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Good Bye, World Trade Centre-amended

It was Kenny’s birthday today, so he didn’t need to go to work. When Kenny was shopping with his wife, he saw an airplane crashing into the World Trade Centre and he ran there. He was a chief of firemen and went to the fire engine to wear a protective gear and help the people in the building.

When Kenny wanted to go inside, there was a second airplane
crashing into the building and the 89th floor was on fire. There were many firemen inside and could not go out. Kenny was very worried and went inside quickly. When he went inside, there were rubbles falling down and blocking the exit. Kenny avoided the rubbles, but he fell on the floor. He saw his other team members going to the back door and he went after them too.

Suddenly, Kenny heard a little girl
cry loudly. Kenny turned back and saw the girl. He wanted to help the girl, but he may die. Kenny’s team members, Ken, shouted, “Kenny, I am coming, help the girl!” So Kenny ran to help the girl carefully. When they wanted to leave the World Trade Centre, he saw many rubbles flying down. Kenny was very scared and wanted to run outside quickly, but Ken did not have enough time because he was carrying a girl.

Ken was Kenny
’s best partner, so he went back to save Kenny and the girl. When they went outside, the building collapsed and there were many people inside. When Kenny and Ken went out, there were many firemen smiling, “Good job, Kenny!”

The
firemen went to drink some water and suddenly, they saw a man inside the building and Kenny went to save him. The man was George Bush’s relative, Ben Bush. If they did not help him, they would lose their work. So, Kenny went inside and used a fire hose to put off the fire. When he went inside, the exit was blocked. Many people died.

Kenny and
Ben went to a toilet, so that they could be safe. Then, the building collapsed. Kenny’s team members went to find them. Ken heard someone shouting, and it was Ben. Although Ken found Ben, Kenny died. George Bush gave Kenny a prize and said he was a brave man after two days.

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