. There were a lot of fans and people watched the tryout, however Jack knew it after the show. Jesse McCartney said the result after the singing, “The new stars to be our member have three singers, and they are called Sam, Ken and Jack!” Jack was very happy and the three boys went up the stage and sign a contract there.

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Jack was very hard in the Little Star and his two partners, Ken and Sam originate a band in the Little Star, and the band called East Man. Jack was the tonic in the band and Sam was a guitarist. Jack helped his family and friends became rich, but the disguiser disappeared after Jack became the member in the Little Star.

A Dream Had Happen - amended

It was my dream to go to Japan, and now, my dream would start. My best friend, Johnny, and I went to Japan for about two months and started our work. I wanted to go to Japan when I was small. Why did I like Japan? It was because there were a lot of comics in Japan and my favorite comic was called BLEACH. Japanese comics are very popular in Hong Kong and Japan.

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Hong Kong comics were very boring and I didn’t like it. Today, we would go to Osaka and we needed to find our leader in Japan. He was called Sam, and he was half-Japanese. Sam knew Chinese because his mother was Chinese. We went to a Japanese hot spring to check the water to see when was the last volcano eruption. I was a geologist and Johnny was my partner.

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When we saw the hot spring, we were amazed that we had both dreamt about before. We both saw a monkey in the hot spring in the dream. We kept finding the monkey and it was there. We were scared, because the volcano would erupt in our dreams. We rushed to our car and the volcano erupted.

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We panicked and rushed to Sam’s home. Sam was shocked after we told him what happened. He asked us, “What happened in your dream after you got here?” We kept thinking, but we could not recall anything. After a few days, I remembered that someone would be my girlfriend and then I woke up.

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I was overjoyed that my dream had ended, but what about Johnny’s? Had his dream ended? When I bought newspaper near our hotel, there was news about the volcano we had been to. I was shocked that the volcano was the Japanese experiment for checking the temperature of the volcano. The monkey belonged to the Japanese laboratory, but what about my girlfriend? Would it come true? It confused and disappointed me.

After a month, a reporter called Cindy went to our studio and had an interview. She looked just like my girlfriend in my dream. After a month, Johnny went back to Hong Kong, but I didn’t. I had a girlfriend in Japan.

Went to Japan was my dream, and now, my dream would start. My best friend, Johnny, and I went to Japan for about two month and started our work. I wanted to go to Japan when I was small. Why I like Japan? It was because Japan had a lot of comic and my favorite comic was called BLEACH. The comic my Japan was very famous and in Hong Kong, comic was very famous too. The comic was all came from Japan.

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Hong Kong’ comic was very bored and I did like it. Today, we would go to Osaka and we needed to find our leader in Japan. He called Sam, and he was Japanese. Sam learned Chinese already. His mother was Chinese. We went to the Japan’s hot spring and cheeked the water that how long occurred volcano eruption before. I was a geologist and Johnny was my partner.

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We were very amazed that Johnny and I went her in our dream. We knew there was monkey in the hot spring in the dream. We found and found and there were a monkey there too. We were scared, because the mountain would have a volcano eruption. When went to our car quickly. After a few minutes, the mountain volcano eruption.

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We were very scared and went to Sam’s home quickly. Sam was amazed that there were two people in his home. After we said the thing for him, he asked, “What will happen after you went here?” We thought and thought, but we could not thought anything again. After a few days, I thought it that someone would be my girl friend and then, I awaked.

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I was very happy that the dream was finish. It made me happy, but how about Johnny? Did his dream finish? When I bought a newspaper near our hotel, there was news about the mountain which we went there before. I was very amazed that the mountain was the Japanese experiment for cheek the mountain how hot about the mountain. The monkey was their too.

Show Off - amended

Hong Kong’s gap between the rich and the poor has widened. There were a lot of rich students in a school on the Hong Kong Island and they all lived in luxurious homes. Many students own designer labels and showed them off to each other. In Form 1A, all the students were rich. Form 1B was for clever children.

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The most beautiful student in Form 1 was called Jenny and she was from Form 1B. In Form 1A, a student called Ben loved Jenny long time ago, but Jenny did not know. One day, Jenny went to the Form 1A classroom and wanted to get a book from her friend, Cindy. Suddenly, a lot of boys surrounded her. All the boys gave her many things, like Iphone 4 and a few bags. Jenny was very scared and she ran away quickly.

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The next day, Ben and other two boys went to Form 1B and they gave money to everyone. Ben told them to take care of Jenny. Ben was the only child in his family and his family was very generous. Ben got $4000 as his pocket money each month. He gave an Iphone 4 to Jenny, but she did not want it. Ben was very sad. He thought she did not like Iphone 4, so he bought a lot of LV bags to her. Jenny did not want to hurt him, so she received them.

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After a few days, Jenny knew why Ben always gave her presents. Ben loved her, Jenny liked him too. Jenny was not rich, but she was not poor too. Ben’s family may dislike her family because she was not rich. One day, Jenny forgot to bring the math book, many classmates gave her their math books quickly. Jenny was very confused, but she did not know Ben gave money to her classmates to take care of her.

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Jenny asked Cindy, “Why do my classmates take care of me?” Cindy answered, “Ben gave money to your classmates and told them to take care of you!” Jenny was very angry and told Ben that money was worthless. Money was not something to be wasted. If Ben spent money to make his classmates his entourage, he would waste his money. Jenny said, “Don’t waste anymore money. We could know each other again.”

Show off

Hong Kong was a place which was the gap between the rich and the poor has widened. A school in Hong Kong Island had a lot of rich student and they were all come from luxurious home. Many the students had designer labels and showed of with each other. The Form one class A, all the children was rich. The class B was the clever children class.

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One day, a student who was so beautiful in the hold form one. She was called Jenny. In the class A, a child called Ben. Ben love Jenny long time ago, but Jenny did not know. One day, Jenny went inside class A and wanted to get a book from her friend’s Cindy, suddenly, a lot of boys containment her. The all boy gave her many things, like Iphone 4, bag. Jenny was very scared and she ran away quickly.

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Next day, Ben and other two boys went to class B and they gave the money for everyone. But everyone needed to make Jenny know Ben loved her. Ben was the only child in his family and his family was very generous. Ben had pocket money about $4000 one month. Ben bought an Iphone 4 to Jenny, but Jenny did not want. Ben was very sad; he thought he did not like Iphone, so he bought a lot of LV bag to her. Jenny did want to hurt him, so she got it.

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After a few days, Jenny knew why Ben always gave her many things. Ben loved her. Jenny was not rich, but she was not poor too. If Jenny loved with him, Ben’s family may be disliked her family was not rich. One day, Jenny forgot to bring the math book, her classmates gave her quickly. Jenny was very question, but she did not know Ben gave money to her classmate to take care her.

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Jenny asked her friend Cindy, “Why the classmates take care of me?” Cindy answered, “Ben gave the money to your classmates and tell them to take care of you!” Jenny was very angry and found Ben to talk with him. She told to Ben that money was worthless in the world. Money was a thing made you to use, not to rise. If you used the money to make people entourage you, that you were raising money. Did not raise money any more, we could learn each other again.