20081021
A world without...
Write a story about you waking up one day to find that any one of the following has not been invented:
1. glasses
2. air-conditioner
3. television
4. telephone
5. computer
6. car
7. aeroplane
8. book
9. camera
10. light bulb
1. glasses
2. air-conditioner
3. television
4. telephone
5. computer
6. car
7. aeroplane
8. book
9. camera
10. light bulb
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THINK ABOUT:
1. what the world will become?
2. how can you change the situation?
ALICE IN THE WONDERLAND SEQUEL - amended by Phyllis
When Alice got up, she saw a rabbit running fast. “It was a rabbit in my dream!” Alice shouted and ran after the rabbit. Her sister ran with Alice too. “Oh no, help me!” Alice shouted again and fell with her sister into the hole.
They walked and walked. Suddenly, a man wearing a hat called Hatter ran to their left. “Where is this place?” Hatter murmured. “I know, it is the other world. Let’s go there！” said Alice happily. A mouse fell into the hole and said quickly, “Hi I am…” “You are Mouse！” Alice said.
"We ought to go into our house, or else we will die. There’s no food and water here. Help us please!” Alice and her sister cried.
A caterpillar lay down on the ground and said, “Babies, go away from this place faster! If you don’t run away, you will be killed by the Queen and King of Hearts. Let’s go to the stairs beside the hole, quickly!”
The playing cards, the King and the Queen surrounded the two girls. “They are stupid!” all the playing cards shouted. “Music, quick!” the King ordered and danced.
Song:
King was angry, Girls walk slowly,
King was coming, Girls was running,Help…Help…Help Help…Help…HelpCatch you…Catch you.. Help you…Help you…
The playing cards caught the two girls. “Drink the magic potion to make you bigger!” Cheshire cat laid on the tree and shouted！ Alice became bigger and bigger and exclaimed, “Go back to you heart house, and don’t use Dodo and Hedgehog to play golf again！”
Finally, Alice and her sister went back to their house. Sometimes they would go back to the hole to check if the king had treated the animals well.
They walked and walked. Suddenly, a man wearing a hat called Hatter ran to their left. “Where is this place?” Hatter murmured. “I know, it is the other world. Let’s go there！” said Alice happily. A mouse fell into the hole and said quickly, “Hi I am…” “You are Mouse！” Alice said.
"We ought to go into our house, or else we will die. There’s no food and water here. Help us please!” Alice and her sister cried.
A caterpillar lay down on the ground and said, “Babies, go away from this place faster! If you don’t run away, you will be killed by the Queen and King of Hearts. Let’s go to the stairs beside the hole, quickly!”
The playing cards, the King and the Queen surrounded the two girls. “They are stupid!” all the playing cards shouted. “Music, quick!” the King ordered and danced.
Song:
King was angry, Girls walk slowly,
King was coming, Girls was running,Help…Help…Help Help…Help…HelpCatch you…Catch you.. Help you…Help you…
The playing cards caught the two girls. “Drink the magic potion to make you bigger!” Cheshire cat laid on the tree and shouted！ Alice became bigger and bigger and exclaimed, “Go back to you heart house, and don’t use Dodo and Hedgehog to play golf again！”
Finally, Alice and her sister went back to their house. Sometimes they would go back to the hole to check if the king had treated the animals well.
"said"
- murmur / whisper (say quietly)
- shout / yell / cry (say loudly)
- scream 尖叫
- ask / question 問
- explain 解釋
- exclaim 興奮地大叫
- order 命令
20081020
ALICE IN THE WONDERLAND SEQUEL.
When Alice was got up, she saw a rabbit ran faster. “It was a rabbit on my dream！”Alice shouted and ran after the rabbit. Her sister ran with Alice too. “Oh no help me！”Alice shouted again and threw with her sister on the hole. They walked and walked. “Where is this?” Duchess said smelly. “I know, it is the other world.” let’s go to there！”said Alice. “Hi I am…” Mouse said. “You are Mouse！”Alice said. “We ought to went to our house, help us please,” the two girl said.
When Alice was got up, she saw a rabbit ran faster. “It was a rabbit on my dream！”Alice shouted and ran after the rabbit. Her sister ran with Alice too. “Oh no help me！”Alice shouted again and threw with her sister on the hole. They walked and walked. “Where is this?” Duchess said smelly. “I know, it is the other world.” let’s go to there！”said Alice. “Hi I am…” Mouse said. “You are Mouse！”Alice said. “We ought to went to our house, help us please,” the two girl said.
