Piano - amended

Once upon a time, there were two boys living in a village in Greece. They were twins. The older brother was called Pia, and the younger brother was called No. Pia was the bravest boy in the village, and he always went to the forest to explore. It was his favourite hobby. No was a timid boy, and he always stayed at home to invent musical instruments and waited for his older brother to cook for him.

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One day, Pia went to the forest on Mount Olympic by himself. It was the first he went to that place and he was very happy. Suddenly, he heard the sound of a musical instrument. He was very interested. When he went closer, he saw a girl playing a harp. Pia loved the sound and he went to the mountain everyday.

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The next day, Pia did not go back home. His younger brother was starving, but he did not know how to cook. Pia listened to the music, and he felt asleep. He got up the next afternoon. No was very hungry, and he went to the mountain to find his brother. He felt scared and shouted, “Pia, where are you? I am very hungry!”

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Suddenly, the girl who played the harp went in front of him. No was very scared and he wanted to leave. No cried, “Pia, where are you? I am terrified!” Pia heard his younger brother crying and said, “No, I’m coming, don’t go away!” Pia went towards No’s voice but he could not find No. He kept finding for a night, but it was in vain.

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Pia was miserable, and did not go to the mountain from then on. He stayed at home and waited for his brother to come back. The girl who played the harp was named Jenny, and she was a music goddess. She loved Pia, so she played the harp everyday to attract him. When No went to the forest, she was furious and did not want No to bring Pia back home. Jenny killed No that night. Before that, No whispered, “It is a new musical instrument, I made it at home yesterday! Pia like white and I like black!” Then, Jenny killed No.

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Jenny was disappointed because Pia stayed at home, and did not leave home. Jenny felt guilty, and she named the new musical instrument “Piano”. Jenny played it everyday.

Piano

Once upon a time, there were two boys lived in a village in Greece. They were twins’ brother. The older brother call Pia, and the younger brother called No. Pia was a brave boy in the village, and he always went to a forest to explore. It was the best thing for him. No was a boy who was not brave, and he always stay at home to invented musical instruments. He also waiting for his older brother to cook for him.

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One day, Pia went to the forest himself. He went to the forest in the Olympic Mountains. That day, he was the first time to go to that place. Pia was very happy to go there. Suddenly, he listened a sound like a musical instruments. He was very interested on it. When he went too close there, he saw a girl was playing a guqin. Pia loved the sound and he went to the mountains everyday.

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Next day, Pia did not go back home. His younger brother was very hungry, but he did not know how to cook. Pia listened the music, and he felt asleep and he spelt there. After a day, he got up in the afternoon. His brother was very hungry, and he went to the mountains to find his brother. He felt scared and shouted, “Pia brother, where are you? I am very hungry!”

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Suddenly, the girl who played the guqin went in front of him. No was very scared and he wanted to leave there. No shouted loudly and cried, “Pia brother, where are? I am very scared!” Pia heard his younger brother was crying and he said, “No, I was coming, don’t go away!” When Pia went to the place where No was staying when he shouted, Pia did not see his brother.

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Pia was very sad, and he did not go the mountains from then on. He stayed at home and waiting for his brother back. The girl who played the guqin called Jenny, and she was a music god. She loved Pia, so he played the guqin everyday. But that day, Pia’s brother came, and she was very angry and did not want No to bring Pia back home. Jenny killed No that night. Before Jenny killed No, No said, “It is a new guqin, I done it at home yesterday! Pia like white and I like black!” Then, Jenny killed No.

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Jenny was very sad, because Pia stayed at home, and did not leave the home. Jenny felt sorry to Pia, and he gave a name to the new musical instruments, Piano. Jenny played it everyday.

Change in My Life - amended

I work everyday, and I have only got work in my life. I am a delivery man on Hong Kong Island. I like watching football matches and I watch the Premier League every weekend. My favourite football team is Manchester United. Rooney was my favourite football star. I am a part-time referee in the Hong Kong First Division Football League. It is my dream to be a World Cup referee.

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One day, when I was very bored at work, our boss said we would have a new colleague that day, and he was a famous lawyer in Hong Kong. He was called Brandon. He went to our office and I needed to teach him how to deliver the documents to the destinations. I did not understand why a famous lawyer needed to work in our firm. My boss said, “Brandon is a famous lawyer in Hong Kong, and he is on a reality TV show, and he will work with us for a few days!”

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Although he was famous, I did not know who he was. It was because I disliked watching television, and I only sleep and work every day. Brandon came to our office, and I taught him everything. He asked me, “How long have you worked here?” I answered, “I have worked here for three years.” He asked again, “Why don’t you have the target to get a better job?” I was excited, “I want to be a referee!” He did not understand, “Why not be a full-time referee?” I was a bit angry, “The Hong Kong government does not give us a lot of money to build sports ground, and they only care about the economy! I cannot be a full-time referee because my job only gives very little money, and I do not have enough money to live!” He was very surprised. I thought he did not have enough knowledge of the world.

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We started to work, and I felt he was a lazy boy and he always complained during work. After work, he said to me that he felt it was more relaxing than making milk tea. I told him, “Hong Kong is a place with a big gap between the rich and the poor. Some people have an easy job, but some need to work hard!”

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After a week, he left and he invited me to work at his chambers. I was very happy and worked there. Sometimes, he would watch the football match when I am the referee.

Change in My Life, Change,

Work everyday, and I only work in my life. I am a deliveryman in Hong Kong Island. I like watch football match and I watch premier league in every weekend. My favourite football team is Manchester United. Rooney was my favourite football star. I always go to be a referee in the Hong Kong Football Match. I want to be the World Football referee and it is my dream.

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One day, when I was very bored to work, our boss said we will have a new worker that day, and he was a famous lawyer in Hong Kong. His name was called Brandon. He went to our office and I needed to teach him that how to delivery to the destination. I was very surprised that why a famous lawyer needed to work in our office. My boss said, “Brandon is a famous lawyer in Hong Kong, and he join the series, change, and he need to join our work for a week!”

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Although he was famous, I did not know who he was. It was because I dislike watching TV, and I only sleep and work. Brandon came to our office, and I touch him that how to send the letter or goods for the receiver. He asked me, “How long do you work here?” I answered him, “I work here for about three years.” He asked again, “Why do you not have a target to up?” I answered, “I want to be a referee!” He said, “Why do not to be a specialty referee?” I answered, “Hong Kong do not give us a lot of money to plan a sports grounds, and only plan money in Hong Kong economy! I can not be a specialty referee, because it has only little money for me, and do not have enough money to me to live!” After I said it, he was very surprised. I thought he do not have enough knowledge.

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We started to work, and I felt he is a lazy boy and he always felt hard for working. After work, he said to me that he felt it was most relax than making milk tea, I only said to him, “Hong Kong is a place who is an extreme disparity between the rich and the poor place. Some people can work relaxed, but some need to work hard!”

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After a week, he left and he invited me to work in his Law office. I was very happy and work there. Some time, he would watch the football match when I am the referee.

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