The Children Who Fell Into The Trap -amended

Jacky went to school by bus himself everyday when he was nine years old. It was because his parents were very busy and did not have time to take Jacky to school or back home. The students of his primary school could go out for lunch when they turned nine years old. Jacky was the best student in his school, and he was a prefect.

When Jacky left school during lunch, he saw two men who looked like kidnappers in the newspaper. When Jacky went to school again after lunch, he saw the two men used two dolls to lure two girls who were eight years old. Jacky used twenty dollars to buy those two dolls for the two girls. The men did not say anything and went away. Jacky said to the two girls, “These dolls are yours now, but the men are not nice guys. They used toys or sweets to lure little children and kill them!”
The two little girls knew they were wrong and did not talk to any person they did not know.

Jacky walked to school the next day, because he had enough time. He saw a boy in his class leaving with the two men. They gave a Gameboy to the boy and took him to a car. When the car left, Jacky ran to school quickly and told the teacher. But the teacher thought Jacky was telling a lie and did not think it was real.

Jacky had no choice but to go back to his classroom and wait for the boy to come back. After an hour, the boy was not back and the teacher found Jacky. “Where is the boy? His parents said their child had already left home!” Jacky answered, “He was taking into a car and disappeared!” So Jacky waited for the teacher to call the police. The policemen arrived at the school. Jacky saw the man again at during lunch time and told his friend to call the policemen to come.

The man went somewhere else, so Jacky ran after him and found their headquarters. There were many trees and he could not go inside easily. Jacky called the police and went inside to check who was inside. There were many children who looked very hungry. Jacky saw his classmate. However, they were locked behind a door.After a few minutes, the policemen arrived and caught all the kidnappers.

It was the turning point of his life. Jacky became a policeman when he grew up.