Alone - amended

Last Friday after school, I went back home and discovered that my family was on a trip already. They left five hundred dollars to me, and I would live in Hong Kong alone for a week.

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The next morning, I got up late, because my mum was not at home, and no one woke me up. When I got up, it was eleven o’clock. I felt very bored and I just watched television and slept. I did not cook and ordered takeaway. After dinner, I thought to myself, “I can’t stay at home all the time. I should go outside!”

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On the third day, I also got up late, but I went to Mongkok in the afternoon. I found a lot of clothes and bags there. I was ecstatic and wanted to buy everything. I was exhausted after shopping. I went to McDonald’s to buy something to eat and took a rest. I was very happy and it was the best Sunday I have ever had. After the rest, I went back home myself. I forgot I was alone, and I was ecstatic too. When I went back home, I was very tired and I felt asleep quickly.

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On the forth day, I got up at nine o’clock. I forgot to go to school, and I watched television at home. When it was ten o’clock, someone called me on the phone. “Hello, this is Miss Chan, Law Chun Yin’s homeroom teacher. Can I talk to him please?” “Oh my Gad, I forgot to go to school!” I answered. “I think I should take a rest today!”

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I panicked because I did not have any reason for not going to school. I was very scared and I just wanted to sleep. I did not want to think. The next day, I got up early and I went to school early too. I finally made use of the alarm function of my mobile phone.

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When I arrived at school, I discovered that I forget to bring my money for lunch. In the afternoon, I was starving. So I used my Octopus card to buy food. After school, I stayed there and played basketball. I was enjoying my time alone, and my family went back too.

Alone

Last Friday after school, I went back home and I discovered my family had all in a trip already. They put five hundred dolls to me, and I will live in Hong Kong alone for a week.

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Next day morning, I got up late, because my mum was not at home, and no one took me up. When I got up, it was eleven o’clock. I felt very bored and I just watched TV and slept. I just bought my lunch and dinner outside. After dinner in the evening, I thought myself, “I can’t stay at home only, and I should go outside myself!”

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The third day, I also got up late, but I would go to Mong Kok in the afternoon. After lunch, I went to Mong Kok. I went there, and I found many clothes and bags. I was very excited and I wanted to buy it. I was vey tired after my shopping, and I went to McDonald to buy some things to eat and took a rest. I was very happy and it was my best Sunday too. After the rest, I went back home myself. I forgot I was alone, but I could also happy too. When I went back home, I was very tired and I slept quickly.

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The forth day, I got up at nine o’clock. I lost I should go to school, and I watched the TV at home. When it was ten o’clock, some one called the home telephone. “Hello, I’m Lingnan Secondary’s teacher. I want to find Law Chun Yin.” Teacher said. “Oh my gad, I forgot to go to school!” I answered. “I think I shall have a rest today!” I said again.

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I was very scared, because I did not have any cause why I did not go to school. I was very scared and I just want to sleep. I did not want to think anything. Next day, I got up early and I went to school early too. I thought I lost my phone; my phone could take me up.

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When I went to school, I discovered I forget to bring my money for lunch. In the afternoon, I was very hungry. I used my Octopus to buy food. After school, I stayed there and played basketball there. I was very happy that time alone, and my family went back too.