Caterpillar said “Baby went to this place faster, if you didn’t ran away, you will died by King of Hearts, let’s went to the share beside the hide, quickly,”
“There are stupid” all the playing cards man shouted. “Music, quickly” the King said.
Song:
“There are stupid” all the playing cards man shouted. “Music, quickly” the King said.
Song:
King was angry, Girls walk slowly,
King was coming, Girls was running,
Help…Help…Help Help…Help…Help
Catch you…Catch you Help you…Help you…
The playing card man caught the two girls. “Eat the magic potion to made you bigger,” Cheshire cat shouted！ Alice became bigger and bigger and shouted “went to you house, don’t use Dodo to play golf！”
Finally, Alice and Eaglet went to there house, sometime, they went to the hole to visited king it is took to the other animals good?
Help…Help…Help Help…Help…Help
Catch you…Catch you Help you…Help you…
The playing card man caught the two girls. “Eat the magic potion to made you bigger,” Cheshire cat shouted！ Alice became bigger and bigger and shouted “went to you house, don’t use Dodo to play golf！”
Finally, Alice and Eaglet went to there house, sometime, they went to the hole to visited king it is took to the other animals good?
20081019
Fairy tales
Write a sequel 續集 to ALICE IN THE WONDERLAND.
words you may use:
words you may use:
- evil (very bad)
- lovely 可愛
- kind (good-hearted)
- playing cards 紙牌
- magic potion 藥
Characters in Alice's Adventures in Wonderland:
Alice
The White Rabbit
The Mouse
The Dodo
The Lory
The Eaglet
The Duck
Bill the Lizard
The Caterpillar
The Duchess
The Cheshire Cat
The Hatter
The March Hare
The Dormouse
The Queen of Hearts
The Knave of Hearts
The King of Hearts
The Gryphon
The Mock Turtle
Alex newspaper - amended by Phyllis
Today, there was a small argument, and a father was hit in the eye!
It goes like this…The father wanted to take his two sons to the park. When they went out of their flat, there were other two men in the lobby. One was called Ben, the other Tony and Tony’s girlfriend Ying.
When the two men and one of the children went into the lift, Ben suddenly said angrily, “Get out, stupid!” “Wait for the other lift, this one is ours, baby!” Tony shouted. The child’s father was angry and took his children into the lift first. The other two men hit the father’s eye. Ying used a bag to hit the father’s back. A child used his father’s phone to call 999.
The father had to stay in the hospital for two months and the police arrested the other two men.
(145 words)
It goes like this…The father wanted to take his two sons to the park. When they went out of their flat, there were other two men in the lobby. One was called Ben, the other Tony and Tony’s girlfriend Ying.
When the two men and one of the children went into the lift, Ben suddenly said angrily, “Get out, stupid!” “Wait for the other lift, this one is ours, baby!” Tony shouted. The child’s father was angry and took his children into the lift first. The other two men hit the father’s eye. Ying used a bag to hit the father’s back. A child used his father’s phone to call 999.
The father had to stay in the hospital for two months and the police arrested the other two men.
(145 words)
Alex newspaper
Alex newspaper
Today, there were small argument, but a father is hit in the eye
！
It was about this...
The father wanted to take his two sons. When they went out their house, the other two men. One was call Ben, the other was Tony and Tony’s girl friend call Ying. When two men and one child went to the lift, suddenly “went back stupid,” Ben angry said. “Wait the other lift, this lift is us bye！ bye！” Tony shout. The child’s father was angry and took their children in the lift first. Two men fight the father’s eye. Ying use a bag to fight the father back. The one child used his father phone to call 999.
Today, there were small argument, but a father is hit in the eye
！It was about this...
The father wanted to take his two sons. When they went out their house, the other two men. One was call Ben, the other was Tony and Tony’s girl friend call Ying. When two men and one child went to the lift, suddenly “went back stupid,” Ben angry said. “Wait the other lift, this lift is us bye！ bye！” Tony shout. The child’s father was angry and took their children in the lift first. Two men fight the father’s eye. Ying use a bag to fight the father back. The one child used his father phone to call 999.
The father ought to stay hospital two moths and the police arrest the other two men.
