When Andersen was eleven, his father died. He went out on that day. Andersen played with other children and best friend happily. Suddenly, an angel, “Your father will die, quick go back home quickly yourself!”He did not know was going on, and he continue to play with other children. He told other children and his best friends a special story. He said happily, “Once upon a time, there was a girl, she didn’t have a name. Her mother very loved her, but her father disliked her too. Her mother died, and her father ordered her to work. If she could not earn money, she could not have food. On Christmas night, her father ordered her to work too. She needed to sell matches… I will stop here, I can’t think the end of the story.”
Suddenly, his mother told him, “Your father is doing, you need to come back.” He was very worried and he ran back home quickly.
When he came back home, he saw his father sleep in the bed. His mother cry, “Quick find a doctor, quick!” Andersen run and run and run. When he came to the pack again, he saw his friend to! But he had no time to play, so he ran away. So his friends start to dislike him and do not play with him.
When he came to the clinic, he shout, “My father did not feeling well, can you come? Doctor!” So, the doctor went after Andersen quickly. When he went home, he needed to go to the park. His friend threw a rubbish and shout, “I don’t want you become to our!” Andersen was angry but he did not fight to them, and he and the doctor went quickly.
When they went back home, his mother cry, “Andersen, you father died!” Andersen cry and went to his bedroom slept quickly.
20090125
Cinderella's Birthday Adventures - revised by Phyllis
Once upon a time, there was a girl called Cinderella. Her mother died, so her father married again. The stepmother had two daughters. They did not like Cinderella, so they ordered her to do all the housework.
It was Cinderella's birthday. She did not need to do any housework because it was her birthday. Although she did not do have to do the housework, she could not go to the prince's party. The prince’s birthday was on that day too!
After the stepmother and her daughters went to the party, Cinderella cried, "If I could go to the party, I’d..." Suddenly, a fairy called Alex flew near Cinderella and said, "I can take you to the prince’s party! Come to try these beautiful dresses."
When Cinderella came to the prince's party, the prince saw Cinderella and ran after her. The prince brought a birthday cake for her, and they talked all night long. He said, "Could I marry you?" Cinderella was happy, and she brought all the clothes and the fairy to the palace.
When the stepmother went back home, she could not see Cinderella, so she and her daughters needed to do all the housework, housework, housework...
Once upon a time, there was a girl called Cinderella. Her mother died, so her father married again. The stepmother had two daughters. They did not like Cinderella, so they called her to do all the housework.
Cinderella' s birthday was today. She did need to do all the housework because today was her birthday. Although she did not do all the housework, she could not go to the prince's party. Prince 's birthday was today too!
After they went to the party, Cinderella was cry and said, "If I can go to the party, I will..." Suddenly, a fairy called Alex flew near Cinderella and shouted, "I can take you to the prince' s party! Come to wear this beautiful dresses"
When Cinderella came to the prince' s party, prince saw Cinderella and ran after her. Prince brought a birthday cake for Cinderella to eat, and they talked about all night long. Prince said, "Could I marry you?" Cinderella was happy, and she brought all the colthes and the fairy to the palace.
When Cinderella' s stepmother went back home, she could not saw Cinderella, so they needed to do all the housework, housework, housework, ...
Cinderella' s birthday was today. She did need to do all the housework because today was her birthday. Although she did not do all the housework, she could not go to the prince's party. Prince 's birthday was today too!
After they went to the party, Cinderella was cry and said, "If I can go to the party, I will..." Suddenly, a fairy called Alex flew near Cinderella and shouted, "I can take you to the prince' s party! Come to wear this beautiful dresses"
When Cinderella came to the prince' s party, prince saw Cinderella and ran after her. Prince brought a birthday cake for Cinderella to eat, and they talked about all night long. Prince said, "Could I marry you?" Cinderella was happy, and she brought all the colthes and the fairy to the palace.
