Somewhere in time 5 years - original writing

Somewhere in Time 5 years

Do you want to go to a happy year? I want to go in time, when I was 6 years. When I was P.1, I never did much homework and the weekday we can go to some interesting place. In the picture, my sister and I use the clay to make a cartoon. I like away playing and never do much homework, so that I want to during that period.

Old family albums

1. Find an old picture of yourself which was taken in the happiest moment of your life.
2. Tell me why you would choose to be that child in the picture again.

Questions to think about:
a. What year was it?
b. What were you doing in that period? (e.g. you were in kindergarten)
c. What were you doing in the picture?
d. How did you look like?
e. What was your life like during that period?
f. Why would you like to revisit that period?

My Very Own Shop (amended by Phyllis)

Japanese Shop

The shop will be a Japanese shop called “COME Japan”. It will be in Causeway Bay. It will be like SOGO, but this shop will have ten themes. The themes will be forest, ocean, boats, car, music, sky, toy, ball, food and airplane. There will be a butterfly house and a castle house. The staff will dress up as cartoon characters. It will be open 24/7. We can use flyers, posters and emails to promote the shop. The main colour for the decoration will be green. The entrance fee will only be $5.

My Very Own Shop - original writing

Japanese Shop
The shop is a Japan shop. This is on Causeway Bay. It like SOGO, but this shop will have ten themes. Will be forest, ocean, boats, car, music, sky, toy, ball, food and airplane theme. The are butterfly house and castle house. The service people make up about character It open about 24-hours. We can use flyer, poster and email. The decoration is green. The name is (COME Japan ). The entrance only 5＄.

My Very Own Shop

Imagine that you were given a big sum of money to build your own shop. You have to convince your investor to invest in your shop by writing him a proposal.

Questions for thoughts:
1. What kind of shop? (Japanese products)
2. Where (location)? (Causeway Bay? Taikoo? Hang up the boat to the sky?)
3. Theme? (marine theme? Boats?)
4. Opening hours? (24-hour? 10am to 9pm?)
5. Staff? (uniform? Costumes? What kind of people will you employ?)
6. Promotion? (flyers? Posters? Emails? banners? Advertisements? Fireworks? )
7. Decoration?
8. Name?
9. Entrance fee?
10. Different floors? (castle? Butterfly house?)
11. Special services? (telescope renting service?)

Remember to think BIG!

Tense: future tense (“will”, “is going to”, “won’t”)

Picture Story (amended by Phyllis)

Once upon a time, there were some “super-magicians” living in the sky and in a tree house. We could not see them because they wore invisible coats, and we could only see their shoes. They could make people fly in the sky. The magic was a mystery. The magic was special and could amaze you. Some magicians played pranks on thieves. Some people said they were like policemen. Now the super-magicians lived on earth but we could not see them.

When the super-magicians lived in the magic world, they did not have money to buy anything. Alvin was one of them. When he was young, is family was poor and did not have much food to eat. So Alvin went to the magic school to learn some magic. When he was 12 years old, he used magic to make more gold so his family was not poor. They could have more food and were not hungry everyday. Now, he has built magic schools on earth and is living here. He is a famous magician. Everyone goes to his school to learn about magic. The magic world has disappeared.

Reminder:
BECAUSE and SO cannot appear in the same sentence.

Picture Story (original writing)

pictures used: 10, 7, 5, 1, 6

type of story: magic story

Once upon a time, there were some “super-magicians” lived in the sky and tree house. We can’t see them because they wear invisible coats, so only saw their shoes. They could make the people fly in the sky. The magic is a mystery. The magic is special and can make you amazed. Some magicians were playing pranks on thieves. Some people were say they same of policeman. Now the super-magicians live in an earth but we can’t see them.

When the super-magicians lived in the magic world, they did not have money to buy something. When Alvin was young, his family were poor and not much food to eat. So Alvin went to the magic school and learn some magics. When he was 12 years old, he used the magic to make more gold so his family was not poor. They can eat more food and not hungry everyday. Now, he build magic schools in earth and live here. He is a famous magician. Everyone go to his school to learn the magics. The magic world disappeared.

Picture Story (homework for 21st Sep)

Create a story based on at least 5 pictures from below. Feel free to reorder them. (you can use the words next to the pictures)

1. floating house
2. umbrellas, raining night

3. clown, circus

4. superman, fly

5. magician
6. invisible people

7. furniture, bed, hanging on a tree
8. colourful pigeons, chair
9. balloonman
10. invisible man

Rewriting the Ending of "Charlie and the Chocolate Factory"

The Chocolate Factory was closed from 1950 to 2003. Willy Wonka put five golden tickets in 5 chocolate bars. If you had a golden ticket, you could go to thechocolate factory which had been closed for 53 years. Five children got the golden ticket. They were a computer boy, a fat boy, a competitive girl, Charlie, and me (a rich girl).

In the factory, the fat boy drank the chocolate milk in the chocolate river. Buthe was too fat, so he fell into the river. I wanted Charlie to lose the competition, so I told a monkey to catch Charlie. He wasthrown to the sweet mountain, but the competitive girl pushed me to the mountainas well. The computer boy and the competitive girl went onto the boat, and thecompetitive girl was thrown into the ice-cream pool. Finally, the computer boy won the competition and he got the factory. I was very angry and I never talked to my Dad.

Tongue Twister of the Day: she sells seashell on the seashore.

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also practice the /v/ sound