By Jenny Chan
20081012
"SOS” superman helps me? -- Amended by Phyllis
Halloween is on 31st October. Five people went to a mountain on that day. They were Ben, Jenny, Ken, Tony and Sam.
When it was 11 p.m., they stayed in the mountain. They had dinner there. They went to the forest at midnight. “Help me！” Ben suddenly screamed. Many monsters caught Ben away.
When the monsters brought Ben to another forest, they stopped when they were next to some yellow trees. There were many witches.〝You have to become Peter Pan！”the witches shouted. Then, the witch used a curse to make him into Peter Pan. “At one o’clock Ben will became an evil man called Peter Pan,” shouted a witch.
The other four children were trying to save Ben, and they saw the trees turning from green to red to blue to, finally, black. “I think we went to a ghost forest,” said Sam. “Let’s go out of the forest.” When they turned back, a ghost caught them and put them into a jail.
In the jail, they saw Ben again. ”Ben, why didn’t the monsters catch us, but only you?” asked Ken. “I don’t know！” Shouted Ben. A man opened the jail door. “I think he is Batman！” murmured Ken. “No, he is Spiderman！” “Hi, my name is Superman,” the man said. Suddenly, a witch, a ghost, a vampire, a werewolf, a wizard, Tinkerbell, an invisible monster, Frankenstein and God of Death came. Superman used super hand to make them run away.
When the children and superman went out of the forest at 1 a.m., Ben flew in the sky and became Peter Pan！”Superman, you have to die now！Bye-bye！” Peter Pan said angrily. Superman suddenly became huge and used super light to turn Peter Pan back to Ben. Finally, the five children went back to their house and fell asleep quickly.
(319 words)
(319 words)
『SOS』 superman helps me?
31stoctober is Halloween, that day have five people gone to a mountain.
They were Ben, Jenny, Ken, Tony and Sam.
When it was eleven O’clock, they stay in the mountain. They ate dinner in the mountain too. Eleven O’clock they went to the forest. 「help me！」 Ben said. Many Jesus caught Ben away.
When they ran after Jesus, they saw the trees were green turn red turn blue turn............................. Finally turn black. 「I think we went to a ghost forest.」said Sam. Let’s went out forest. When they turn back, a ghost caught them in the jail.
In the jail, they saw Ben again.「Ben why did Jesus not caught us, only caught you?」said Ken. 「I do not！」said Ben. I man open the jail door. 「I think he is batman！」said Ken. 「No, he is Spiderman！」 said Tony. 「Hi my name is superman.」the man said. Suddenly, Jesus, Witch, Ghost, Vampire, Werewolf, Wizard, Tinkerbell, Invisible monster, Frankenstein and God of Death came superman used super hand to made them ran away.
When Ben, Jenny, Ken, Tony, Sam and superman went out the forest, Ben fly in sky and became Peter Pan！「superman you had go to died now！bye！bye！」Peter Pan said. A superman became big and used super light to made Peter Pan became Ben. Finally, the five children went to their house and slept fast.
31stoctober is Halloween, that day have five people gone to a mountain.
They were Ben, Jenny, Ken, Tony and Sam.
When it was eleven O’clock, they stay in the mountain. They ate dinner in the mountain too. Eleven O’clock they went to the forest. 「help me！」 Ben said. Many Jesus caught Ben away.
When they ran after Jesus, they saw the trees were green turn red turn blue turn............................. Finally turn black. 「I think we went to a ghost forest.」said Sam. Let’s went out forest. When they turn back, a ghost caught them in the jail.
In the jail, they saw Ben again.「Ben why did Jesus not caught us, only caught you?」said Ken. 「I do not！」said Ben. I man open the jail door. 「I think he is batman！」said Ken. 「No, he is Spiderman！」 said Tony. 「Hi my name is superman.」the man said. Suddenly, Jesus, Witch, Ghost, Vampire, Werewolf, Wizard, Tinkerbell, Invisible monster, Frankenstein and God of Death came superman used super hand to made them ran away.
When Ben, Jenny, Ken, Tony, Sam and superman went out the forest, Ben fly in sky and became Peter Pan！「superman you had go to died now！bye！bye！」Peter Pan said. A superman became big and used super light to made Peter Pan became Ben. Finally, the five children went to their house and slept fast.