When Cinderella' s stepmother went back home, she could not saw Cinderella, so they needed to do all the housework, housework, housework, ...
20090118
The Double - revised by Phyllis
The earth, is anyone my double? This story is about my double. Today morning, when I read the newspaper, I saw an England prince looked like me. He was tall and he liked playing table tennis and his hobby was dancing. Now he is in Primary 6.
Then, I went to England with my family during the summer holidays. I bought are beautiful clothes there, but I didn’t near to spend any money. Do you know why? Suddenly, a policeman came and said, “Your mother is finding you!” I quest, “But, my mother is a mainland Chinese and my father is a Hong Kong person, and I am a Hong Kong person too!” The policeman said, “You are THE PRINCE OF ENGLAND!” Then I knew the policeman thought I am the prince.
The policeman called the other policemen to catch me to the palace. When I went into the palace, I saw a lot of money and a lot of beautiful pictures. Then, I saw the Queen of England.
I shouted, “My mother is not you, she is a Chinese and I live in Hong Kong!”
Finally, the policemen found the prince. So she said, “Sorry! Here is some money for you! Sorry!”
Then I took the￡10,000 and I went back to Hong Kong with my family quickly.
Then, I went to England with my family during the summer holidays. I bought are beautiful clothes there, but I didn’t near to spend any money. Do you know why? Suddenly, a policeman came and said, “Your mother is finding you!” I quest, “But, my mother is a mainland Chinese and my father is a Hong Kong person, and I am a Hong Kong person too!” The policeman said, “You are THE PRINCE OF ENGLAND!” Then I knew the policeman thought I am the prince.
The policeman called the other policemen to catch me to the palace. When I went into the palace, I saw a lot of money and a lot of beautiful pictures. Then, I saw the Queen of England.
I shouted, “My mother is not you, she is a Chinese and I live in Hong Kong!”
Finally, the policemen found the prince. So she said, “Sorry! Here is some money for you! Sorry!”
Then I took the￡10,000 and I went back to Hong Kong with my family quickly.
The earth, is anyone he is my double? It story about my double. Today morning, when I read the newspaper, I saw an England prince look like me. He is tall and he like play table tennis and his hobby are dancing. Now he is P.6. Then, I went to England with family when the summer holiday. In there, I buy are beautiful clothes, but I don’t near to waste any money. Do you no why? Suddenly, a policeman came and said “You mother is finding you!” I quest “But, my mother is China people and my father is Hong Kong people, I am Hong Kong people too!” The policeman said “You are ENGLAND PRINCE!” Then I knew the policeman think I am the prince.
The policeman called the other policemen to catch me to palace. When I went in to the palace, I saw a lot of money and I lot of beautiful picture. When I saw the England prince’s mother.
I shout “My mother is no you, she is china’ s woman and I live in Hong Kong!”
Finally, the policemen found prince too. So she said “Sorry! There are some money, I give you! Sorry!”
Then I had this￡10000 money and I went bark Hong Kong with family quickly.
The policeman called the other policemen to catch me to palace. When I went in to the palace, I saw a lot of money and I lot of beautiful picture. When I saw the England prince’s mother.
I shout “My mother is no you, she is china’ s woman and I live in Hong Kong!”
Finally, the policemen found prince too. So she said “Sorry! There are some money, I give you! Sorry!”
Then I had this￡10000 money and I went bark Hong Kong with family quickly.
20090111
Ø read the newspaper
Ø watch TV news
Ø At school
Ø Listen to the radio
The earth, is anyone he is my double? Is was a story about my double
Today morning, when I read the newspaper, I saw a England prince look like me. He is tall and he like play table tennis and his hobby is dancing. Now he is P6.
Then, I
Ø watch TV news
Ø At school
Ø Listen to the radio
The earth, is anyone he is my double? Is was a story about my double
Today morning, when I read the newspaper, I saw a England prince look like me. He is tall and he like play table tennis and his hobby is dancing. Now he is P6.
Then, I
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