20090412

Alex's Tour 1 - amended by Phyllis

“Good night, mum!” I said.

Suddenly, I see a creature which looks like a mobile phone. It runs quickly in the sky. I open the window and shout, “Why can you run in the sky?” But it does not say anything. “Oh no! I can run in the sky.” I say. There are many fruits that can speak and walk. I think, “What’s wrong?” When I am about to go back home and sleep for a while, a strong wind blows me away. I shout, “Help! Help!”

When I get up, I see a lot of fishes, rabbits, lions, dogs, cats and ants flying in the sky and talking happily. Suddenly, a cup shouts, “What are you doing?” I explain, “I am watching you!” She is angry and shouts, “You are not in our team! We need to catch you! Everyone, catch him!” And she runs with her family and friends after me. I run, run and run, and I see a giant, and he sees me too! He says, “Where do you come from? Why are you so short?’’ I am very frightened and run away quietly.

Suddenly, I see my mother flying in the sky and saying angrily, “Get up quickly! Do you want be late for school?”

I got up and went to school quickly. When I went to school, I saw a creature running in the sky. I thought, “What happened?"

~It is the end of Alex's tour1~
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