20081007
Supernatural world
Here are some ideas:
1. Characters:
Jesus
Witch
Ghost
Vampire
Werewolf
Wizard
Peter Pan
Tinkerbell (fairy)
Invisible monster
Superman
Frankenstein
God of Death
2. Powers
Fly
Float in the air
Fireproof
Bulletproof
Invisible
Waterproof
Elastic
3. Places
Graveyard
Bat cave
Church
Alley
Haunted house
1. Characters:
Jesus
Witch
Ghost
Vampire
Werewolf
Wizard
Peter Pan
Tinkerbell (fairy)
Invisible monster
Superman
Frankenstein
God of Death
2. Powers
Fly
Float in the air
Fireproof
Bulletproof
Invisible
Waterproof
Elastic
3. Places
Graveyard
Bat cave
Church
Alley
Haunted house
Counting
10 ten (“-ty”)
100 one hundred
1,000 one thousand
10,000 ten thousand
100,000 one hundred thousand
1,000,000 one million
100 one hundred
1,000 one thousand
10,000 ten thousand
100,000 one hundred thousand
1,000,000 one million
All abouy eating - Phyllis' amendments
It is a sad news report. A shop selling fishballs, “siu mai”, fake shark’s fin, fried noodles, fried chicken wings, fried sweet potato, red and green bean soup, congee, sesame soup, sweet potato soup, French fries, apple pie, wanton, shrimp dumpling and soya milk in Causeway Bay. You can eat five bowls in two minutes because they are too yummy.
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Although pop star Jenny Leung opened this shop, two people were food poisoned there. Many policemen went there to close the shop. Jenny was fined for HK$300,000 and the staff had to go to jail for two months. Many visitors said Hong Kong food is not good now. Jenny’s fans said she did not work hard and her songs were not good.
Alex Law Report
20081006
All abouy eating - Alex's original writing
Hong Kong Newspaper
It is a sad news report, a one shop selling fish balls, siu mai, fake shark, fin fried noodles, fried chicken wings, friend sweet potato, red/green bean soup, congee, sesame soup, sweet potato soup, French fries, apple pie, wanton, shrimp dumpling and soya milk shop in Causeway Bay. You can eat five bowls in two minutes because it is to mummy. Although pop stars Jenny Leung open this shop, two people food poisoning in that stall. Many policemen go there to close the shop. Jenny has to fine for 30000 money and the worker have to go to jail two moths. Many visitors said Hong Kong food is no good. Jenny fans said she no work hard and her song is no good.
Alex Law Report
20081005
Brainstorming
These are some ideas:
Hawker’s stall
Sell: Fishballs, “siu mai”, fake shark’s fin, fried noodles, fried chicken wings, fried sweet potato, red/green bean soup, sesame soup, sweet potato soup, congee, roasted beef, French fries, apple pie, wanton, shrimp dumpling, soya milk,
Food poisoning
Closing down (“the stall is closing down”)
Broke (“the hawker is broke.”)
Pop stars – Jenny Leung
In the form of a newspaper article (tense: past tense)
Married – divorce
Fans – upset
Customers scared of HK food
Interviews
Hawker
Go to jail
Fined for $....
Pop star invested in the shop
Haunted shop
Bats
They can eat 5 bowls at a time
Hawker’s stall
Sell: Fishballs, “siu mai”, fake shark’s fin, fried noodles, fried chicken wings, fried sweet potato, red/green bean soup, sesame soup, sweet potato soup, congee, roasted beef, French fries, apple pie, wanton, shrimp dumpling, soya milk,
Food poisoning
Closing down (“the stall is closing down”)
Broke (“the hawker is broke.”)
Pop stars – Jenny Leung
In the form of a newspaper article (tense: past tense)
Married – divorce
Fans – upset
Customers scared of HK food
Interviews
Hawker
Go to jail
Fined for $....
Pop star invested in the shop
Haunted shop
Bats
They can eat 5 bowls at a time
20081001
Eating Place
We've discussed today about eating. Pick an eating place we've talked about (restaurant, cafe, dai pai dong, tea house, etc) and write a story about it. Think, for example, about what would happen in that place? What kind of people will be there? What kind of food will they order? What will they talk about?Try to write more this time :-)
Somewhere in time - amended by Phyllis
Do you want to go back to a happy year? I want to go back in time, when I was 6 years old. When I was P.1, I never did much homework and on weekdays we can go to some interesting places. In the picture, my sister and I were in Stanley and we were using clay to make a cartoon model. I always liked playing and never did much homework, and that's why I would want to go back to that period.
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