20100131

Write a story about a building collapsing. (400 words)

Words you may use:
  • collapse
  • World Trade Centre
  • terrorist attack
  • terrorism
  • Al-Qaeda
  • commercial building
  • boss
  • fire hose
  • protective gear

Ben born in a poor family, there were many people lived in their house. His aunt did not like him, so she always hit him. Ben had a smaller brother-- Ken and his father love more than Ben. Ben felt very unfair and worked hard. He thought, “If I work hard, my father will love me fairly!” Although his family was poor, but they could gave Ben and Ken to school. When Ben studied at school, he worked very hard. So his subject was very good and he was famous at school. But someone were disliked him and wanted to injure him.

One day, Ben went to school and suddenly a child came, and used a bottle of water to topple on Ben’s head. Ben was very sad and cried. The child ran away quickly and quietly. When Ben went to school, he told the teacher. The child was come from a rich family and he called Jason. Jason’s father is the school of principal. Jason was very disliked Ben and always juggle him. Although Ben was work hard, he could not study happily at school.

Ben always went to a book shop, and read the fashionable magazine. He wanted to be a famous designer. He wanted to make his dream come true, so he always went to clothes shop and references the clothes. Ben was very happy went he left the primary school, because Jason could not juggle him.

When Ben was eighteen years old, he got 10A in Examination. He went to France and he studied art. He met a famous designer and his name is Raymond. Raymond always designed some interesting clothes. He worked for fifty models on the world. Raymond was Ben’s image. After Ben done his study, he became Raymond’s assistant and helped him some small works.

Ben always helped Raymond hard, so Raymond liked him very much. Another people thought he was not good for did anything, and they always did not work with him. Ben was very sad and left to Raymond’s office. Ben used his salary to open a fashionable company. There were many model invited him to design clothes and he became famous in the USA.

When Ben was twenty-four years old, he was very famous on the world, and many model wanted to find him to design clothes. Ben design’s clothes always appeared in many model magazines. He got more than sixty model design award and twenty- twenty Model Company.

20100129

Being famous (410 words)

"from zero to hero"

Letter disappear

There were three postmen went to work. Suddenly, two men appeared and used blinded two postmen with a chemical spray and robbing them of two mailbags containing 1,100 letters. When the two men ran away, a policeman helped them and called 999. The three postmen went to the police office after left the hospital.

After two day, the three postmen got three letter, it write, “If you tell the things of the two men who robbed the letter, we will kill you!” The three postmen were very scared, because the told the things that the robber’s wear. Now all the policemen were finding them. So they found the Private detective—Alex.

Alex heard this thing and said, Alex said he will help them. When the three postmen left the “Alex’s Private detective office”, the three postmen saw there were many men and the like the Triad. When the men wanted to hit the three postmen, there were four police car came. The Triad’s people left away. They three postmen were very scared and thought, “Who called the police?” Alex appeared and said, “Me!”

They three postmen were very amazed and asked, “Who did you know this thing?” Alex said, “Is was because there was Mongkok, but there were not many people shopping here, that made me know there were something made the people did not come here. It was Triad, so I called the police that made you safe. Than, Alex asked the man’s wear and the postmen answered, “The two robber were wear a green clothes and they were not very tall.”

Alex went to the New Territories and thought, “If the robber is Triad, it is not easy to find them. So he invented two people to found. There were seven Triads in the New Territories. When the two people came back, they said, “The robbers are come form Yuen Long. Alex went to the office and found the Triad. The Triad sell the medicine and there were four letters were had the medicine. If police heard this thing, the Triad may disappear and they need to found the letters!

Alex went to police office and said all the things. Than, the police caught the Yuen Long Triad. After Alex done this case, he was famous of it. But the Triad was not disappeared, and he was very scared of the Triad. He did his other care hard.

20100119

Robbery of postmen

Words you may use:
Postman – postmen
Rob
Robbers
The New Territories
Secret
Motive
Evidence
Court
The triads
Gangsters
Date of death


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